Kaiwang Glory

Your writing was a bit confusing at first... You didn't divide it into chapters. One chapter has too few words. A chapter of about 2,500 words would be better.

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The paragraphs should be divided better so that there is a sense of hierarchy, otherwise it will affect reading.

The author should study hard first

The subject matter you write is almost unreadable and the audience is too small. Here are a few examples. If you write Japanese comics, the audience will be larger. It will be much better if you replace Armor Warrior with Kamen Rider. After all, Armor Warrior represents children. They will not want to read it when they see the name. You can write a two-dimensional Japanese comic series. The second dimension will be easier to write. After all, there is already a world view. You are just a derivative fan. It doesn't matter whether you follow the plot or change it yourself. Therefore, it is recommended to write a Japanese comic series.

1. Typos, lack of punctuation, "Wang Rong" appears too many times in a single paragraph; 2. Why does Wang Rong say that he should practice for three years? emmm is gone, author, come on