Lysia's Fantasy

I hope you can read more of my works. If you have any opinions, you can post them in the comment area. After all, newcomers still don't understand many aspects of their works. Dear friends, if you have experience, you can leave me a message.

Unknowingly, the Chinese New Year is almost here, and I have been writing this novel for almost a month. Although not many people have read it, and I know that my writing is not very good, I will revise the problematic chapters before signing the contract, hoping to give everyone a better experience when they see my work.

I haven't updated for a few days, all because of illness. I hope you can forgive me for catching up today.

The first few chapters are so long that one chapter could be published as two chapters. The thing in the second chapter is "I", and it is actually written in the first person and the third person. Also, 'I' wasn't surprised when I saw people who had traveled through time and took the initiative to strike up a conversation. This doesn't look very good, so I suggest you change it a bit. The first few chapters are more important. If a chapter is too long, people will easily lose interest. Two thousand words is best. Also keep the title as simple as possible. Okay, in short, this is how I feel. It doesn't mean that your writing is not good, your writing is still good. Come on.

Here I will send a notice. Due to some special reasons, updates will be resumed every Wednesday. Updates will be added from time to time when there is time. The update time is every Wednesday, Friday, and Sunday, one update each time. If it is popular, I will add an update. In addition, when reading the work, if you have any comments and suggestions, you can leave a message in the comment area. Your opinions are the greatest support for me! ! ! Thanks!

I'm sick, so I haven't updated today. I would like to apologize to all readers.

After reading a little bit, I would like to make a suggestion. The word "said" is used too often.