The Legend of Hailibu

I accidentally saw the author's masterpiece while passing by with a startling glance. After reading it, it deeply touched my heart. The writing is light and simple, and the overall story structure is very good. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are by no means a novice. As far as the subject matter of the story is concerned, it is quite unique. First of all, the title of the book is attractive enough. Really like it. The writing style is also delicate enough in terms of details, and the reading experience is great. The most amazing thing for me is that the pictures are very rich. It should be very promising as a publication or adaptation. However, there are a few points that I think the author should also pay attention to. Of course, my personal suggestion is that I hope Haihan will forgive me for any shortcomings. The first is that the pace of the opening can be faster. Quickly entering the main line will be of great help to grasp the readers. Second, in terms of character creation, you can focus on distinctiveness and distinctive words to make the tasks have a clear recognition or identity. This is very important. That's all for the time being. The shortcomings do not hide the good points. The author's works are definitely excellent. I hope they will get better and better. I will continue to pursue them every day. Love you

I am a student who read the article for the first time and never left a comment. When I read the article for the first time, I chose the novel written by the author and teacher. How should I put it, anyway, I feel that it is different from the evaluation of online articles that I have heard from other people. The most important point is that I feel that after reading the author's article, it will be of great help to my writing ability and skills. In terms of story structure and character creation, if I can achieve this level, then the problem of composition will not be a problem. And a very important point is that the whole story is interlocking, and the logic and completeness of the story are very good. Although I used to think that Internet articles are not a literary subject, and I think authors of serious literature should check a lot of them, but from the facts, it is not the case. I will continue to work hard and learn from the teacher.

Although the author is writing a novel, the things he expresses are very real, and many of them touch his heart~~

Evil skins are everywhere, but interesting souls are few and far between. The flesh-and-blood words are always so touching, like the emotional expression of a roller coaster, making the story more alive and the characters more vivid. When I read the later part of the book, I couldn't help but feel sad in my heart, which shows that for a sense of substitution, the first person cannot do it. The emphasis is on the writing skills. Every time I read a novel, I always have a different experience. Perhaps this is a feature of this work that attracts me. Good works give people a deep understanding, and excellent words give people joy and sadness, giving readers a series of characters of joy and sorrow, and a vivid sense of picture, which is really enjoyable. But I want to ask if I can write more joyfully in the later stage. I am a little afraid of abuse. Although it is so touching, I am still a baby after all. I have been chasing articles in the morning, and I have to continue to chase in the afternoon. Please keep updating, I will catch up with you soon... By the way, I have had several mobile phones confiscated for chasing articles. Can I consider reimbursement for this? Snort……

The writing is very good, I will try my best to update it, please pay attention. Hahahahahahahahaha

Anyone who writes code knows that the thoughts of the novel are the thoughts of the author. There are many things that we may not be able to experience personally in our lifetime, but because of words and language, we have room for imagination.

The boss hasn't been here for a long time. A bit busy. Come back when you're done. I love you, but don't stop updating.

The writing is very good. If you write it according to your own ideas and write your own characteristics, I believe it will get better and better.

Rare. This work would be even more exciting if it were made into a TV series

This article will become popular sooner or later, it is much better than that garbage

It looks great, but it doesn't update quickly.

I really like the heroine, I really wish the author would publish all the books in one big breath!

The plot of this book is exciting and the story has its own characteristics, but it is not satisfying. The author would like to improve it.

The article is very clear, the plot is compact, and the touching parts will make you cry! The work of a great god

Very good, I really like the heroine.

It is not easy for people to survive anywhere, and there is no pure land anywhere these days.

With your unique ideas and your rich literary skills, I believe you will succeed 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹😄😄

He is very high-level and capable. He must have read a lot of books. He obviously has insufficient cultural heritage and knowledge reserves to write a book like this.

The book is good, please write slowly. I don't care if a book is updated quickly or slowly. I only care whether the book is worth reading.

It's really good to read. Please wait and see when the author will update it!

The author's words are very particular, concise and without any nonsense, and the plot setting is very attractive. I hope it can be turned into a film and television drama 🤭

Architectural space is too simple

When you click on it, it will start to Chapter 2. Where did it go?

The plot in the following chapters is much smoother than the previous chapters. The author is getting better and better as he writes!

I only update this little every day, can you update a few more chapters? It was extremely frustrating to wait.

The author's writing is very good and the plot is excellent. I look forward to a return visit.

Pass by, pass by, pass by. . . . Don't miss it🤭🤭

The concept is really clever, there are laughs and tears, and it's getting better and better.

The author's subject matter is novel and the location is surprising. The protagonist Hailibu is vividly portrayed and the details are well described. The plot of the story is well arranged, interesting and exciting. I hope you will continue to update it, come on!

Your sister is so beautiful. This is called a novel. It is of a high standard. [Fn=2_9]