My Equipment Forge

After reading the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist was a bit arrogant, wretched, and without a sense of crisis. Will this be the same character in the future? I hope to inform you in advance that to be honest, I am tired of watching the protagonist with a wretched personality and want to watch something more serious.

Alas, after looking through it, I promised to have a relaxed daily life, but it turned out to be a slap in the face again.

If you have any good suggestions, I hope you can share them 🤝

Boss, let's take off, give me a hand😁😁

I feel like I don't quite understand the world view the author gave me. What I want to say is that this novel lacks world structure. I don't understand the lack of value (level) at all, and there is no sense of strength and weakness.

Chapter 2: Persuading to quit, sorry author

After reading the first few chapters, I feel like the main character is not good enough. In that world, are beautiful women as shown in modern pornographic pictures?

It's quite satisfactory, it doesn't have any big poisonous points in the early stage. It's just that the plot is relatively old-fashioned.

How to say it! In fact, I personally think that the drugging part is really a failure. If you don't know how to write about battles, just downplay it. Is this really boring? I personally think this is the first poisonous point in this book.

I haven't read the novel yet, but I really like this genre.

´<_`This kid is short-sighted.

In fact, the author does not need to write about systems. Have you read Abel the Wizard? That book also writes about Horadic cubes. It may be better to just focus on the cubes.

Bro, there has been no update for three days.

I'm afraid this one was cut. It really hurts.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It was originally quite interesting to write, but if you suddenly forcefully clean up a robber (no matter how young he is, he is still a robber), you will have bad views and will never see him again.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Last updated 29 days ago? Is this entering the palace?

What do you think, the protagonist's smell of hanging silk is a bit serious. The second is that the protagonist has more relatives, so it is a big hole. Why do you say that, because when the protagonist was bullied and embarrassed, no one came to help him, except for Owen. Third, in the article, the status of the so-called members of the aristocracy seems to be low, just like the children of modern wealthy families.