Cultivation Extreme Demon Head

Don't always treat people as pigs, and treat people as medicine. Things like cannibalism that destroy the three views should be written up. Just take it with you. Write more drama

The author said that the dark trend must be dark to the end. There must be no such thing as cheating, kidnapping, stealing wives, and cheating children with lollipops. At most, it is to avoid force majeure. Also, don't write about women who like the protagonist. The protagonist has to rely on deceptions to get anything. It is best to be despicable and shameless. Don't kill innocent people indiscriminately, at best kill with borrowed knives. The protagonist shouldn't fall in love with any heroine. The heroine should be a woman whose husband was cheated by the protagonist. She should be grateful to the protagonist. The protagonist only treats her as a beautiful dress. In the end, the protagonist will be childless and the ending will let the protagonist go to jail.

The author's writing is very good and the plot is well handled, but the novel borrows many terms from "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" and "The Immortal Rebellion". Even the protagonist's name is Han Li + Wang Lin = Han Lin, as well as the names of places, the names of elixirs, and the names of exercises... This is too dramatic and completely unflattering. These are things that you can definitely learn from a wide range of points or open a collection building.

This author writes so well and it's so beautiful

It's really beautiful, author, don't give up👊!

The protagonist practices Shura Dao and takes jujube pills 😜 No, sooner or later he will have to take the regret pill.

Why don't you try to trick people later? Oops, this would be boring.

I think the words used to describe the interaction with Junior Brother Murong in this book are a bit strange 😅

I feel like the main character up front is okay, but after going down the mountain and experiencing it, he becomes a holy lady. Just mind your own business and kill him. Don't have any feelings for the protagonist.

Everyone has their own taste, so why force it on others.

Writing a book is really not easy, but you have to do it and cherish it

Please don't write a story where the main character exposes everything he has done! Watching him build a Zhulou, watching him banquet guests, watching his building collapse. There is always a pair of eyes in the dark corner staring at everything that is happening! All the real benefits were cut off by him in advance~~ Really 6666 If a villain pretends to be a gentleman to the extreme, then he is a true gentleman in the eyes of others! Time will make many traces disappear... Don't write to expose the protagonist's behavior, because there is a word in this world called "rebirth!" So I ask you if you are afraid~~ There are many, many unseen scenery and some unsolved mysteries in this world. But... Life is like this. When you want to work hard towards a goal, you are bound to give up a lot of scenery along the way. Your writing is also dark. Most of the poisonous points should be understood, and it's not BB. I hope you can describe a protagonist who is cautious, rational and decisive! Rather than the pseudo-darkness of killing for the sake of killing without any purpose, like a psychopath. Hold your fist! I hope this book will become popular!

Dark literature emphasizes benefiting oneself at the expense of others. The nonsense you are discussing is harming others and benefiting oneself. That is not dark literature, it is sand sculpture literature.

It's a very real novel. The protagonist is a villain through and through, and he will do anything for his own benefit. But this is the real flow of darkness in my mind.

See Chapter 5. . . I feel like the author has some misunderstanding about the villain,,, this is obviously a two-faced villain. . . Humble, bending one's knees, flattering,,, this character is a bit disgusting to people.

It's really good-looking. I hope the protagonist can always be a superficial gentleman... Also, let's fix the buck teeth.

Does anyone feel that the introduction at the beginning is taboo, even if the comments say it looks good, they don't want to take another look at it?

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Why do you think the protagonist wants to be a good person later? The protagonist longs for light in his heart? Are you afraid that your junior brother Po Yuanyang will remind him? Does he still have any treasures on him or is it to compensate? I thought I had to turn from black to white, but after reading the title of the book I realized it was a dark novel? Don't be so different.

After reading Mozi Fang, I feel that the latter chapters are much different from the previous chapters. Let me talk about some of the problems I think 1: I hope there will be no more modern curse words such as garbage. Adding "oh" or something after some sentences is very inconsistent. Also, the protagonist's thoughts are so beautiful that my mouth is watering. In addition, in the book, Murong Yu and other people who have entered spiritual practice talk rubbish, and the fossil rat always points his butt at each other, etc. It is really out of character 2: The author can't write good emotional scenes and try to avoid them. For example, with Murong Yu, most readers of the Qidian male channel are men, not rotten girls. The friendship between them should not be written too gay. It can make readers laugh once in a while, but it won't work if it is written too often. I was really embarrassed by the flirting between Murong Yu and Huang Yueying. It should be noted that new authors are generally not good at writing emotional scenes and need to use their strengths and avoid weaknesses 3: The characters' words and actions are too childish and illogical. For example, if you kill the officers and soldiers when you see them killing people, are the officers and soldiers killing necessarily good people? Why did they just kill the officers and soldiers? 4: Positioning of this book, the title of the book is Cultivation Demon Head. Don't write too much about friendship, love, etc., Even if it is a supporting role. If you like these, you may slip away when you see the title and the first few chapters. I believe that most readers want to read about a ruthless and manipulative person. Demon 5: Write less about the appearance of the characters who have already appeared. The protagonist always says that appearance is nothing. There are various ways to change the appearance in the world of immortality, and appearance is always mentioned 6: Don't pay too much tribute to mortals, one or two is enough

Gathering skills. This book is set. First of all, the exercises are divided into body training techniques, mind training techniques, and training techniques. The magic formula comes with magic and magical powers. Spells are divided into three levels: Tao, Dharma, and Technique. Including, secret techniques and secret techniques, which require corresponding attributes, talent and understanding to practice. Magical powers require corresponding materials to practice.

The mentality of the protagonist is suitable for magic skills. In the future, inner demons will also be a problem.

If you want to make money, it's really difficult to make money from dark streaming. If it's popular, it's 404, but if it's not popular, there's no money. Every dark stream author deserves support.

This regret medicine,,, the cultivation level is too low, it looks a bit like Long Aotian's rhythm. Generally, it is like a high-level elixir. At least the cultivation level must be very high to have it. Even the saints cannot get it, and they can get it during the Qi training period. Although the setting is very reasonable, I think it will miss some people...

I don't read all the dark articles, especially when I saw some time ago that NC said this under the news about a 12-year-old boy who murdered his mother but was released by law: The matricide testifies that the next one should be the father. If you dare to do things that are difficult for us, young people have a future! When I saw this, I really wanted to slap him to death.

Come on＾0＾~I support you 😁

I can't help anyone else. I was pushed in the Xinshu Investment Group circle, just don't be a eunuch, come on.

I guess the name of the pig's trotter is Han Li + Wang Lin 😏

I hope the author can see that, to be honest, these chapters, from going out to do tasks at the mountain gate, accepting female ghosts in the Yuanwai Mansion, to pulling people into the spirit space and making them servants, are really super confusing, and the writing is unclear. I almost deleted the book because of your ten or so chapters.

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