Square Dance Master's Road to Conquer Another World

I haven't finished it yet, but I've decided to follow it! The structure setting of the different world is very interesting, and the plot design is relatively rigorous. Moreover, I have just read less than 100,000 words, and I have already discovered that there are several buried lines. I don't know which ones will be used in the end. Anyway, if the completion level is relatively high, there is no need to worry about the complexity of the plot. I still have some expectations for this. The character design is quite amazing, an old man... Now I am more curious about how the character development will go down. But there are also shortcomings. Many of the plots at the beginning relied on dialogue between characters or inner activities to promote plot development. However, this good habit was abandoned after a few chapters, and the character dialogue began to become boring and even played a role similar to narration. Overall, it appears to be rigorous but not energetic enough. I still hope to be more flexible in the way the plot is promoted. Moreover, the characters' dialogue and psychological activities play a very important role in shaping the character's image. If there is some emphasis on this aspect, the characters will be fuller and more helpful in promoting the development of the plot. Overall, this is a book that provides a lot of bait for setting control. It is worth reading. I hope that the following content will be more exciting.

The total number of clicks is 44, and I estimate that 70% to 80% of them are clicked by me. I finally have enough level to give myself a recommendation vote today, and it seems that I am also level enough to post. I have read some articles teaching writing routines, especially how to trick readers in online writing. Personally, I actually love watching a lot of comics, games, animated TV series, but after a certain age, the various routines become boring once I become familiar with them. So I came up with the idea of ​​making up my own to avoid all the routines. It seems to avoid readers who love all kinds of routines. I feel a little sad that no one will read tens of thousands of words. However, I still have to persevere and finish writing the entire story. Then I want to make a map, but I haven't found a way yet.

I read your book. The writing is very rigorous and worth learning, but there is a lack of interest between the lines.

One day I searched for a 20-second video, which was said to be "Very Willful" by a girl named Rabbit Ya. I played it on a loop for 10 minutes, and then wrote Chapter 20, The Immortal King. So far, this is my favorite chapter. Compared with several fierce battles, there were several dazzling industrial and commercial developments. The love in this chapter, the great love in the world, not the love between children, is what I want to highlight in the entire work. Maybe the skill is not enough. When I am an audience member, I feel that all the works I see are average or not very good. When I want to create something, I find that those works that are not very good are actually created with great care. In fact, I want to make a work that is not very good, but it is actually very laborious.

No way. I planned to write a lot of things into the extra chapter before, but one day I wrote 4 chapters of the extra chapter, and then I found that the coding calendar told me that there was no coding that day. It seems that the extras will not be counted. Then prepare to move it into the main text.

These chapters were originally planned to be included in the extras, but it seems that they don't count in the word count, so I'll just put them in the main text. Don't make money and fight monsters all day long, do something warm. Some clues before and after are also interspersed with warmth. If you don't pay attention, you will definitely come back to find clues. Then when I was writing, I felt like I was possessed by a demon. The article "Fanka Zhukov" I memorized in elementary school kept echoing in my mind, so there were some changes in the language. Hope it's a good change.

Before, I shamelessly voted for myself. You were the first person to vote for me. I will remember it. Thank you for your support.

1. No one is a supporting role, everyone has his own life. Therefore, for each supporting character, even if he only appears for 10 minutes and 1 chapter, I try to show his life. No matter whether it ends in tragedy or comedy for him personally. Everyone starts from themselves and chooses every step carefully. 2. There are some places where details are written. Writing details in some places would drag down the whole atmosphere, so I won't write them down. Some of them are even refined words. If you can say it in 15 words, you won't waste 20 words. For example:. . . . The position was in chaos, and Garcia's cavalry arrived again on the left and right. . . The Hao Mane Corps collapsed completely! The soldiers fled in all directions! A battle that spans 10 chapters, the decisive moment is so brief, trying to give people the feeling that a moment of negligence, the sharp blade is already in the throat, and everything is too late. If you write longer, the impact will be weaker. Just use fewer words. 3 No one is perfect, no one is born perfect. The protagonist and supporting characters all have their own shortcomings, such as Cloud Eagle Giza. In this pair, they are both strong and conquer the world in their respective fields, but they are both weak and their weaknesses are very prominent. Well, when these two people first met, they were too shy to open their mouths to say anything, and they were both full of emotions. It's just natural. 4 There are a lot of place names and people's names. Try to put together one area, several surrounding related areas, and the characters involved. It doesn't matter if you can't remember it anyway, because after several consecutive chapters are written about this place, events, and characters, there will be several chapters where you won't see them. When needed again, a note is made in parentheses to make it easier to find.