Ask About the Immortality

After reading it, the book generally has the shadow of a mortal, and there are a few things I want to say. The first problem of the protagonist is a demonic problem, which took almost half of the chapters of the book to solve. If Han Li is asked, it will be solved in ten chapters at most. It will definitely not be as big as Daybreak! It's tantamount to seeking death! The second question is that in my opinion, Jiujindan's combat power was almost the same as Han Li's before. Fighting was completely raw, and it is still the case now. Especially after the Nine Golden Eggs, there are many tricks, and it is estimated that they will fall into Han Li's hands. That Bai Ze is already finished, will he still wait for Xiaoyu to be reborn? Within a few breaths, Bai Ze was finished! The current combat effectiveness is much stronger than when Han Li's golden egg was perfect! Isn't being a Baize as simple as drinking water and eating? To put it simply, the battle is not rounded enough and very jerky! I feel in my heart that I can fight, but I am very timid when it comes to fighting! In the battle of Baiyun City, you have a level 9 demon and you are worried that your methods will be exposed and you will be killed! Han Li came, his face turned cold, and he probably died with just one finger of his flying sword! After seeing the current state, I am still timid and my thinking is not thorough enough! The whole thing looks fragmented! It's obvious that I've reached climax, and I'm withering.

Brief comment: I am a young detective, but by chance, I embarked on the path of cultivating immortality. I have the aura of the protagonist, so I often jump into battles and kill without mercy. Book title: "Asking the Immortal" Author: Zi Yueyi Keywords: Classical Fairy Tale, Mortal Flow, Passionate Blood, Catcher Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Book review text: The big waves wash away the sand, and I selected books from the entire library. "Ask the Immortal" gently jumped into my eyes, and it attracted me. "Asking the Immortal" is a good title, with a little bit of sadness, which made me unconsciously click on it to check it out. Zi Yueyi, I also like the name of this author. The book must be as elegant as the name. The introduction is neither complicated nor simple, and explains the problem just right. The opening chapter: "Mighty... Mighty..." Is very inspiring and successfully keeps the readers' attention on reading. The storyline reaches a small climax in the first chapter of the opening chapter, which gives a strong sense of immersion. Character setting: Male protagonist: Zhang Yifan, a 14-year-old young detective who dreams of becoming a detective. Plot: The first case at the beginning is a lawsuit between two farm men. One said that the other had stolen his cow, and the other said that he had not stolen it. Where did the cow go? Then the little catcher came to talk to Niu. I thought too much at that time, the story of cultivating immortality! I thought of Lao Tzu and Hangu Pass. I thought that by looking for the cow, the little catcher would be able to find the way to become an immortal and step into the world of immortality. However, the entire volume of this book is devoted to mortals. Zhang Yifan's ancestors passed down a set of powerful techniques called "Star Fire Technique". This technique has the effect of "controlling the fire of a star, setting fire to a prairie fire and cooking mountains." The side effect is that excessive force is not enough, and there is a risk of going crazy. A foreshadowing was given in the third chapter, and then he really became possessed by the devil. It was not until the demon refining in the eighty-one chapter that this big trouble was solved. The first volume of God Catching the Wind is a bit like a martial arts novel. In the beginning of the second volume, Asking the Immortal Path officially begins to cultivate immortality. It is already Chapter 83, and the whole rhythm is a bit slow. Zhang Yifan's luck is pretty good. He entered Burning Sky Valley and became an inner disciple. It only took two chapters to discover that he had a body refined by fire. He became a master of weapon training, Xu Ziwu, and the aura of the protagonist was everywhere. Summary: Although the author is a newcomer, his achievements are very good, and the novel is remarkable. If readers are not interested in similar martial arts in the mortal world, they can start reading directly from Chapter 83.

Retreat when you see that the mission is guaranteed to be completed. Classical Xianxia requires the author's ancient literary skills.

It's not easy for you, the author. In fact, this book is really good, but I guess it wasn't very popular because there weren't many recommendations. This Silver Alliance came in time. This book has more than one million words written and the author has never stopped updating it. This is very difficult.

Check it out, why is it that a book with such a good plot is not very popular 🤫

After being brought in by the Silver Alliance, after reading it, I realized how difficult it was for the author. He persisted hard and had a muddy journey, and finally signed the contract. Although the updates are few and far between, they never stop updating. This self-discipline alone is enough to attract me. The words are deeply touching and the author is great!

I feel like the main character is a bit childish, and writing the story is a bit like writing an essay.

The story has reached its climax, it's great! The more the better!

The character of this protagonist is really fucked up, a brain-dead hot-blooded boy

Haha, author, we are almost the same. I also have 570,000 words, only 3,000 recommendations and 1,000 favorites. Haha, let's work together. I don't believe it. I've written 5 million words and no one has read it. I have to endure it.

I finally understand why this book is not popular. The main character is a bit childish. Not many people read this kind of book nowadays.

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Are there any plug-ins? Are you happy? Is it slow to heat up? Is the strength system high? Personally, I love Silian! Please let anyone know 😁😁😁

I like the plot of the book, and the more it would be better. Don't you want to write two books at once? ? ?

Today's Xianxia online articles are all light-hearted, and only when they are gamified can many readers read them. Some mortal-style or orthodox story-based fairy tales are not very popular. The older you get, the more old-fashioned it becomes, and it is difficult to read new things... I have to say that although online literature has grown in popularity, after the threshold has been lowered, many books have lowered the level of readers.

Invincible flow, the protagonist is too powerful and a bit fake. Establishing the foundation kills the golden elixir, and the golden elixir kills the Nascent Soul. It is always killing people who cross the rank. He is a great master in all kinds of immortal cultivation techniques. He has countless opportunities and can easily earn spiritual stones.

For a new author's first book, you must insist on updating it until it is complete. Don't lose it halfway. Support it all the way.

It was okay after reading more than 20 chapters. The protagonist is a teenager and keeps growing up, including the death of colleagues and the death of close relatives. Sigh.... I don't know what happens next. I wonder if this book has a female protagonist?

The story is really good, it would be even better if the skills were improved, and the small details would be more refined. For example, it's "mighty... Wu...", Not "mighty..." Jiang Zi. The writing is quite good, but the ancient meaning is a little lacking. Come on😊

Not bad, not bad, I made hundreds of points by signing the contract. The author has a great story, please continue to work hard.