Pirate's Blade Returns

There are many poisonous points in the early stage. A Tianlong man can't even get a good sharp knife.

Are you kidding me? Will the Celestial Dragon's bounty be approved?

Rabbit ears + long pink hair + kimono + blade counter + dodge yes sword energy = Yae Sakura

The author is very stubborn. Otherwise, my grades would not be so bad, and I would have written 3k per day during the special period of employment until now. It is true that the purpose of writing a book is to gain public recognition, but it is also a very personal matter, because in the end I am the only one who writes it. This is my first time writing a book in a real sense. I can't cover everything and have no bugs. This is a matter of ability and my way of thinking. I don't ask for readers' understanding. If I don't write well, I won't get recognition, which is nothing to say. I always expected that writing would bring me the pleasure of expressing myself, but the reality brought me only pain and anxiety. A very funny thing. Although I say that I welcome everyone's comments and suggestions, in fact, what I fear most every day is opening the comment area... Maybe it's just because the author is a blind person and can't listen to other people's opinions. No matter the reason, I kept telling myself to keep writing, just to hone my writing skills and improve my experience, but the anxiety in my heart was increasing day by day I was thinking that maybe I had chosen the wrong direction from the beginning, or simply because I had no talent... The poor recommendation scores in the past few days have undoubtedly made things worse. I kept asking myself, if writing articles only brings me pain and anxiety, then what is the point of me constantly updating? It's one forty in the morning, and my thinking is chaotic I'm not sleeping so much in the middle of the night, maybe I'm just looking for reasons and excuses for myself I don't want to deal with every book friend who has voted and commented, but I really can't go on like this meaninglessly Another: Happy May Day, the author will also take advantage of May Day to relax. Finally, I hope that all book lovers can do what they like and become the people they want to be. Finally, this is not a eunuch's declaration, at least... I hope it is not That's it

Hey, I'm convinced. As a time traveler, I have the best way to obtain abilities, and I also have a plug-in. When I don't have the ability, I actually want to go out and sail freely? I can accept it if you go to find the fruit, but you just want to go out. The same goes for the Golden Emperor, where he looks down on slaves and wants to save others. The question is, the premise for you to go is to see if you can buy the future empress, right? Are there only a few people who travel through time with online IQs?

In addition to the ability of the heroic spirit, the physical ability and the black knight will not die with bare hands! The other abilities really shine! Unlimited Sword System, King's Treasure and King's ArmyPower are the most exciting!

Keep it first, it will look good

The initial attraction of this book comes from the introduction of the bunny girl. Later, she was attracted to Elizabeth as an "older lolita". However, these two readable points are basically gone at the end. The bunny girl can also be said to have changed to another NPC, but Elizabeth only follows the protagonist, and then the scenes are inexplicably reduced and she becomes a passerby. It would be better to have her disappear in the shipwreck at the beginning.

I suddenly wondered about something. The protagonist went to sea on Kizaru's warship, and then encountered pirates and disappeared. So Kizaru must have survived, right? Kizaru survived and a Celestial Dragon disappeared, but no one from the World Government was looking for him? And there are newspapers in the One Piece world, right? Didn't the world government report the disappearance of the Celestial Dragons? There are so many logical loopholes

The Celestial Dragons are supreme in the world of pirates. If Aokiji dares to take action after hearing that the protagonist is a Celestial Dragon, it means that he ignores the title of Celestial Dragon, and then he does not need to be in the navy. And the author, is it possible that the design has many clothes and still has a main god? Someone actually knows Kizaru, he was not a general at that time! Speaking of meeting Ao Pheasant, as long as the protagonist reveals his identity and does not face Ao Pheasant alone, but speaks in front of many people, Ao Pheasant will never dare to do anything to the protagonist, and Wei Ming will personally watch over Aoki Pheasant until the call is over. Author, do you think the CP organization is just a decoration? Knowing that a Celestial Dragon was missing, no one dared to take action, except the Four Emperors, when he met someone who claimed to be a Celestial Dragon in public. I also have a suggestion for the author. If you want the protagonist to reform the world of pirates, it is best to use his identity as a Celestial Dragon to directly reform the government from top to bottom. It can be like the model in Navy Soryu's book. And the author, you probably don't know much about the dignity of the Celestial Dragons. The sudden death of a Celestial Dragon (when the protagonist is out at sea) is not that simple. It will cause a huge earthquake in the whole world, and the world government will directly use all its forces to find the murderer. There is no way that the protagonist would feel dangerous if he said anything like that. Moreover, most of the Celestial Dragons know each other, especially for a Celestial Dragon like the protagonist who is different from other Celestial Dragons. It is impossible for any Celestial Dragon to not know him.

So what is the significance of the setting of the protagonist, a Celestial Dragon?

When I first read this article, it was because the protagonist started out as a Celestial Dragon. It looks like it will be great. Turns out I was wrong, I was really wrong. This life is worse than that of a more awesome pirate. Keep a good knife out of reach. The sword donated to the Celestial Dragons was also stolen. I've wanted a Devil Fruit for so long, but I can't buy it. What do you call a Tianlong? Okay, these things are hard to come by, so I won't talk about them. As a result, you had a conflict with your colleague Tianlong. Let's not mention it. At this time, as long as you show the Tianlong's ID card, the matter will be reduced to a minor matter. Do you have to fight with him? Why should we look at the protagonist who is a Celestial Dragon in the beginning? The identity looks cool! Okay. Later, at the slave auction in the archipelago, I was tricked by an auctioneer. You are a Celestial Dragon, brother. As long as you sit in the seats specially arranged by the Tianlong people, they won't dare to lower the price for you. You just have to tease you and won't show your identity as a Tianlong person. What are you doing? You might as well start as a civilian and enter the navy, so what? Or how about sitting on a pirate ship? What's the use of doing this? The identity assigned to you is so useless that you don't need anything! Various blunt turns. You won't know what you are going to do until the end. You wouldn't call it a failure. There are only a few parts that are particularly well written throughout the whole process. I read your comments and those of other readers. If other readers give you advice and you argue with them and say you are stubborn, then let it go. Since you chose to write this novel, you are responsible for this novel. I have also written novels and know the difficulties of writing novels. But this doesn't mean you can't handle character relationships or character settings as an excuse for being a glass-hearted person. If the writing is not good, then change it. Then hone your writing skills. Practice handling character relationships and characterization. Many people give you well-intentioned advice. If what I see is that you and the other person are on the same level as each other. Reading pictures in novels is fun. I didn't come here to be upset. No one can have smooth sailing at the beginning. I was scolded badly when I was writing a novel. Then just change and practice, no big deal. It's not because you have a glass heart that you can ignore these reasons. Okay, I thought I could read a pretty good Celestial Dragon novel. As a result, the more I looked at it, the more angry I became. I hope the author can write better in the future. See you later.

Why don't you bring Robin with you? Is there a world-correcting power?

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