Konoha's Balanced Ninja System

I'm really speechless. A person who has traveled through time and watched Naruto did not take advantage of the plot, especially when facing the enemy. He would only wait for the opponent's ninjutsu to be used before acting as an afterthought. Obviously, the writing is in a serious style, but it has to include some embarrassing jokes, trying to imitate the feeling of the Naruto anime, but instead of drawing a tiger, it becomes an anti-dog. At first, the protagonist was written to be able to fight side by side with Kakashi, but later the protagonist's strength was forcibly reduced. Poison!

I only read about 20 chapters and skipped 7 or 8 chapters. I really couldn't stand it. I was forced to quit one chapter after another. All I can say is that the author 🐂🍺.

I watched the video of Kai Ye and Ban Ye in class and it was so popular! Suddenly the head teacher seemed to have discovered something. I ran over with a sword step and kicked the head teacher away! The head teacher wiped the blood from the corner of his mouth and said: I would like to call you the strongest, took out a book and hit me! "Unlimited reading"

This book will not be a eunuch. If you don't know how to be a eunuch, you will be generous.

Am I number one on the fan list? This book is a bit confusing

The writing is okay, but there are two mistakes. ① The first Chuunin exam is a written test hosted by Morino Ihiki, and the second one is the Forest of Death hosted by Mitarashi Anko. ② Yakushi Kabuto's Chakra Scalpel This jutsu is a technique that uses chakra to simulate a scalpel, causing damage to muscles and internal organs through the skin. It looks like a layer of chakra is wrapped on the outside of the palm, rather than actually using a scalpel as a weapon. By the way, Naruto's character is straightforward rather than reckless. He has to talk a lot about Konoha's rebellious nin before he takes action or retaliates passively. What you wrote here is that you don't understand the situation and just take action directly. It makes Naruto's character a bit specious...

There is a problem. The new version of Akali and the old version of Akali are two people. One is the Stray Thorn and the other is the Fist of Shadow. The introduction only mentions the Outlier Thorn, so there will be no old version of the skill in the future. Also, Kayn seems to be Zed's apprentice, so is Kayn considered a Kinkou?

In Chapter 32 of the record, a tooth was broken by Xiao Li. Congratulations to the protagonist for leaking his words in the future. 😁

I haven't read the book, and my three views are inconsistent. After reading the related work, how come three generations have become a kind and kind father? Let's not talk about conspiracy theories. How about watching Danzo kill so many people and not talking about it? Every time, I say a few words afterward. I was dismissed by Danzo just because of Konoha? And then smash the office every day? So damn kind! Doesn't the Third Generation know what Danzo did? Didn't he know about that shit? What was the one thing that forced White Fang to death? It wasn't the third generation who did it, so he couldn't stop the loss in time? Let public opinion ferment? Anyway, all the good things have been taken over by three generations of you? Again, it's not reading fan fiction that makes the third generation black! But you, Naruto, have so many bugs that people still can't relate to them? When you think about it carefully, why are you so disgusting in the third generation? I also read a lot of fanfiction. Farewell, three different views

The biggest taboo in time travel is not to kneel down and lick. The protagonist thinks about the prince and Kadian every day. How can this be good-looking? If you see Konoha, lick it. This kind of time travel is better than not wearing it.

After reading about the work, the original intention of the ninja joining the village was to protect the family, not the village. What is the reason for not agreeing with the tradition, and not agreeing with it is to kill the father, mother, and the entire clan? The co-author believes that Uchiha will die if he leaves the village, and if he rebels, he will die, so it is better to let all his own people be killed, right? With Uchiha's strength and no traitors, there would be no problem in leaving. (During World War II, the Uchiha clan was still in charge of the Water Kingdom battlefield). Being killed by the 25th Itachi does not mean that Uchiha is not strong. After all, the kaleidoscope completely defeated the three Magatama, and it does not rule out the possibility of a sneak attack. After all, no one would have thought that the clan leader's son was a traitor.

The rhythm is chaotic, the strength is chaotic, no matter who you fight, you will be injured, you will be injured if you fight with the shadow level, you will be injured if you fight with the ninja, you will be injured if you fight with the elite, and you still write the protagonist as a 50-50 split.

There are so many bugs in Naruto. To be honest, Danzo can't bear it alone. Maybe the manga wants to set up a perfect third generation, but unfortunately this manga has too many flaws. If the third generation is not bad, who will, Danzo? He couldn't afford to carry so much. If the blame is given to Danzo, it will only prove that the third generation is more rubbish and useless.

Why do I feel like the main character is a waste if he has no skills? And the main character seems to be a bit of a (middle) street gangster.

For the sake of balance, the author keeps suppressing the protagonist, which is very depressing. Learning a skill means not learning it, and adding chakra means not adding it. Everything I encountered was unbeatable, all opened at 55. The summary of the whole article is depressing, and the more I read it, the more depressed I become. There are many skills, but I feel like few of them are useful. Just looking at them all, they are all awesome. Would it be useful to have a Tengai Ninjutsu or a suitable one plus a psychic one? I have used the skill Bleeding Succession Limit, and I have one, but I haven't used it very much, and the ultimate skill is also not very common. Akali's skill is not very common. The writing is good, but the power performance is very messy. What kind of ninja skills are there? You developed the Blood Succession Limit. What are you doing with so many blues? It's enough to have a psychic Kenan, but if he still has a psychic, he won't leave. . ...

How to say it. There is something wrong with what the author wrote. Everything is gamified. Lol is a game that has four skills. If you have Shen's energy, you don't need to sharpen the soul blade, just say you created it with chakra. You've made the hero have no other abilities except skills. If they all have this in the background story, it's just a joke. It feels like the system is gamified, and I can't stand it anyway. Farewell.

It won't fail anyway, so why create a failure penalty? It's disgusting for readers not to mention it, but it also gives people the feeling that without the system, it's not even a **

I just saw Kingdom of Iron 🙂nmd Where is your shield? Did you flush it in the toilet? You only used thunder escape and sword skills throughout the whole process. You didn't use so many skills, and you have practiced sword skills for several months better than others in a lifetime. What did you do with the escape just now? Relying on your companions for the whole fight, why don't you draw text comics This is a novel, not a hot-blooded comic

Post a post, I hope the author can see that in the balanced Sannin, the new version of Shen's background story is too strong, because there is the soul blade, but there is no such artifact in the book. Generally speaking, the strength of the Sannin alone cannot touch the level of the Six Paths, and it goes without saying that the calamity is the same. Later, we can only see the fusion of skills created by the author's imagination. After all, we are not using the template of one character alone. This is very smooth. It can be seen that the author is quite smart in this regard. But looking at these four characters alone, they still need soy sauce to provide support later, so I really hope that the author can write the CP pair of Kayn and Laast as a system Easter egg (personal ambition, I really want to see the protagonist and Laast bicker, I love these two tsunderes), and unlock Kayn after gathering the skills of the above four people, and Kayn without Laast has no soul, (Hey, have you seen Laast? Special? Rayast? ... Haha, I mean... Oh, I forgot that you are dead...) (Odyssey Kai: When are we going to sing K again? Odyssey Ra: No one can know about this! Odyssey Kai: Then~next weekend? Odyssey Ra: ... Okay!) Well, the point is, my great dark descendant is a god warrior, the best of the Ascended ones, and my strength is directly worth it in Naruto, okay? Brothers, support me if you like this couple! 👍👍👍

I couldn't stand it as soon as I started reading it. The writing was so uncomfortable that I couldn't get into it at all.

Can you please stop calling Kakashi Kaden, Kai, Kaihuang or something like that? It would be very dramatic.

When the protagonist was 16-17 years old, he couldn't even solve an advanced illusion? ? ? Traveled through a living dog

I'm not saying that I mean to deliberately slander the third generation. Looking at Naruto's life as a child, he was just a punching bag for everyone, and he was obviously a hero. Look at how Konoha White Fang was forced to die. Those public opinions could not have emerged without the Hokage's acquiescence. Look at the Uchiha genocide, don't the third generation know about it? There are many more, like Kabuto Yakushi, The Tragedy of the Orphanage. Sandai really doesn't know? Indulgence is scarier than indifference.

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