Infinite Death Subway

The writing style is quite good, surpassing that of most authors at the starting point, and the storytelling ability is no problem. But I really can't understand what is being written? ... The definition of online novels is popular literature. To put it simply, it is what you write. Readers will not be confused after reading it. I basically read the beginning of your novel sentence by sentence, but I was still confused when reading it, especially when the inexplicable six clusters of stars turned into six people in the second chapter. I felt that my brain was burning and I was too lazy to think... I suddenly lost all patience and interest in the third chapter. Modern mobile phone network reading pursues ease and straightforwardness, so short-form articles will always be the main force in the market. Author, please don't think my words are unpleasant. I think you should study online articles carefully, especially look at the rankings and best-selling works. They all have one thing in common - that is, the text is concise and clear. After reading a chapter, you will immediately know clearly what the story is about, and there will be no doubts. This is actually the standard for online writing. Tell the story clearly, don't make it abstruse. There is also writing style. There is really no need to pay as much attention to wording and modification as when writing an essay. Smoothness is enough. As for the ones you chose, those are the quotes in the introduction. Most people have never heard of them. For example, when copying songs on the entertainment theme, someone copied a bad "Little Apple", and you copied an unpopular "Chopin Piano Concerto No. 2". You have a strong sense of style, but at the same time you have also lost a large readership market. "Little Apple" Although it's a bad street, it's familiar so there won't be any dyslexia. The vulgar can only be elegant. This is also the standard for online writing. If you just love writing, grades don't matter, just pretend I didn't say that. But if you want to write a successful online article, I hope you can sum up your experience in the next book. With your writing style, as long as you master the methods of online article creation and try to write stories that cater to the market's taste, I don't think it is difficult. 🙏

I came here with the idea of ​​​​subway, and I think the idea is quite good, but the writing is not bad at the beginning. It seems that I want to create a unique character image, but the writing is a bit nondescript. It clearly feels like a person with an above-average IQ a moment ago, and the next second he immediately turns into a reckless man, and that's it.

Because it was the first time for the author to write an article, to be honest, there was not much of an outline for this book. Then he signed the contract in a daze, and then began his career of coding. However, since it was the first time I wrote it, and without an outline, to be honest, except for the first world, the other worlds were almost all written when the previous world was about to be completed, through very few readers' suggestions in the early stage. (This is also the reason why it is said to be unpopular among book friends... Of course, there is also a part of the world that I want to write about, but unfortunately I can't write it well...) Therefore, there will be some loopholes or BUGs in the content, or some strange things will appear... Moreover, because of the outline, the rest of the writing gradually fell apart... (Ashamed... Really... I wanted to revise but it was already too late...) Of course, this book is not impossible to read. I feel that the previous volumes are still acceptable. At least I am satisfied with the writing. Later, due to digging holes or other reasons, some places were not handled well, so poisonous spots may be left. However, fortunately, as everyone can see, the results of this book can be said to be disastrous. In this way, I also breathed a sigh of relief. After all, I didn't trick too many people. But! What I want to say is! From the time I wrote the book to now, from the day it was recommended, to now, I have basically been updating it twice a day. It can be said that I haven't missed a day! So, it proves that I still have something to guarantee. Then, the next book! I am fully prepared, so there is no need to worry that I will trick everyone again... Therefore, I hope that after reading such a long complaint, someone can click to save it and wait for the world that is about to end to see my next world. Maybe you will like the next book? (A little secret: There is a connection between the two books, but in the second book, the connection will be very deep...)

Has the author never been to the book review section?

Damn, I don't even know who the protagonist is.

Let me put it this way, the subject matter and the world are well chosen, but the content is a bit monotonous, and Pig's Feet has a low sense of presence. The profession of Pig's Feet is a bit embarrassing, and the setting at the beginning is a bit unclear, so it can be considered a series of works by the author. I hope the author can write better after finishing it.

The protagonist is made more unpleasant and likes to meddle in other people's business

Did Death Train copy you or did you copy Death Train?

I just want to say that anime is not easy to write. I think they failed when writing. I just want to know if Superman can beat Ultraman 😰

I'm confused and can't understand

IntroductionWhat did I see?→_→? Goblin Slayer!!!!

The author probably doesn't have a recommendation position, and the results are too bad for so many words. . .

Mainly in terms of writing, the decoration is very exaggerated and has a very middle-grade writing style, but the content is not bad.

This data is too bleak, I'm shocked, I shouldn't be.

I suddenly found this novel and discovered the seventh world. . . . Bro, I'm chasing you

Around the time I read The Third Station, I found it to be an interesting book overall, but I always felt like I couldn't understand it after reading it. 1. The ability system is not very obvious. The description of the moves is very well written and very realistic, but the power is a bit vague. In the first and second stations of strength, except for the improvement, it is mentioned that the strength and magic power have become stronger, but it is not felt in the book. It may also be that the opponent's strength is also improving. Apart from the difference in moves, the power seems to have no feeling. 2. The difficulty of the ticket is not proportional to the redemption. The number of tickets obtained based on the protagonist's aura cannot be exchanged for anything. It is very difficult to pass one station, but the final number of votes cannot be exchanged for anything. The enhancement is not obvious. Without the protagonist's aura, ordinary people feel powerless and cannot survive the second or third station. 3. Facilities can be improved, adding more blocks each time you enter, such as dining cars, training rooms, etc. 4. My personal feeling is that the strength is still not obvious. I felt there was some improvement in the second station. The improvement was even greater in the third station, but there was no difference in comparison. The protagonist always fights very hard against the enemy. It takes a long time to deal damage, and there is no feeling. Moreover, it seems that after every battle, the magic power is almost used up. He is always beaten or evenly matched, and finally he suddenly solves it with a big move. How to put it, it feels like he has not improved his strength. The fight is too hard, which is a bit boring to watch. The battle is too long. , I will want to skip the subsequent battles, because I guess it is another very hard battle. The protagonist is weak and the opponent retreats. The result will not be until the battle before returning, and the previous ones are all transitions. 5. I am thinking about how to determine the difficulty of the world if new people come at every station, assuming that the old people pass ten stations. The strength gap between the new people and the old people is too big at this time. It is too easy for the old people to pass by the new people. Otherwise, the old people will not be able to survive at all. Unless it reaches a certain level, there will be no new people and only old people or different cars will be merged. However, the author has not written about it later. This is something I am looking forward to.

The author is very capable. Now that I'm on the road, I'd better find someone to cover the ads. It's so miserable that I didn't even look at it.

This is the first time I see someone writing about Sword and Soul, and I love Pao Pao Lan so much. . High double ponytail

The novel is okay, why is there no one?

I was thinking about which ability is more suitable for starting, but I never thought of any reliable ones. Do you have any good ideas, book friends? I think Blacklight Virus is pretty good.