The Shimada Family's Journey to the Ninja World

Can't the protagonist follow his own path?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: This novel is novel and suitable for newcomers, but not very suitable for old bookworms. Because I think those plots are very abrupt or have no foreshadowing. For example, the Hagoromo clan and the Uchiha ask the Jonin to send a letter to the Sarutobi Alliance. There is no foreshadowing for the Jonin to send the letter. It is more like the Hagoromo Uchiha thought of the logic of not letting each other find each other to win over Sarutobi. I guess the author wrote it wherever he thought. There are many more. Just my personal opinion. I haven't read it yet. If there are improvements in the future, it's worth watching.

The protagonist has been following Hashirama's old path, and it turns out that Hashirama's old path is a failure. Distributing tailed beasts to one country and one village is really unbearable and is destined to fail. It's an insult to time travellers.

There are so many blood successors in the Kingdom of Water! Much better than Konoha, okay? Why return to the Land of Fire? Konoha is supported by Senju Uchiha and Hinata. The pig, deer and butterfly tribes are dispensable. I think the Kingdom of Water is the country with the most blood heirs, and they are not weak either!

Isn't it good to unify the ninja clan of the Land of Water? Why does Mao have to return to the Land of Fire? Just to lick Konoha? In terms of ninja quality, Minazuki, Oniden, and Kaguya, these three clans are only worse than Shimada, Senju, and Uchiha. The small number of people limits their development (the secret technique of water transformation, ice escape, and corpse bone veins are not bad, okay? If Asura reincarnates, these three clans are as good as each other) Force, for example, I don't think Ice Release will be worse than Wood Release in the hands of a big pillar), but if it can be unified into one village and develop well without any infighting, Blood Mist, plus Shimada, Hinata, Terumi, and Mikiki, will definitely not lose to Konoha!

Hanzo's strongest skill is swordsmanship, but because he killed his brother, he switched to archery

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I feel that assigning tailed beasts is a failure. It is said to be for peace, but a large part of the reason for future ninja wars is that every great ninja village has tailed beasts. The protagonist knows the plot and contacted the author to increase the protagonist's IQ. It is impossible not to know. The original article said that assigning tolerance can be wary I am confused about the Akatsuki organization. It is known that there is a one-tailed animal outside, which is enough. If Akatsuki dares to form a group to rob it, eight tailed beasts and a lot of ninjas will be beaten out of him. After all, for tailed beasts, one is death and the other is sealed. How to choose? You don't need me to say it.

So why let Madara go? He's afraid of Black Zetsu. Does that mean that if Madara kills you in the future, you can't kill him because he's afraid of Black Zetsu! It's better to say that Madara was seriously injured and was rescued. In this plot, he was beaten unconscious and left alone, for fear of being noticed by Black Zetsu. This is how easy it is to get noticed! If you don't kill him, at least he can't be exchanged for resources if he is tied back, which is probably not possible. He would definitely die if he was tied back. Then what are you fighting Banner? You still have to win. If you win, you won't kill. This is a battlefield. It's so poisonous!

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the book reviews, I can probably tell that the author has no own development path, and just mixes the main line with numbers. I don't know if you have watched The Rise of the Vortex Kingdom next door. The plot is that you fight, and I slowly develop and climb high-tech, and then the others take me away. The Kingdom of Water has a better start than the Kingdom of Whirlpool, right? Besides, the plot assumes that there is not enough supplies for the war? But the protagonist is a time traveler, can't he reclaim the sea? There are many advantages, it all depends on the author. First of all, the terrain is good. You can do whatever you want with Hai**'s house. As long as you don't cause trouble, who can mess with you? In addition, since you choose the time period before the village is built, you have unified the country, and it is no problem to become a daimyo yourself. The identity of Mizukage + the daimyo of the land of water will be convenient no matter what you do. Wouldn't it be better than going to the Land of Fire to be the Hokage? As for resources, I personally feel that the wars in Naruto are all plot killing or the daimyo causing trouble behind the scenes. Talking about insufficient resources is all nonsense. You will only have insufficient resources when you fight. There is not so much nonsense in the development of peace of mind. You see in the plot, people are turning around, and it has only been a few years of development. You don't know how fast the technology is. But if you feel at ease, the daimyo is not. This is purely a personal opinion, but according to this development, many plots can be written. Besides, even if the resources are not enough, you, a maritime country, probably have so many supplies, but you don't know how to develop them? If it doesn't work, will you be able to develop your business? Can't you buy it with money? You said there is a shortage of people? A country can develop with peace of mind and let them die, or take advantage of the war in the mainland to get refugees. Don't be afraid that there will be no place and fill the sea crazily. I don't believe that the national economy can't compare with the development of other countries that are small countries with few people. You have advanced technology, so what are you, the god of the ninja world? There is an up master on Station B who explains the correct use of Xiaonan's 600 billion detonating talisman. According to the correct method, it can explode for more than 60 hours or how long.

It's so stupid to see a tailed beast with more than 300 points. I paid all monthly subscriptions for it. In the end, it was such a brain-destroying operation. You laid so much groundwork and caught eight tailed beasts just to sell money and follow the old plot path. The previous writing is so good and I have creative skills. In the end, it was a waste of my time and money! ! !

When I saw that there was a fee, I simply looked at the catalog, and found that I had returned to the Land of Fire, so I decisively withdrew. In the Kingdom of Water, the protagonist and his family's strength could possibly unify the Kingdom of Water and turn it into an integrated national ninja village, but I just went back to the Kingdom of Fire. Why? What are you doing? Want to fight Konoha with Hashirama and Madara? Can you fight the spots? Can you defeat Hashirama? Can you ensure that the first Hokage is you? Even if you are the first Hokage, with Madara and Hashirama as two powerful beings, once they disagree with you, what will you do? Back again, look at the Senju Uchiha later. The two founder families of Konoha, the Senju Clan, only Tsunade is left in such a large family, and Uchiha is left with Erzhu and Itachi. They nakedly targeted the two clans and made the Shimada clan the founder clan. They are a typical trap for the family's descendants. They cut off their children and grandchildren. Instead of going to the land of water on the sunshine road, they want to go to the quagmire and swamp land of fire? The author is abandoning his brain for the sake of Naruto's feelings, I disagree

Seeing your comments about going to the Land of Fire, I just want to ask if you can go to Konoha to write about Naruto. The author is trying to break his brain to write the story. The name Naruto refers to Konoha. You can go through the sky and become Mizukage.

Everything follows the plot, so why do we need the protagonist?

Let's take a look at the author! Seventy-two hours in the illusion space and ten minutes in reality. This damn thing is 100 million times more powerful than Tsukuyomi (an exaggerated metaphor). You can die dozens of times in ten minutes. Besides, can three three magatama be better than a kaleidoscope? Seeing this really made me quit.

The subscription reaches 668 chapters, and the reading experience starts with more than 300 chapters. Fortunately, I have patience, but the main plot adds a family of the protagonist. Then, the old plot only takes what Obito wants to do, and Madara does it himself. The protagonist will use the original world peeling technique, and make a cold escape blood stain elimination. It has been told for dozens of chapters, but it has no use even after using it once. No matter who you fight in the later stage, it will be a 50-50 split. I wrote dozens of chapters in Morning Immortal Technique, but I didn't even fart in the later period. I don't know how the protagonist managed to survive until now. The protagonist did Hashirama's business. Why

I read about 20 chapters in the book and persuaded me to quit. During the Warring States Period, the Shimada family created a third-strength family. Is it acceptable? It was clearly stated that the strength was not as good as the Senju Uchiha. Suddenly, in the absence of the Senju, he took over the daimyo's mission and attacked the Uchiha clan camp with the purpose of killing. As a reward, the clan earns a year's profit? ? ? In order to earn a year's profit, the whole family went out to 1v1 hard anal Uchiha. I still accepted it. I fought with Madara on the battlefield. I casually succeeded in a 2v1 sneak attack and then he got one. I just knocked him out! ! Sorry to bother you, I really can't stand it anymore

Well, the official supplementary settings have been made. Hanzo's dragon is a tattoo, his ultimate move is a nanomechanical insect, and the arrow he shoots from his ultimate move is to guide the direction of the nanomechanical insect. There are no superpowers in Watch, it's all about technology

More than 1 million words, average results, not without reason, woman's kindness

It's a pity, it doesn't matter whether it follows the main plot or not, and it doesn't matter which camp the plot is in, but your protagonist doesn't have his own planning position at all. Could it be that he just fights with other families, and then the dead happily build Konoha. People died in vain! Even if you join, there are many goals. For example, who should be the main protagonist, and what is the development concept after that, and the protagonist has no idea. Don't tell me, it is better to divide the five major countries. The protagonist disagrees and is beaten by the two gay friends. Finally, if it was the era of the Five Great Nations, why should we go to Konoha when we could obviously go to other places to occupy territory first. Don't you understand that you would rather have a chicken head than a phoenix tail? There is no failure in other places, and the difficulty is easier than the beginning of Konoha. No matter how the protagonist leads the trend, there is a greater chance.

Alas, the names and dragon crests of Hanzo Shimada and Genji were taken up in vain, and the rest have nothing to do with it. Most of the people who read your book play Overwatch. As a member of the Shimada family, the protagonist can't even play with bows and arrows -_- || If you say that bows and arrows are not easy to play in Naruto, you can focus on knives! You might as well learn from Genji's ultimate move, but you are so unconventional and unconventional! Although I know that Naruto can't survive without ninjutsu, you can create your own! Alas, I won't say it anymore To be honest, the Naruto novels are all bad now. You finally have Overwatch and you haven't written anything yet. Have you said that you haven't read Naruto? You know clearly that the path of the Senju Clan is impassable, but you still divide the tailed beasts? Goodbye (ー_ー)!!

Those who talk about unity are the minds of primary school students! Hashirama's approach is right. If the whole world is unified, do you believe it or not? Society, technology, and everything else will stop moving forward. The progress of mankind must be catalyzed by war! The same goes for the ninja world. Without war, various powerful ninjutsu can appear? Can Hashirama, Madara and the strong men from all major ninja villages appear? Unifying the world will make the world a stagnant water!

Hashirama is on the wrong path, letting a group of ordinary people be on top of the ninjas. It is too easy for the ninjas to overthrow the daimyo, but they just don't know how to govern the country, but it is easy for pig's feet, and the ninja village has failed, and the resource economy is completely controlled by the daimyo. Isn't it good to build a country? The little ninjas are ministers, and they feel at ease when the resources are in their own hands.

The author didn't care at all when writing the book. The previous article said that the Uzumaki clan was forced by the Shimada clan to become a vassal of the Senju clan, and the following article went on to write about the Uzushio Village in the Country of Uzumaki. So it's not unreasonable that the number of recommended votes is so small.

The Kingdom of Water, Blood Mist, was initiated by the fourth generation Mizukage, right? You said it was the first generation Mizukage? And it's not because of internal fighting, but because the fourth generation Mizukage was controlled by Obito, and then Obito took revenge.

The prostitutes were passing by, but they actually traveled through time behind them. And it's traveling to the past. I don't know if I traveled back in time, and I didn't watch it in the end. I felt that the protagonist's hard work for so many years was of little use.

What the hell is the Phoenix Immortal Fire Claw? Shouldn't it be Impatiens Claw Red? Ah, this,

If nothing else, keep watch and be popular!

The whirlpool is very strong. It is Kirigakure that destroys the whirlpool. The advantage of water escape is sea escape. If other ninja villages create a whirlpool, it can cause other ninja villages to break apart. It's not that Uzumaki can't fight, it's just that the sealing technique talent points are full. Uzumaki's chakra is almost a hundred times that of ordinary people, and it can kill people with ninjutsu.

I think it was well written, but the reason why no one read it is because I didn't choose the right time. The background is actually in the Warring States Period. None of the familiar characters appear in the entire novel. Only Naruto and Sasuke have traveled from the future through the Dragon Vein. How could so many people watch it if he appears once?