Krent's Dimensional Ring

I'm currently reading Chapter 5. To be honest, I don't read many fantasy books, but it's obvious that you borrowed the beginning from your best friend (I read dozens of pictures of that book and liked it very much) It sounds like borrowing is as sensitive as plagiarism, but you wrote it very well. Although you haven't written your own style yet, the weird and mysterious atmosphere is very strong, especially the part about the knock on the door after closing the basement is really wonderful, and you can write a sense of horror in just a few strokes. But there are also drawbacks to borrowing. The redundant description in the fourth chapter of Fan'er City seems a bit long-winded when describing the tall blue and black buildings, and some of the priorities are unclear. It makes me feel that it is too messy to imagine a specific image (it is recommended to use less and find a few key points to describe, here I have to mention your description of the basement, which is great.) The details of the characters' expressions and behavior are also very good. To be honest, it has benefited me a lot. As for what you said about occasional drops of collections, I honestly don't need to pay too much attention to them. You have to know that even platinum masters drop collections every day. The point is that as long as your daily collection continues to rise, and it rises steadily, that's enough. Because many people who abandon books do not have a plot problem, but may just hate a certain character (here I will mention Stone Octopus's Thief for Heaven, the blind man in this book is annoying to many readers, but some people agree) To put it bluntly, you can't modify it just because some collections have declined. Let's put it this way, assuming it is because of a certain character's The reason is, assuming that 1,000 readers have seen this character, 300 readers like this character and are following it, 300 readers are not interested in it but don't hate it and continue reading, and the other 300 readers don't like it a little bit, but they are here to read the book. They are still attracted by your plot, and only the last 100 readers are particularly disgusted. (Are you going to modify a character that is easily felt by 1,000 readers because of the abandonment of a hundred people?) Have you ever thought that even if you modify it, the chances of those readers who abandoned the book coming back will be less than 10%. At the same time, many readers who like this character and the plot, as well as a large number of indifferent readers, will feel speechless and disappointed. In other words, your random changes may lose more readers. Then you will definitely say, it's okay to let this happen. In fact, it really doesn't matter. Once you've written the plot, if there are just a few objections, you can just ignore them. When do you need to change them? It's very simple (you remember the one by Han Xiaoshu, right? When many people in the book review area criticized the maid issue, in this case, changes need to be made. Now, In your case, everything is normal in the book review area, don't worry at all) Continue to write according to your own ideas, and the results will get better and better. Come on, I will review it after reading it (but to be honest, your writing is really good, don't be too influenced by favorites, this is very likely to be counterproductive, come on, Brother Yu, I wish you a great success in this book ✊)

Thank you readers for making me, the author, realize that I am really rubbish! ! !

Death to Crent! How many conflicts have you made me feel?

I'm annoyed by the setting that only has one title.

Rather than talking about being trapped in a game, why don't you just talk about time travel? Modern people are trapped in games and there is no death threat like Sword Art Online. The first thing they think about is definitely not to find a way out by themselves, but to wait for real people to rescue them. If you say this is a game, then it is safe and you should play slowly. Who has the heart to play games when trapped?

Crent? The one with the same name as Kelly? 🤭

Dear readers, if you feel there is something wrong, you can leave a paw print and I will take a closer look~

Order this book in full to commemorate the fun time you had while reading this novel.

I somehow mistook Krent for Terensu.

Pig's trotters are so bad. I have never beaten anyone with a name. They are all unknown monsters. And I have written so many chapters.

Build a gang to collect money and magic items

What a great book, you are actually the eunuch in charge, alas

It's not bad to keep updating twice a day and sometimes three times a day. I support it with 12 votes.

Can you open a separate work related to who the names of the characters are? Foreigners' names are not easy to remember. I always remember them wrongly or misremember them.

Have you forgotten any tasks? Also, he believed in the church too blindly, and the protagonist in reality has been silenced. . . . . . The arrangement is also unreasonable! A captain has a sequence of 3. You wizard killed the captain? Didn't find the protagonist? The church healers asked me to see the corpse of the wizard and they didn't develop the other two corpses? Someone died, but the police didn't go to the victim's home to find out what happened? The extraordinary person found the fish-human person from afar but couldn't find the corpse? Everything, too many poisonous points. . . . . . Internal signature? 🤫🤫

Is this a sister work to Lord of Mysteries?

The witcher first drank a dozen bottles of potion and then applied sword oil. Fight again

"Pluto Game" comes to visit and pay homage to the boss

The title of the book reminds me of the dark elves in the dungeon

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I prefer this type of game, but what kind of game is this? I have never played this type of game.

May I ask why you put coins into the gas lamp groove in Chapter 1?

A hunter without a baby has no soul, is an unnoble hunter, an impure hunter, a hunter without morals, a hunter who is addicted to vulgar taste, and a hunter who is not beneficial to the people.

I think the writing is quite good. Why did he suddenly become a eunuch?