Naruto: Sun to God Bless

The beginning is okay, but only the beginning is okay. The word count is okay, but there is too much nonsense, especially before 41 articles. Writing like this is very depressing and easy to discourage. Also, he came from time travel and had seen Naruto before time travel. I want to ask, since he has watched Naruto, doesn't he know about the Hinata branch and the clan? Let's talk about the overall situation: there is too much water, it is a bit poisonous, the protagonist is written as an idiot, the protagonist's intelligence is basically zero after traveling through time, and the content is old-fashioned. Although the characters are highlighted, the writing style is not good. The author's idea is good, but he really needs to work hard. By the way, when the author is free, he should read more novels written by authors with better writing skills to increase his knowledge. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The opening chapter is very good, and the author is a senior Naruto fan 😏😏😏. The reincarnation technique handles the relationship between relatives very well. It breaks out of the vicious cycle of not resurrecting Naruto's relatives and everything is OK. Many Naruto fan authors directly deal with it this way, which makes the family chapter feel disgusting. I don't know how someone with such a cold heart can have the will to protect. Everyone who has watched Naruto knows that there are many resurrection techniques in the later period. Travelers should know and cherish it more.

Can you die quickly? Don't embarrass yourself here

Read Chapter 25. I finally understand why this book sucks. For example, your twenty-five chapters can be written by others in ten pages, but you use 25 chapters. An extremely long-winded novel. Who would want to see it?

The highest level: elder, clan leader He controls everything about the Hyuga clan and is the decision-maker of the Hyuga clan. Second level: member of the Hyuga clan, Jonin If you have a distinguished status or are powerful, you can participate in certain decisions and put forward corresponding opinions. Level 3: Elite Chunin, in charge Participating in family management has certain rights and is the backbone of the Hyuga clan. Level 4: Chunin and below, regional managers of various trading houses, officials of various departments It is the most basic component of the Hyuga clan's ruling power. Level 5: Preparatory ninjas, employees of various firms, members of the Hyuga branch, civilians The ruled part. Level Six: Nominal Hyuga Separation Members of the Hyuga branch who do not enjoy the treatment of the Hyuga clan are the targets of bullying.

Who is the heroine? Mikoto, Hinata, Kaguya, Samui and Konan are all good.

Separation within a division 🤔

I feel like you're missing a cover. 😎

Soft fist? Eat me, the magnetic field rotates one hundred thousand times

The author hopes that the Byakugan and Tenseigan can be switched back and forth, so that all Byakugan abilities can be used during Byakugan

After reading Chapter 24, there are so many explanations. Why do you need so many explanations? Reading novels does not mean that the person who reads the novels needs to replenish his or her own brain. If you have questions, you explain so much that you lose the sense of involvement. Can you still read it? Can you change it? The writing is okay. That's your explanation, it's "tasteless, tasteless. It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away."

The synopsis is out, meaning TJ

Is the protagonist's bloodline like that of Otsutsuki in the universe like Momo, or is it the bloodline of Hamura on the moon?

Is there a female protagonist in the author's book? I hope to accept Kaguya Otsutsuki. After all, the main character's bloodline is as noble and powerful as Kaguya's.