Ashblade

I'm from the Warhammer Throne 🙂

Dislocated, awesome, grab the second floor

The Evil Fallen Form (1)

The Evil Fallen Form (2)

If it's TB, shouldn't you go find that man?

Warhammer is here. I heard about py.

I feel that the dialogue between the characters is too long-winded. The more long-winded it is during the battle, the villain dies because he talks too much.

Warhammer also came to support the author's friends.

I don't have time to comment, I'm going to post it as soon as possible🔥!

This cover is interesting, it's actually a terrifying blade

The fire has been extinguished, but the gods of the Black Soul World are still alive?

Is there Senior Sister Maria? ? ? ?

I think you don't take my fiery cat seriously! ! !

Six recommendation votes are given_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

Wow⊙∀⊙! , I haven't seen anyone write about DOTA for a long time, I'll keep it up first,

I am ashamed to say that I am a fan of the Souls series. I have played Dark Souls 123, and Bloodborne cannot beat the old priest 😭. It is so embarrassing. .

The writing is so messy. What is your main plot, adventure, spreading fire, revenge? What is your worldview, Dark Souls, Dota, or something else. Not everyone is Li Hongzhang, it all depends on who makes it. And the hodgepodge may not be delicious.

The author's writing is not rigorous enough, and he takes it too much for granted. The fight between the pig's feet and the murloc naga in Chapter 4 is at sea, but he actually writes that the murlocs are surrounding the ship with neat steps? Isn't it supposed to be swimming when a fishman swims in the sea? ? ? There is also the technology of the Keen tribe, including machine guns and snipers, which shows that their technology is quite advanced. You must know that the development of the military is the accompanying upgrade of easy-going technology. At least it has reached the level of World War II? Then in the battle between Naga and Pig's Foot, Naga exploded and didn't say what happened to the ship? So much fire around the pig's feet that the hull was destroyed? ?

It looks a little awkward. . I guess I play too many games. .

~~It feels like a big leap

Name: East Bell Frost Gender: Male Others: Author's discretion (Creed: Anyone whom my king points his finger at is my enemy) (Asking for a supporting role)

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I don't have any votes, but I see it's really good now. Please support me.

The author's skills are too immature, and he doesn't pay enough attention to the background of the game that appears. I feel that I can't read it and have no sense of involvement at all. I hope to work harder.

If you have any doubts, you can write them in the comment area, and I will reply when I see them. If it is indeed wrong, I will also modify it in the article This chapter is said to have no prompts, so if you raise some doubts in the original text, I may not be able to turn them over 🤝 That's about it.