Don't Mess with That Drunkard

Some questions and suggestions (2019.02.19) Hello everyone, Hu He here, I have raised some questions and suggestions through reading the previous chapters, and I hope the author can adopt them. 1. The sentence fragmentation and punctuation marks in the article are not very consistent with the contextual structure. 2. It can be seen that the author pays great attention to the modification and conciseness of sentences, but overall it seems that it is not mature enough. In many places, it will make people feel inconsistent. 3. Some sentences use repeated words, which can be omitted or replaced with synonyms appropriately so that they will not feel cumbersome when reading. 4. The chapters are too long. It is recommended that each chapter has about 3,000 words. 5. Express appreciation for the self-created verses in the article. Proper use will be a highlight, and I hope the author will continue to do so. 6. The plot line is not handled properly and is not very clear, giving people a feeling of confusion. 7. The characterization of characters is somewhat superficial. It should be noted that both positive and negative characters must have their own personality charm. Just as there is no love without reason, and there is no hatred without reason, anyone must have his purpose and reasons for doing anything. Since everyone has different personalities and different growth experiences, the purposes and reasons are also different. The positive character can be bold, perseverant, and at the same time cautious; the negative character can also be calm and wise, and perhaps he also has his own reasons for making a mistake even though he knows it is wrong. Positive characters don't have to be too upright at certain times, and villains can also show compassion in certain situations. Positive and negative are actually relative. In many cases, they just have different ways and different angles of dealing with things. It would be better if these issues can be dealt with so that readers like us can think deeply about them when reading the book. Successfully portraying a character allows readers to guess why he does what he does through details and his actions, or what he will do next through his actions before and after. It's not enough to say, this is the charm of words. PS: The above only represents my personal opinion and will be continued. Come on, author, refill |｡･･)っ♡ By the way, please click on the favorites and vote for recommendations! Compare your feelings to the big guys(.ω.)ノ♡

Come and step on it late at night! Come on come on!

It's useless for you to hand out red envelopes like this. You're using plug-ins to grab red envelopes. Real readers can't get them.

When giving out red envelopes, you can give out full red envelopes. Each person can only receive it once and it takes a few minutes to read.

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Riding the sword and riding the wind, I can slay demons in the world. Even if there is wine and joy, I will be happy without wine. I will drink up all the rivers in one drink, and then swallow up the sun and moon with another drink. I will not be drunk from a thousand cups, but I am the wine swordsman.

This introduction is old enough, all the martial arts people over there at Wanwan were like this n years ago

The writing is very good, but I can't read it and I don't know why. Especially starting from using spiritual stones to buy things, it is still necessary to keep the wealth secret, but it's a pity that I don't have it. It's like a nouveau riche.

The title of the book seems to have nothing to do with the content of the book, right?

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It's about a person's transformation from childishness to maturity, but I'm no longer the childish boy I used to be, so I can't read it.

120,000 Recommendation votes. Judging from this data, it should be pretty good. Look again, it's not on the shelves yet

As for the simulator, I didn't see it. Is there an simulator? Am I reading another book?