Invincible Star Kingdom

Brother, the first chapter you wrote is like a running account, especially the dialogues are all meaningless arguments. After reading the first chapter, people will not be interested in continuing to read the second chapter. The most important thing about the work is to bury the interesting foreshadowing in the first chapter. I suggest you write it again. I know you may just want to write it yourself for fun, but if you don't follow the writing method, you will gain nothing. You might as well think about it in your head. If no one reads 2 million words, it definitely means there is something wrong with your writing ideas. I suggest you close it, think about it, and publish a new book.

Keep up the good work, don't be too tired, don't delay your real work, study and rest.