Don't Be Angry in Konoha

This typo is very familiar. I must have used my mobile phone to code it.

I feel speechless when writing Naruto like this. The protagonist is useless and the golden finger is as written. It would be better not to have anything. I can only do bad things but not good ones. Even my speech is restricted. It is even sadder than the Lonely Star. Writing it like this is completely eating away at the setting of Naruto.

There are a lot of typos, the author should review them before uploading.

Are you updating as you please? More updates are not enough.

Don't overdo it. First of all, if it was really invincible, why wasn't the third generation controlled? Is Danzo so kind-hearted? Moreover, the only function of the original work covering the reincarnation of the dirty land and affecting Mifune was also discovered. Bie Tian Shen was played by Kishimoto, and then he found it difficult to set up, so he simply gave it a name and stopped writing it. This kind of setting can easily crash, such as Boruto Ao

It's ridiculous to start with other gods. The kaleidoscope can actually change the will of the reincarnation eye. Why don't you go to heaven? If it's the reincarnation eye, it's more reliable! If the protagonist's will has been changed, you might as well become the protagonist and commit suicide. Besides, Shisui's mental strength is not as strong as that of the protagonist of the two lives.

One chapter of persuading people to quit, three golden chapters, you are poisoned right from the beginning, forget about the stupid name of the book and the person, the beginning is a lot of verbosity, nothing is explained, nothing is revealed, the words are as unclear as a lunatic, talking nonsense, and no useful information is revealed except the plot time.

Author, in your introduction, you persuaded him to quit, "Fat sheep, I will imprison your entire family." This is really poisonous and excessive!

Many plot settings are forced and awkward, which is really confusing.

The name is too silly, so I don't read it... ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

It must be said that a novel cannot have too much foreshadowing and leave it unexplored for a long time. Otherwise, it would be a blur and boring. Then the author writes about it and forgets about the foreshadowing.

I can't understand anything written in the first few chapters.

What's this dance about? I'm not reading a funny novel?

To be honest, the whole book embodies one word of deception. The book is deceiving people, the protagonist is deceiving people, and it is so disgusting that it deceives people.

To be honest, whether Konoha is under the control of the third generation or Danzo, Konoha will not be bad. It is a pity that Sarutobi and Danzo have completely ruined Konoha.

It's very interesting. Is there any new book?

It's endless fun, I don't have the patience to watch anymore.

Chapter fifty-seven, I couldn't stand it anymore. The early plot really gave me hope to keep watching! But there are too many typos and garbled characters! The fruit plate will not disappoint; every day 00000 to a group; Chapter fifty-seven, it's really impossible, everyone, come on...

Goodbye, abandoned. I am slowly playing with you through self-abuse. I don't want to accompany you anymore, little one.

It's another protagonist who doesn't want to practice. I don't want to watch it.

When I read Chapter 5, my own skills also cost points, which is a bit poisonous.

The front is fine, but the back is watery.

It's okay, above average, and worth a look.

What makes your name so great? Day and day

I originally came here after seeing the Naruto tag and wanted to see the youth of friendship, but it turned out that in the eyes of the protagonist, everyone else is just a tool, not even a human being. It doesn't matter if he is self-righteous. He won the Chunin exam against the Uchiha family's liar. But it's not like you've won an actual battle and you're still writing a book that's full of obscenities? A village of teammates is like shit. It's not the protagonist who thinks his teammates are fools, it's the author who thinks the readers are fools

The name Rixiang Ritian is really excellent.

It's funny in the same vein as the previous book.

There are too many typos in the novel, more than usual!

When will Sakura get out? .