Krunt's Dimensional Ring

I'm currently reading Chapter 5. To be honest, I don't read many fantasy books, but it's obvious that you borrowed the beginning from your best friend (I read dozens of pictures of that book and liked it very much) It sounds like borrowing is as sensitive as plagiarism, but you wrote it very well. Although you haven't written your own style yet, the weird and mysterious atmosphere is very strong, especially the part about the knock on the door after closing the basement is really wonderful, and you can write a sense of horror in just a few strokes. But there are also drawbacks to borrowing. The redundant description in the fourth chapter of Fan'er City seems a bit long-winded when describing the tall blue and black buildings, and some of the priorities are unclear. It makes me feel that it is too messy to imagine a specific image (it is recommended to use less and find a few key points to describe, here I have to mention your description of the basement, which is great.) The details of the characters' expressions and behavior are also very good. To be honest, it has benefited me a lot. As for what you said about occasional drops of collections, I honestly don't need to pay too much attention to them. You have to know that even platinum masters drop collections every day. The point is that as long as your daily collection continues to rise, and it rises steadily, that's enough. Because many people who abandon books do not have a plot problem, but may just hate a certain character (here I will mention Stone Octopus's Thief for Heaven, the blind man in this book is annoying to many readers, but some people agree) To put it bluntly, you can't modify it just because some collections have declined. Let's put it this way, assuming it is because of a certain character's The reason is, assuming that 1,000 readers have seen this character, 300 readers like this character and are following it, 300 readers are not interested in it but don't hate it and continue reading, and the other 300 readers don't like it a little bit, but they are here to read the book. They are still attracted by your plot, and only the last 100 readers are particularly disgusted. (Are you going to modify a character that is easily felt by 1,000 readers because of the abandonment of a hundred people?) Have you ever thought that even if you modify it, the chances of those readers who abandoned the book coming back will be less than 10%. At the same time, many readers who like this character and the plot, as well as a large number of indifferent readers, will feel speechless and disappointed. In other words, your random changes may lose more readers. Then you will definitely say, it's okay to let this happen. In fact, it really doesn't matter. Once you've written the plot, if there are just a few objections, you can just ignore them. When do you need to change them? It's very simple (you remember the one by Han Xiaoshu, right? When many people in the book review area criticized the maid issue, in this case, changes need to be made. Now, In your case, everything is normal in the book review area, don't worry at all) Continue to write according to your own ideas, and the results will get better and better. Come on, I will review it after reading it (but to be honest, your writing is really good, don't be too influenced by favorites, this is very likely to be counterproductive, come on, Brother Yu, I wish you a great success in this book ✊)

Thank you readers for making me, the author, realize that I am really rubbish!!!

Death to Crent! How many conflicts have you made me feel?

I'm annoyed by the setting that only has one title.

Rather than talking about being trapped in a game, why don't you just talk about time travel? Modern people are trapped in games and there is no death threat like Sword Art Online. The first thing they think about is definitely not to find a way out by themselves, but to wait for real people to rescue them. If you say this is a game, then it is safe and you should play slowly. Who has the heart to play games when trapped?

Crent? The one with the same name as Kelly? 🤭

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Pig's trotters are so bad. I have never beaten anyone with a name. They are all unknown monsters. And I have written so many chapters.

I somehow mistook Krent for Terensu.