The Erosion Game

It doesn't look good to take refuge in the government.

Some suggestions, First, there is never a shortage of madmen and smart people in the world. Since the protagonist can get 9 points, there may not be a madman who can reach 20 points. Second, the first stage is already a firearm that can reach human limits. So what about the second stage? Do you think the government is all a fool? The Tenth Man theory does exist, and there will always be people who propose the possibility of individual transcendence. Third, with the advent of guns around the world, the school mortality rate is quite high. Students are inherently impulsive, especially in high schools and junior high schools, and there are many who have dark hearts (myself included, if it is really corroded, if I can survive, I will definitely be in the dark camp)

It's too dark of a country. Normally in this situation, the country will only win over people. According to what the author writes, the country is simply trying to attract hatred. Even if you are forced to join, you will not have a good impression of the country. The country he writes about is like a fool

The protagonist is being teased like this, and he ends up being a watchdog! Does the country dare to use it? Is this really recruiting? This is really a way to attract hatred! How can we control the people who recruit people when they have the strength? So damn blind

The early plot of the protagonist being captured by the country was too embarrassing, and the next path was written to death. The country is not that unreasonable, but after you write this, if the protagonist continues to work for the country, the readers will not agree, and the only way is to escape from the country.

I came in after reading the introduction. The beginning poisoned me to death. What a zz. It's a story about torturing the main character. It's really rubbish.

Guo Jia probably already knew how to exchange items for grappling, and then even though he knew that all of them had mental problems, he took away all the people who were confirmed to have the cards and controlled them without saying a word. He really wasn't afraid of meeting someone who was good enough to exchange for a virus weapon, or just holding back 20 points to make a nuclear bomb, or dying together. In this setting, Guo Jia's attempt to commit suicide is too obvious.

Sigh... The first hundred chapters are too dissuasive. They are obviously reading novels to relax, but they end up making them angry, which makes it difficult for readers to accept... I hope it will get better and better in the future 😟

I think the contact with the police and the government in the beginning part is too affecting to read. Personally, it creates an atmosphere that the government does not distinguish between right and wrong and is deliberately hostile to the protagonist, especially the part where the police question the protagonist. It makes no logical sense at all. It feels like it is just to prepare the protagonist to leave the government in the future, but it is too rough.

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