The Strangest Store in the Whole World of Cultivation

I have read more than seventy chapters and will comment. I feel that the characteristic of this book is that its short stories are intertwined with each other and have a sense of silence. The protagonist is a witness and a ruthless businessman. No matter what the outcome is, it is the customer's choice. The position is very good and the story is also good. It is vivid, touching and connotative. It's very relaxing, but the first part may be a bit toxic. Anyway, it's still a good book. Come on, author.

My initial impression after reading this book: The author is too obsessed with writing "wonderful" short stories, which makes the main line and various branch lines read a bit strangely. The setting of the protagonist is even more inexplicable. In the early stage, in order to atone for a murder committed by his subordinates and to stimulate his terminal illness, he would willingly let his enemy kill him (the killer pretending to be a revengeful person was a failure. I was baffled by it. I don't know what the author wanted to express in this part. It seemed that he was just turning for the sake of turning). After birth, the main body is decadent in a small drugstore. The clones who have the same thoughts as the main body (this is the key point) do business ruthlessly. No matter who the target is, there is no unnecessary reminder or advice. The author also wants the story to have a profound impact. If you think about it carefully, this is simply a horror story, step by step to lure the protagonist in the side story to an unlucky death. The author is so scary! ! ! I'm afraid. It was originally a good idea but it had to be turned into a bloody drama. It's not surprising that the results were average. My advice to the author is: the author's writing style is suitable for female videos. Most of the people who read this genre are just to see the protagonist changing his ways to be invincible and pretending to be invincible. Boys will find it extremely uncomfortable to watch this.

If there is no water, it will probably become a god without any surprises.

This book is still a seedling, it's fairy grass! After all, Shennong tasted chicken flavor! Ahem Let's get to the point. The first picture at the beginning gives people a different feeling from other novels [my own experience] And then there is no noobs, no routine, and then Aunt Wang and Grandma Wei Shu burst into tears [minor spoilers] Secondly, the protagonist's character is the kind of good person who has strength but is not arrogant and helps others realize their wishes [Fog] The characters in the book have their own characteristics, so I won't spoil them one by one

In the brothers chapter, I feel that the author wanted to write the feeling of "all sentient beings are guilty and no one is unjust", but due to the lack of writing power, it turned into a piece of shit and a bad book... When I read it, I didn't feel that the world is unpredictable and fate makes people sad. Instead, I wanted to kill all the main characters one by one (. I typed a lot of words and sent them out, but they were all lost. I was too lazy to type them again, so I left it like this.

It is a story that can make people cry, and it is a story that can make people controversial. Sometimes simple terms of right and wrong are really not suitable to be applied to people. Author, your story is great.

After reading this book, the chapters about Granny Huai and Aunt Wang are quite comfortable. But when it comes to the story about Li Xiaolang and his family, the protagonist's "Buddhism" goes too far. The transaction with Li Xiaolang and Zhan An's transaction did not untie the knot of tragedy like the previous transactions. On the contrary, because of the transaction content provided by the protagonist, it contributed to the eventual tragedy. When Li Xiaolang wants to know whether his spiritual root has been stolen, the protagonist can provide some more reasons to let Li Xiaolang know that his brother is actually doing this to save him. Then the result of the subsequent transaction will not become a reason for pushing Li Xiaolang to do that stupid thing. The same goes for Zhan An later. When he had just lost his love and was not clear-headed, he sold his love in exchange for the ability of a scumbag. The protagonist here acts like a trading machine. Of course, the protagonist is not obligated to spend his energy to do unnecessary things, but the deal provided by the protagonist makes people who would not otherwise be tragic develop into a more tragic development. This plot is really uncomfortable, and even makes the protagonist look a bit annoying. I hope that the following plot can make the protagonist no longer so "Buddhist", or that the protagonist will not have a complete sense of belonging to this world, as if he is just playing a trading game of "earning enough willpower to go home".

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The last few chapters have felt a bit jerky The character descriptions lack a sense of empathy, come on.

The book is good, but too wordy. In fact, it can be streamlined. Why does it look a bit like a composition and not like a novel? It doesn't look cool at all. After watching it for so long, I feel like it has little to do with the main character! All are descriptions of supporting roles. Well, that's just my personal opinion.

After reading more than seventy chapters, I will probably tell you about my feelings about the brothers chapter. The author seems to want to write the feeling that "all sentient beings are guilty and no one is unjust", but there is not enough writing power to support it, so it becomes a bad debt for the supporting characters... When I read this part of the story, I didn't feel sad that the world is unpredictable and unpredictable. Instead, I was very irritable and wanted to stab the family to death one by one (. Maybe it's a problem with the characterization. , None of the main characters in this chapter is really likable. It's not that the characters are good or bad, but that they can't make people sympathize. The characters of these people all have their own points that can impress the readers, and they all have their hateful aspects, but the plot that should impress the readers doesn't impress them because of the lack of writing power. On the other hand, the evil they cause because of their inner desires is also very superficial and seems fake.

To be honest, it's a bit uncomfortable, as lovers will never get married. It was a disaster for Miss Yao and also for Mr. Zhan. He didn't know what the scene would be like after he woke up. Miss Yuanyuan is also a poor person. The shock of the death of her best friend coupled with the harm caused by the traitor has made her look like this and she is probably just seeking short-sightedness. / Come on, author, to be honest, this book looks really comfortable. I haven't felt this immersive in a long time. It would be nice if there were more chapters hahh

The pawnshop scene is mainly story-based, right? The author of the first few stories has done a good job of laying the groundwork, but this is the background of Xianxia. Well, I mean that the future stories will slowly reveal this world. I hope the author can learn from our orthodox mythology and introduce a few better plot changes. Slowly polishing this book will be 🔥. I feel like watching a TV series. The plot rises and falls well. Come on.

It's hard to say. In fact, regardless of whether they have the ability or not, most people really don't care about their own affairs. Not to mention strangers, even if you are a good brother, they may not be willing to lose profits to help you. This is a common behavior of an ordinary person. If it is true He wants to help, probably for the sake of the fellow villagers. After all, living here as a guest, he still has some sense of belonging to the fellow villagers. But in fact, this kind of thing varies from person to person. For him, the willpower itself is also a means of self-preservation, which can make his life better. Who doesn't want that, for example Say your monthly salary is 5,000. If you see a person who is in great need of help and is willing to accept help, will you give out 500 or even 1,000? You will probably say: "I don't have much money, but I can give you a way." This method is not necessarily better than helping him directly. , It might be more troublesome, but after all, you are not your own person. You will not use the best method right from the beginning. In fact, you still want to reduce your investment. People are very good at lying to themselves. In the end, there is no hope, so they will bleed again to save some regrets. This mentality can be put into other things. It's the same thing when you go up there. Even if you don't directly help, you feel uncomfortable all over. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is indifferent. As an online novel, this book can be said to be one of the best in shaping the protagonist, just like The Lord of Mysteries. Like Ryan, he has also been wise to protect himself. Our requirement for online books is not to instill morally corrupt ideas in people, but not to require that the protagonist must be a good person. As long as the book is positive, has good ideas, and is not easy to misinterpret, it is fine. It is a character, a character It is his soul. Different characters will also have different personalities. The author has already said that this is also foreshadowing, but it cannot be said that the protagonist of a book represents this book. Luotuo Xiangzi finally fell into depravity, but everyone knows what the book wants to express. Another example is Tiancan Tudou, The protagonists of his books are all the same. It can be said that they are not well portrayed and even make people dislike them, but this does not affect me from reading them. Anyway, the protagonist's pretentiousness has nothing to do with me. What I like is actually the supporting characters that he has unintentionally created well. Those books cannot be considered good, but the supporting characters have a positive meaning. This is an online novel, but the author has given it a real literary flavor. Subjectively, it conveys a positive message to us. It does not become blindly negative later on, but has slightly improved. This means that the author's positioning of the protagonist is still clear, that is, a person who is slowly growing up. So I think this book is real yet ideal. It is a normal performance for ordinary people and is not too disgusting. The above is my personal opinion. PS: In fact, I think the author should write a physical book or go to a newspaper or magazine to read it. The writing style is actually quite good. If I meet your boss, he might be willing to buy you a word for 50 cents.

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There are not many books that can still be read after more than ten years. Come on, I will give you six recommendation votes every day.

This is the best book I have ever read!

The author should use the protagonist's identity to tell various stories. I would like to make a few suggestions. The pace of the story should not be too fast, and the number of stories should not be too dense (that is, just one or two chapters into the next story after finishing this story). Then as the main line, the progress is really too slow. What can this city have? Not surprisingly, the next wish is to be the city lord or the pig chief. If possible, change the story to a different style, otherwise it will be easy to get tired of the aesthetic. The author probably wants to use Ye Changge to enter the world of cultivation. Then there is the portrayal of the protagonist. The portrayal of this protagonist is not as deep as the other supporting characters, and many things have not been written out. According to the author's writing method, I think I will stay in this city for 5-60 chapters. Also, you should rely on doctors to travel to other places

A few comments. First of all, I feel that the plot of the drugstore is unnecessary because there is nothing particularly exciting, it is just some daily life. However, it is better for this kind of invincible novel to focus on stories one after another. Secondly, the protagonist's way of thinking is too childish... (For example, the scene where he meets Zhang Cuicui). It does not feel like a mature and successful person before rebirth, and he always hangs out with the heroine... It also does not have the tolerance of the game of this kind of invincible store opening novel. In addition, I personally feel that the emotional scene is a bit awkward... It always feels like a bit too much force, and then the foreshadowing is not It's enough, but the outbreak is too sudden, and in the end it unfolds too slowly. A big world can be written, but it's still limited to one city... Various sects and grievances, ancient secrets, pretending to be an old man, everything is easy to write when the layout is spread out, and it can be expanded into multiple lines and then a big drama can be written. The situation is better. At present, warriors come and go… (The warriors in the world of Xianxia are really bad. It's not an exaggeration to say that they are ants in the future. There should be no profit in doing such a business.) In short, the subject matter is very good… but I feel that the layout and plot are still not good at the moment.

The writing is very good. Build a building 1st floor, 10th floor, 1000th floor, 1,000th floor seal

In this book, the plot of Zhan An is a bit far-fetched. Whether it's Xiaoya's death or Yuanyuan and Zhan'an's fall, the protagonist is always watching from the side. There are too many contradictions with the portrayal of the protagonist in the first half of the book.

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This latest story is really disgusting. It's too deliberate. It's not worth it for Yao Qin. I have low poison resistance. I'll subscribe now and leave. Farewell.

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The first part was okay, and it ended well and quite satisfactorily. The second part had some bumps in the plot, but I managed to finish it, but it was a bit depressing. It was too bloody. I read half of the third part, and basically skipped it. It was an absolutely bloody plot. For such a plot with incompetent supporting characters, the dismissal rate is a bit high.

It's been almost a year and you've only updated over a hundred chapters. What do you want to do?

I don't understand, isn't the depression in real life enough?

A bunch of stories about poor people, including the protagonist.

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