Artifact Avenue

I have been reading books for more than ten years, and I can't stand many books by great masters. Although the story of this book feels a bit cliche, I can read it and the writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work!

Does magic weapon have different realms? The first time I saw it, I saw that there are still various introductions, and the running accounts are the same. Alas, the cultivation realms are divided too finely, which is not good. 9×4×4=144 Realms. How do you think about this? There are as many levels as magic weapons. The more divisions in novels, the better. (The above is a personal opinion).

In the first two chapters, a "trash" title, a bloodline restriction, and an instant dissuade him from retreating. Although this cannot be said to be a poisonous point, personally, it is too novice and too cliché.

Brother author, it takes 50 years for others to build a foundation from the first to the second floor, but a foundation-building monk is only 200 years old. Your foundation building is different from other people's, which is divided into upper, middle and lower layers. It is divided into 10 floors... How many years does it take from the second floor to the third floor?

The writing process is very hard, and I feel depressed when I see that I am not popular. I can only encourage myself and persevere!

The anatomy teacher is one of the readers of "Artifact Avenue" every day. Reading the document and reading the articles posted on the starting point are completely different. At this time, I feel a sense of accomplishment and feel very gratified. This book will remain on various platforms of the China Literature Group for future readers to read. The anatomy teacher will enjoy part of the rights gained from this book for life. Half a year later, when you get older and read the books you once wrote, you may sigh. Millions of words were typed out chapter by chapter. It was all based on imagination, without reference, let alone plagiarism. The mortal world, the world of cultivation, the world of immortality and the world of gods in your own imagination, the avenues of cultivation and weapon refining that you imagined, and the universe that you know! The hard work and anguish in the process of writing a book will be reduced a lot. If you find a wrong sentence or typo, or something you are not satisfied with, you can go to the background to make corrections in time! After the book is put on the shelves, if the anatomy teacher wants to read his own book on the Qidian platform, he needs to subscribe like all book friends. He also votes for himself every day to encourage himself to persevere. The anatomy teacher is also a fan and die-hard fan of "Artifact Avenue"!

Put wealth first and law third. What do you think? If Bill Gates has money, ask him to practice for me.

A fiancée is written as Chen Yunchen in the first part, and Chen Yunting in the second part. This is a mistake, and she does not correct such an obvious mistake... Also, the dialogue plot is written as if it were a narration of an incident...

The writing is too mundane, it feels like reading "Historical Records", every aspect is too detailed, how long is the mainland from east to west, how wide is it from north to south, how many relatives and friends are there, what are the family members, examples one by one, 16 men and 14 women can get married and have children,,,,,, etc., Everything is too detailed, it is not reading a novel, this is reading "Historical Records"

At the beginning of the chapter, a few relatives died, just to get some sympathy. I didn't like it, so I stopped reading it. It's written in too many ways and I'm tired of it.

It's a long story. It's been said over and over again. It's been said in the previous chapter and repeated in the following chapters. A small plot can't be broken out in four or five chapters. Why? Because it talks too much and the protagonist doesn't really do anything. But long-winded words account for 80% of the novel. It doesn't make sense. I feel like it. Teaching, speechless╯╰, the whole novel is full of water, for example, a fighting plot, the fighting scene accounts for one tenth, and the nonsense and general principles account for nine percent. What is this preparation for? It was still bearable at the beginning, but I can't bear it later. It's too watery. I keep repeating it, and I feel like I am trying to make up the numbers. Well

The first few pictures immediately put me off. How can I write out all the framework systems in one go? Don't you think you know too much for one of the three ancestors?

This book is well written about sects, weapon refining is also very good but it is too formatted, and formation training is also well written. Materials are too easy to obtain. If you haven't gone to the God Realm, you should have less divine stones. The writing during the war is also very good. I personally suggest that the protagonist should not be too powerful all at once. If there is a special opponent, he can secretly use the divine bow to solve it. The protagonist's inner monologue is too repetitive

After reading Chapter 4, I am already 16 years old, and I still claim to be as capable as a 5-year-old child. I felt very embarrassed and couldn't stand it anymore, so I quit. Author, don't you read what you write? Don't know what you look like?

I feel that many people have gone astray. The most important thing is the essence of a wealthy Dharma couple. The ground is actually the environment. If you are born in the early years of the founding of the world, you have no skills, no property, no masters and Taoist companions. As long as you live, you can become an immortal and an ancestor. Secondly, there are too many people with wealth in this world. But have they practiced? Dharma: If you have skills and don't have a master, it's easy to go astray and get lost. Therefore, couples should be ranked second, Dharma three, and wealth should be the last.

Here is a little white text about the passage of the Holy Virgin.

I almost vomited after reading the first chapter. When introducing your relatives, you still have to say who your aunt will marry and become your uncle? Upon hearing this kind of introduction, Ma was not the first to take the lead.

Money first? If you don't have a cultivation method, what will you do if you have a lot of money? The land of a wealthy couple!

I would like to ask if the name of the time-travelling body can be changed. Why are 99% of time-traveling novels not changed? ?

Every profession has a bunch of messy aliases😭😭😭

How can I make it several million words long and still be at level 1?

The author is probably a high school student, and the words he uses are so childish.

According to Buddhist theory, the protagonist was probably full of evil in his previous life. First his parents were hit, and then he was hit.

This is the first person that readers who have been reading books for decades want to scold. Why do you have the nerve to charge money for rubbish works?

The beginning is full of exclamation points.