Ark of the Old Days

My personal opinion so far (Chapter 36): Feiqi should be more stable in life, and his purpose is to leave, so it should be right to appear more withdrawn. The economic system in this book feels a bit broken at the moment. I hope the author can make some corrections. If it doesn't work, just refer to the purchasing power in the real world. Or rather like the Middle Ages. We often hear how much rich people have. In fact, the total assets do not mean how much money they can withdraw... Take the example around me, it is quite difficult for someone with hundreds of millions of assets to withdraw one million in cash. Any more will damage the foundation. Jack Ma has tens of billions, and it will take a while to raise even one billion. Rich people will not leave their money idle. In terms of setting, since the city does not expand outwards, but only defends, and there is no large-scale war, the technology number is more likely to include large defense machinery or living technology, rather than all individual strength improvements to adapt to combat. Unless the author adds some important settings to make the combatants so important. Of course, most novels have very stupid settings in this regard. I don't know why, but the individual strength is strong, and the protagonist upgrades all the way. I pay more attention to it for personal reasons. I like flesh-and-blood characters, that is, delicate emotional expressions, rather than simple combat upgrades. Another thing I hope is that the emotional intelligence of the character is higher: The protagonist Feiqi has not yet encountered communication problems or problems with the opposite sex, so I can't see it; but I hope not to see the kind of girl who takes the initiative and the male protagonist suddenly becomes a sage. But being able to grab a limited purchase from a huge crowd is obviously not an ordinary role, at least he still has a compelling momentum. It won't be as silly and sweet as it is now. Others have not described much yet, so I will not comment. My personal reading preference is... The kind that is about more delicate emotions but not romance. Love is important, but love is not everything in life. If the author is writing the book for hobby, I hope there are many details worth reading. If it is for livelihood, just treat it as if I didn't say it, then just cater to the mainstream.

1. The theme does not match the article The title of the book is Ark of the Past. From the introduction and title, we can see that the protagonist should build a ship within three months to avoid the disaster. Of course, it is also possible to reverse the situation and help R'lyeh survive the disaster, but it is unlikely because Cthulhu is the boss in the world and there is basically no possibility of resistance in the early stage, so it can be ignored here. But in fact, the author spent a lot of space (the current 100+ chapters have not built a ship, and can't even see its outline, only a small one that can be used as a lifeboat) to describe life on the island, including but not limited to mechanical transformation, learning mechanical knowledge, taking exams, earning money, daily life with maids, and entering underground forces, taking on tasks, contact with college seniors, contact with teachers, contact with supplier bosses, contact with nobles, and then shipbuilding. Is there something wrong? That's right, if a book wants to write everything, it can't write anything well. The author's biggest failure is to use a lot of ink on Laleye, which is about to be destroyed in three months. In my casual fantasy... If you go directly to the main topic in the early stage, use a few chapters to describe the golden finger, enhance the golden finger to gain power and knowledge, complete the plot of the little maid, and then prepare for this "The protagonist's eyes flashed, dim light shone on his face, he walked towards the prepared experimental table..." After upgrading, it is time to build a ship, which requires money and knowledge. Knowledge is not obtained through learning, which will inevitably slow down the plot. Goldfinger can add a method of killing to gain strength and knowledge, and also gain money. After going underground, rebuild a place on the seaside where ships can be built, and contact the place where the mission is released underground. Then, in order to obtain shipbuilding tools, contact the old men and young people in the shop, and kidnap teachers from the school to help build ships. The teacher's disappearance and the investigators who investigated the school, such as those mechanical modifiers, successfully attracted the senior sister and caused them to get entangled. Then seize the handle of a certain noble or control a certain noble to provide convenience. When the shipbuilding is in full swing, the precursor of R'lye's attack comes - the creature riot in the sea Taking advantage of this opportunity, the master goes to resist the sea beasts. The protagonist uses the convenience provided by the noble to steal a large amount of knowledge stored in R'lye, and then arouses the rage of a certain big shot. The senior sister and a new master searched the protagonist, and the protagonist used some of Goldfinger's abilities to escape. When they still wanted to hunt the protagonist, three months came. The terrifying sea rushed in violently. The protagonist took the people he wanted to take with him to the built ship. The senior sister chased the protagonist and boarded the ship, was caught, and went through various hardships before finally finding the mainland. However, the mystery on the mainland is gradually awakening... () These can be written in about two to three hundred chapters. It will not be boring to write more to four hundred chapters, because the previous plot will not be cumbersome. After writing, I moved to the mainland, setting it as a land where there are many ordinary people, the mystery is not obvious, and is recovering. The protagonist is a legendary ship deep in the sea. He uses R'lye's knowledge to collect mysterious knowledge and build a doomsday ark that combines machinery and mystery. The finale uses nuclear neutralization to punish Cthulhu and so on... Of course, there can be other developments... The above is purely random thinking. I have never written a novel, I just read a lot. But this book, I can really confirm, was dragged down by the rhythm. The author's writing style is really okay. (Shang Xiang~) ps: Is there anyone in the qq area of ​​the mobile game King of Glory who is hacking? I, Waner Thief Six 😏😏😏

Although our country is not as extreme as the concept of skin and hair that we had a long time ago, it is probably unacceptable to ordinary Chinese people except for those with physical disabilities.

The author's writing is very good, and it is quite in line with my taste among the current Qidian fantasy novels. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on

Wlgq, no more eunuchs! 😰😰😰, it's not easy to find a book that suits your appetite!

Come on, it's not bad^_^

My investment ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )~

It feels cool, and it's not because the book's grades are bad. If it's not good, it's easy for the eunuch to understand. If it's good, but I don't talk about it, if it's cool, it feels like it's the author's fault.

The emperor needed his services and he went to the palace! ! ! 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

Damn, I haven't gone out to sea after reading so many chapters 😅

Okay, I will remember your name. No matter how good your writing is, I will never subscribe again.

Why haven't I updated it for so many days? I don't think we want eunuchs anymore

I just discovered this book yesterday and found it to be really good. I hope the author will get better and better.

What a scam, I raised her and then went to the palace, can I get my money back?

I guess it's stuck. In the later stages of development, the author may have checked the information.

It hasn't been updated yet, eunuch, at least tell me!

Is he a eunuch? Author, please reply, or does anyone know why it is not updated? I think the writing is pretty good. Almost no one writes about systems like fantasy mechanical transformation. It's quite new and not too complicated. I've also read a few other old potions books and read them for a hundred or two hundred chapters. Now I can't understand the next one. I don't even know who the names are (including the Lord of Mysteries). If you want to understand, you still need to review it. I'll read it after I finish the book.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~