Destruction of Konoha: Pain's Hegemony

First of all, the author, you have written a different Naruto fanfic, at least according to your own ideas. I would like to support this first 👍. And so far, the author has written quite well and has many ideas. He writes like Nagato. Here is another wave of support 👍 If I were Nagato, I would be in a world where Naruto's fourth war is about to begin, what can I do, or what do I want to do. Then let me talk about mine: What I want to do is to master nuclear weapons (Earth Explosion Star) to destroy the country in an instant, and then my own Rain Ninja Village will become a big country. No one dares to provoke a large-scale war. If it cannot be fought, it can only be a small-scale conflict. Slowly use the power of ninjas to develop civilian and military forces. Those who are willing to join us can join the Rain Ninja Village to share the cake, take the highest level of force into their own hands and take the initiative, unite all those who have the same goal of Nagato's way (to unify the ninja world), and then conquer those who disagree with force and create a great unification. If it doesn't work in one year, then ten years will pass. In the end, we will all be a family and the hatred will be gone. Even if there is a general direction, it is fine. We will not be able to make big waves, and finally we will go into space. Transfer conflicts. Haha, this is my Nagato... Please don't criticize the random writing! In the end, although not many people reviewed the book and discussed it, many people probably read the book silently to support it. Anyway, it's the author. We have never seen Naruto written from Nagato's perspective. Most of them write about Konoha and we're tired of it. There are very few of these. I'm a big supporter 👍👍 Please accept my knee.

I just want to say that it is very poisonous. In the first chapter, in order to allow the author to time travel, various main plots are thrown away. The protagonist claims that he understands Nagato's heart best, and then creates a lot of false plot outlines, and then is punched to death. After the time travel, the character of Nagato is not brought to life at all. The protagonist claims to understand Nagato's true thoughts, but the result is that it is dark for the sake of being dark. I can't stand it. It feels like the whole story is about the protagonist comforting himself. Highly toxic.

I very much agree with your philosophy, but I'm sorry. There is indeed a reason why you were scolded. I read dozens of chapters as written and I tolerated it. The feeling you give me is that you can fart but not shit. This is the subject you mentioned. Why is the boss behind the scenes successful? Their writing style and storyline are indeed better than yours. So practice your writing first. Come on, I'll slip away first.

This book is my favorite among all the Naruto fanfics I have read. Good luck to the author. Now in the later stage, most of the characters' IQs are online. The only thing that is not good is that Naruto's darkening is too deliberate and lacks a sense of identity. I think it would be better if Naruto was designed to be the same as the original or even more holy, so that the conflict would be better? There is also Yondaime who said that killing 10,000 people is a bit awkward and does not fit the character. It is in line with Naruto's character to learn to recognize darkness and then yearn for light more. Will the protagonist be more interesting when he conflicts with Naruto? Wouldn't it be better for people who support Naruto to talk about it? There are many more that I don't want to write for the time being. I hope the author can see 🤭 whether the author can still control the character in the later period.

First of all, this is a Dark King of Hegemony farming series! The author has his own ideas. First of all, the author has not made the supporting characters too stupid or too naive. In other words, the author deliberately wrote something that jumped out of the silly and sweet passion of the original work. Written from a dark perspective. It has a unique flavor and is not suitable for people who are passionate about the Party. It is suitable for those who not only watch Cultivation but also like anime. It should be solemnly stated that this is not a light-hearted and hilarious farming stud harem story. However, the author has indeed made a lot of magic changes now, and the pace is a bit slow! Tell me a few more words about blackening that I know about. Like the original novel, I have always disagreed with Naruto's behavior as a saint. (Perhaps because the anime is for children, the hands of the protagonist group must be clean. As a ninja, I have never seen Naruto actually kill a person, either by a last hit or by a serious injury, such as the villain's self-destruction. The only black Zetsu seems to have been sealed and not completely killed) And the so-called, the system of the Hyuga family and (forced) Hizashi voluntarily died. It is said to protect the Byakugan, but I think it is obviously a system created by some ambitious person among the ancestors of Hyuga. You said, protect Baiyan, okay. After death, you can activate the curse seal to destroy it, yes. But why, the caged bird is not within everyone's control. But in the hands of the Zong family? (For example, one day when the Hinata family was separated, he knew that he would die, so why not activate it by himself) To protect the Byakugan, why can the Clan family recite the tightening curse? This has nothing to do with having your eyes taken away by outsiders! The tight curse will hurt, but the Hyuga clan can kill them at any time. The branch family has no hatred towards the Zong family, how funny is that! When Hizashi saw that Hinata's talent was poor, he inadvertently had a small idea and showed murderous intent? Then Rizu directly launched the spell. ⊙∀⊙! Aren't they brothers who love each other? Neji was dumbfounded. There was also Hizashi who took the initiative to die in his place. So what if Hizashi refuses! The top management of Konoha and the Hyuga clan have already decided. If he doesn't obey, he will be sent by the next day, and then the Zong family will activate a curse to kill him directly and hand over the body. It was said to the outside world that it was voluntary. Why, do you want to check? (Does the Elder Hokage family agree?) It was precisely because he knew the consequences of his disobedience that he finally (forced) died voluntarily. This is the same as in modern society. You have been laid off, but you are given a voluntary resignation letter. Leaving the letter was entirely to protect Neji. (However, even if Hizashi refuses to obey, the clan's Hyuga eye-rolling method can be completely faked). As long as he is not reincarnated by the dirty soil, he will never be killed. How many people in the ninja world know that he was killed by a curse.

Haha, I just read the first chapter and read the book review, and it was as poisonous as I expected.

Nice! Interpreting Naruto from a different perspective is indeed a new experience! The problem is, when I read other fanfics now, I also hope that Konoha will be destroyed. QAQ It feels like almost everyone in this fanfic is black.

I have to say, I enjoyed watching it. Naruto without fighting is not worthy of being called Hokage, just like Boruto

I like this book very much. I hope the boy can keep writing and write well.

All ordered. This Naruto book is excellent. I hope the author can keep writing it.

It's beautiful, good luck to the author♪(^∇^*)

1 I can't write novels 2 A bookworm for ten years 3 I'm not a Konoha Party member 4 The outline is pretty good, this idea is good 5 After reading six chapters, I gave up! The writing is not good, and the protagonist's roles in the first six chapters may not be more than two. 6 There are too many novels, and it is not easy to find a good one. The slow-burning ones are usually only read if they are recommended by others 7 It is not easy for the author of the eunuch, thank you for your hard work. I'll give you a recommendation ticket before I leave, come on.

Very well written. I like it very much. More would be nice.

The dialogues between the characters are too dramatic The dialogues between anime characters have turned into dialogues between fantasy characters.

I am a fan of you because of your first chapter of the work.

15 More fun to watch author Chongya

The promise has been fulfilled, although it is not much, it is a sincere thought, come on!

An author who thinks he knows Naruto well. Haha, what I write is as if I have never watched Naruto. I wanted to read the rest, but I couldn't bear the poisonous points of each chapter. If you copy the original work from the early stage and don't want to change the plot, I can accept it. I can also accept it if you let go of a lot of named enemies of Konoha. But if you change the settings of the original work, I can't accept it. The most important thing is that you don't feel that you have changed it. Do you think this is the meaning of the original work? Give a few examples. 1. The jinchuriki tailed beast will not die unless its chakra is taken away, and the jinchuriki will be resurrected if it dies. Poisonous or not? Then tell me how Mizukage died? 2. The Uzumaki clan is just a branch of the Senju clan, and Nagato only has the Uzumaki bloodline. I don't know how to explain this. I remember it was said in the manga that Nagato has the blood of Senju and Uzumaki. Maybe I'm remembering it wrong. 3. Xiang Ling became obsessed with Pain's chakra after sensing it? Maybe you don't know why Xiang Ling likes Sasuke? 4. Kisame didn't know that Obito said that he was Madara, and he didn't know about the Eye of the Moon plan. Kisame is loyal to Akatsuki who takes him in and is led by Pain? You probably don't know that Kisame brought Toto here? Jin Xiao also agreed with Obito's Eye of the Moon plan. I've only read more than 70 chapters, and I won't mention the other poisonous points one by one. I can't stand it anymore.

Naruto's darkening direction is wrong. What readers want to see is a Naruto with the temperament of an evil boss, not the stubborn madman he is now. Darkening does not mean that humanity has been wiped out. Operations like Naruto's killing of the Hyuga family's population are really low. Do you think indiscriminate killing counts as blackening? Popular villains in comics never like to kill indiscriminately. They are unwilling to kill but have to kill for the noble beliefs in their hearts, such as Kaneki Ken and Lelouch. In addition, the darkening of the protagonist usually involves severe blows and unimaginable torture in order to safeguard the so-called justice. These tortures will resonate with readers and make people feel that the darkening of the protagonist is reasonable. However, I don't think the darkened Naruto in this book has experienced anything. At most, Jiraiya died and he failed to take revenge. I really feel that the subsequent experiences are nothing. Naruto's character of repaying evil with kindness will never reach the point of being paranoid and killing indiscriminately. If you want to forcibly blacken it, you might as well write about Hinata dying to protect Naruto and even being fucked by others, Naruto fighting to save the village but still being betrayed by the village, or his companions and elders trying to deprive him of the nine tails that protect him in order to develop ninjutsu, etc... I think any example is better than the illogical blackening event in your article. Finally, Naruto is not a fool. In the comics, his combat intelligence is very high, but he seems naive in dealing with people. It's not that he can't figure out many problems, but he just doesn't think about it from a rational perspective. Once he thinks about it, his IQ and EQ are definitely not low. But in addition to becoming paranoid and cruel in character, Naruto in your article also has lower IQ and EQ, making him unlikable. Okay, I didn't expect to be able to say so much. To sum up, the plot of this book is indeed not very good. But I still read it sometimes, because the author has written a sense of the ten deadly sins, and I think the dark parts are somewhat interesting. I highly recommend the author to write a new book instead of writing a fanfic, and instead write a suspenseful, scary and dark original book. It will definitely do better than the current one.

Let me say a few more words... I admit that I read this book with someone else's free account. Maybe some people will criticize me for paying for it... But I still want to say a few words. The first 200 chapters are really good. The logic, characterization, and main and branch lines of the plot are really good; But starting from Chapter 300, our protagonist Nagato directly becomes an NPC. The author's goal is to look at the entire ninja world. Often the protagonist does not have a chance to show his face for 10 to 20 consecutive chapters. It is clear from the previous article that Konan is the heroine, but the frequency of her appearance in the article is not as high as Gaara, Terumi Mei, Karin, etc., And there is no emotional drama at all. It is unclear why the author wants to write Konan; Starting from Chapter 450, the plot collapsed, all kinds of people, horses, monsters and monsters came into battle, and the main line [Unification of the Ninja World] could hardly proceed; After Chapter 500, the strength of the Ninja World began to explode (understand that I used the word "explosion"), and the real Jonin was not as good as a dog; After Chapter 600, the power system collapsed (yes, it collapsed), and our protagonist Nagato faced life and death crises many times. There were many more unknown characters in various parts of the ninja world (I don't watch the theatrical version, so I may not know much, don't judge me on this) whose strength is second only to Nagato. But brothers, now Nagato's body has been perfectly integrated into Hashirama's cells and has complete control over the Samsara Eye. Such combat power can rank 5th to 7th in the ninja world described by the author... Whirlpool physique + Hashirama cells + fully controlled Samsara Eye + fruits of the sacred tree (mostly chakra fruits) + One-tail Shukaku = Can't enter the top five in the ninja world? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! Are you kidding me?                                                                                                               <

This book exploded at the beginning. The subject matter is very good but there are three poisonous points: 1. It has something to do with Danzo. No matter what the reason is, people who read the novel have come from the original work. Not many people like Danzo, the scapegoat, and working with Danzo is even more disgusting. You can completely steal it with your strength. With Payne's six-path super movie level strength, there is no problem. 2. The Rinnegan Eye is not Nagato's, but Uchiha Madara's. Ben will definitely play tricks on the Rinnegan Eye, and he will probably set it to automatically use Rinnegen to resurrect Uchiha Madara at a certain point in time. This can be seen in the anime when Madara was reincarnated in the dirt and thought it was Nagato who resurrected him, and he said that Nagato is so big. It can be speculated that Nagato himself is a puppet, and Nagato cannot use the true power of the Rinnegan. My personal recommendation is to go to the moon to grab the Rinnegan. The Super Shadow level can also defeat Toneri who does not have the Rinnegan. The method of entering the moon is in the movie version. After grabbing it, you can dig out your own Rinnegan. Or tampering with Nagato, like the one he did with Obito, how to solve this? 3. Without the system, how could Nagato defeat Otsutsuki Kaguya, the ancestor of chakra, and he did not have the power of the Six Paths Sage. Even if you use Sasuke Naruto, how could you defeat them who have the power of the Six Paths? How can they listen to you? The Immortal of Six Paths won't just sit idly by? How to solve this bug?

Author... Chapter 44 is over, is it Chapter 46? Is it okay to call this a chapter number? I thought you updated 3 times

I feel so disgusted when I see Naruto. I don't think he has become a black man, but he has become more rebellious, paranoid, selfish and unreasonable. For me, the main characters in hot-blooded series are a bit off-putting to me. They seem to be hot-blooded but are actually very rational and selfish and paranoid. The feeling of this book has been strengthened. Naruto has always regarded Nagato as a villain, but from what aspects did he see it? "Originally, as long as Uzumaki Naruto heard Nagato dare to say such words on behalf of the Ninja Alliance, he would immediately speak out, because in Uzumaki Naruto's heart, all the Kage present are qualified to speak on behalf of the Ninja Alliance, only Nagato, the evil bastard, is not qualified. Kill Die Jiraiya, kill Fukasaku Sennin, kill Konohamaru... Killed too many Konoha villagers, how can such an executioner with hands stained with Konoha's blood deserve to speak on behalf of the Ninja Alliance!" The above is taken from 5? In Chapter 96, Naruto only judged evil people from his own perspective and killed the people he cared about. Of all the ninjas, there was no one with blood on his hands. Why did he kill the Hinata family without thinking that they were your friends and family? Oh, yes, Neji still killed them. The key is that people think it should be done. The friends also thought it was appropriate, and even advised Neji to show off, since his family would be fine anyway. All of them have poor IQ but pride themselves on being righteous. I talked a lot about my Ninja Way and so on, killing all those who are plotting and so on. But in reality, just do it to anyone who doesn't like to listen to what they say, and even your friends will die. If Danzo provokes me, I will fight him; if the daimyo supports me, I will kill the daimyo. I also thought that it would be better if I acted as a shadow, and I was so confident. Whether Tsunade or Danzo, when dealing with things, they always consider the village and so on. I think Naruto really wants him to come, why should he come? He is nothing but messing around. Although there are several places where it is suggested that Kyuubi is instigating him to cause trouble, I think it is still the problem itself. Later on, there is also an inexplicable 100% match with the Nine-Tails. Is it probably the villain route? This Naruto is really disgusting to me, but there is no way that the original protagonist will not die in this book, and he will continue to disgust me in the future. . .

，，，（） These are nothing!                                       You suddenly resurrected the entire Uchiha family, and sacrificed two Sharingan eyes of the Uchiha Reincarnation, to forcibly shake time and space, cancel the Uchiha Reincarnation, and resurrect them to their previous appearance. Finally, another technique that can forcibly summon the eyes in life? Nagato: 666, when fighting, you must fight with a roar! I'll beat your mother! Why didn't Madara just summon my eyes away when he was resurrected?

The protagonist Nagato went to resurrect Shiro, but did not go to resurrect their companion Yahiko first, and Konan didn't say anything. This friendship is like a boat that breaks up when it capsizes. . . . Nagato won't talk about it, but the friendship between Konan and Yahiko can be witnessed.

The novel has always followed the original work, and in the end it was just for the protagonist to say: You are fired! " All I can say is that I'm screwed! Can you imagine someone writing One Piece, where the protagonist traveled through time and became Luffy and kept following the plot. The only difference is that Luffy became dark! Like Kidd, he started killing innocent people indiscriminately! But the plot did not change... Readers said that following the plot was boring. If you want to read the plot, just read the original work! But the author said, wait a minute I have foreshadowing... I still followed the plot when we reached the top battle, until Whitebeard had a heart attack! Luffy took out a bottle of quick-acting heart-saving pills... But Whitebeard still died after taking the pills! Ace also died... The plot still follows the original... Author, my next foreshadowing is at the end... Stay tuned... I'm sorry!

After reading the author's words, let's talk about my personal feelings. The reason why so many authors write about Konoha well is not because both the protagonists in Kishimoto's works, Saunaru, are in Konoha. Moreover, Konoha is the largest village in the Land of Fire. The land is fertile and easy to defend but difficult to attack. This creates a situation like ancient China. I won't fight it. You and I can also grow by farming, and I can play whatever I want, but the other four countries cannot. The Kingdom of Thunder is full of mountains, the Kingdom of Earth is barren, the Kingdom of Water is an island with few resources, and the Kingdom of Wind is a desert. If these four countries don't fight to plunder resources, they will perish, so Konoha will always be the one to start a war. In the eyes of most people, Konoha is the side of justice, and the four major kingdoms are the evil forces of chaos. Good will win and evil must die. This is a law accepted by many readers Naruto is also written around Konoha. Many authors have an attitude of being familiar with the characters of Konoha. They write about Konoha directly and ignore the darkness of Konoha, or just throw the pot to Danzo no matter how they write. However, Kishimoto has very few descriptions of the four countries, which leads many authors to not know about other NPCs except for a few important figures in the four countries. Unless they are boss-level, few people are willing to write the protagonists in other countries In addition, most readers like Huan is flaunted with Sauna, he is the protagonist after all. If the author fails in writing, many readers will probably criticize him So there are the above authors who praise Konoha, and the author who has to be praised, the biggest reader in the world The above is my summary, tsk tsk(๑￣ ̫ ￣๑) My fingers are so numb after typing for so long. It's almost six or seven hundred words.

In a word, he is trying to whitewash Danzo. He believes that Danzo's first priority is to defend Konoha. It is suspected that he has never watched Naruto.

I am Shennong, I have tried hundreds of poisons without dying, and I despise the poisons in the world. Now, Nong Guan has returned from this book. Every time I think about the medicinal properties of this book, I feel very tight in my chest. You know that the peasants underestimate the greatness of the world, and this book will harm the fate of the peasants. Fortunately, Nong could resist this poison for a while, so he wrote this letter to tell all fellow Taoists: Leave it alone. Burning incense to comfort the farmers is enough.

It's so poisonous. It's awesome to have more than a thousand chapters in this book. The protagonist has a glassy heart and a psychopath.