Konoha's Destiny Twins

When I saw the Land of Rain, I couldn't stand it anymore. To be honest, the previous abusers are still within the acceptable range. But in the Land of Rain, the author clearly wrote about the psychological description of whether Danzo sending Minato and the others away would be a trap, but he did not take any precautions. Stupidly and desperately fighting with Nagato, and still talking big in his heart, he is not afraid of changing the plot, then you try to change it, you have the guts to say it, but you don't have the guts to do it, in the end, he was beaten half to death by Nagato, which is a set of frustrations. It's really a dog-licking attribute. It would be a bit disgusting if he didn't defect and went back to continue his battle of wits and courage with Danzo. I carefully analyzed Shimizu's position and found that most of the people he cared about were dead, the female supporters were dead, the members of the previous team were dead, and there was nothing left to miss about Konoha except a bunch of bad things. And there is too much room for defection. Kill the root ninja first, maybe you can save Skyfire, and then rebel as a pledge to see if you can save Yahiko, and then go underground with Akatsuki, and then expose Danzo and Hanzo's dirty methods, expose the fact that Danzo collected the Sharingan, intensify the conflict between Uchiha and the village, and weaken Danzo. However, if you forbear and return to the village, with the suspicion of the Hokage in the front and the threat of Danzo in the back, it is simply the best choice. The above are my thoughts after watching the plot of Kingdom of Rain. The author's writing skills are very good, and the combat and character descriptions are good. However, I feel that there is a problem in the design of the protagonist's mentality, which makes him feel resigned.

I can't help but say a few words. It can be seen that the author of this book really put a lot of thought into it, and the writing style is also good. From the first hundred chapters, it can be said that it is the Naruto fan that I like the most. Having said that, there are still a few toxic points: First, there are a lot of random thoughts at the end of the text. It feels very friendly to write down some of the author's thoughts when writing, but it is written directly at the end of the text. . . It's really hard to explain in words, and the sense of being out of touch is so strong that it affects reading very much. The second is that the comrades-in-arms relationship is too monotonous and rigid. Whether it is the male protagonist's personal thoughts or his attitude towards Orochimaru, the Third Generation, Danzo, and the female protagonist, I think the author has handled it very well, but when it comes to comrades-in-arms. . . It's not that you can't write about sacrificing your life for righteousness. You can write it, and it's good, but no matter how good it is, you can't keep writing like this, right? It is normal for the teammates around the protagonist to not be afraid of sacrifice, but when faced with a crisis, the teammates around him are so selfless and loving every time. . . It makes people feel uncomfortable, not only the terrible monotony, but also a kind of depression. The male protagonist obviously attaches so much importance to his teammates emotionally, but he shows such no control during actual operations. To be honest, I just think that the male protagonist is too stupid and what makes people desperate is that he has no awareness of this.

The first part was pretty good, but later on I felt like the author had drifted away, so the protagonist also drifted away, and I felt like it was starting to be a fantasy, so I stopped reading it, it was a waste of time and money.

The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, and the content is resonant and thought-provoking. It is one of the rare good books I have encountered in decades. My only regret is that I have not read a word of it.

I can feel that the author has a story he wants to tell, but it may not be consistent with the mainstream cool articles. For example, I don't like these two chapters very much. What I want to say is, if you have something you want to write, just go all the way to the dark side and don't be influenced by other people, including me. Once you have established the audience and which group of people in the online article you rely on, don't make them look different. Because there are three books I am following for this reason, one collapsed and ended, one was The Eunuch, and one recently ended suddenly. Damn it (I created an account specifically for this. By the way, Yuewen Pass is really fucking stupid) With this account, you will get three recommendation tickets every day for one month. (Remember more points) Wish you a good product soon.

In terms of the protagonist's love, the author should think about it carefully... Fandom love is really a poisonous point...

I'm not just talking nonsense, there are very few geniuses among Hokage, and even fewer monsters. Even during Prince Naru's time, there were only a dozen or so in Konoha, let alone close to the time of World War 3. So this is not a story about ordinary people in the ninja world, okay?

Persist in! Persist in! Persist in! Come on! Among the Naruto stories I have read, it is top-notch and has great potential, so you must stick to it! Come on!

The author. . I beg you to create a group

A very good Naruto novel.

The writing is very good and I support it. I also suggest setting up a book club.

I've given you the tickets, come on, duck

After reading only a few chapters, I read Must Read First. I had a good impression of it at first. After all, the author said that his writing style is online and civilian, and he has no blood or eyes. But after reading a few chapters, I felt something was wrong. First of all, the writing style is definitely not online. The description is boring and a bit flowing. I read it patiently. Some details obviously conflict with the settings. The description is also repetitive. I feel that the author has a big problem with the character... Uzumaki Maru can't learn this. I won't complain. I would rather the author said that the protagonist is not talented enough to learn. Collect it first and take the time to read it. I hope there will be surprises later...

Author, do you know why you are not popular? 🤓 Because you are too dovish. I took a look and realized, well, there has been no update for three days.

What is that fish🐠 inside the body? Is it a shark muscle?😠

I haven't read it yet, but the author has been very active in the comment section, so I think the book won't be too bad. It feels good! I'll try it and see if it's jelly or poisonous weed!

Author, if you think this book is reasonable, the protagonist in his current physical state will definitely want to be a Eight-door Dunjia. You can use various excuses not to practice, but don't ignore it directly.

After reading it in one sitting, I was surprised that it wasn't popular. There is a lot of emotional sustenance from the author in this book. ... But then, when I think about it carefully, I feel like a piece of jade that has not been polished to fine enough quality. Maybe Qingshui will become a kind of feeling for me in the future... I look forward to some degree of conflict and difference between him and Obito's character, and to understand the identity and part of it. The details of how this will come about will have to be seen later. All in all, loved this book.

I'll take your first ten thousand reward~

This book came to me on a whim on December 1, 2018. I was so inspired that I immediately conceived the outline and uploaded it in code. It's rushed, but full of enthusiasm, and I want to stick to the end of this story. Originally there was still a first half to this story, but considering that when I was a child, I was a genin and chuunin enjoying myself there... I simply started writing from the breaking point of upper nin. As for updating, we currently cannot do it twice a day, but we can guarantee one update a day, and I will write more if it is empty. I need your suggestions, discussions, and evaluations. I will read all the comments you write, read them carefully, and finally find time to reply in a unified manner. Also remember to give recommendation votes. Without recommendation votes, I feel that what I write does not have a sense of recognition. I don't hang around, I don't play in Tieba, and I don't have any writers' groups, Naruto groups, or 2D enthusiasts. I don't know how to promote it and I'm too lazy to do it. So if I think it's interesting, I'll recommend it. I'll be more motivated when I see the number of clicks and favorites that increase every day. To be honest, I check my favorites in the background at least dozens of times every day... Especially for small farmers, one more favorite can keep me entertained for three seconds. I personally feel that I am worthless... Mark it and see if I find this behavior particularly interesting when I look back on it in the future. Finally, a cry from the soul: "Salute our common Hokage dream!! Target collection of 100,000!! Let's go!!"

I have always felt that Uchiha Mikoto is suitable to be a wife

I saw the comment section and read the book again. I personally feel that the rejection of the contract for this book was not very unexpected. To be honest, I only read the first chapter and had no desire to continue reading. It's not that the writing is bad, it's because a guy with a complicated life experience like Kakashi appeared at the beginning... How to put it, I don't know if everyone who watches Naruto knows about Kakashi's life experience. At least I am the type of reader who doesn't know. Because of the anime, I stopped watching it after seeing Sasuke leave Konoha. I know about this cool teacher, but I don't know about his childhood experience. So if the Naruto story starts with fighting, training, etc., There is no problem. But if the original character appears at the beginning, it will still be a very complicated life experience, and the character's experience is not introduced at the beginning of the animation, there will be a sense of strangeness. Because these character settings do not need to be revealed in the first chapter, even if you introduce the background of the world, it will get extra points than if you introduce a character in a long way. The characters are presented through the plot, especially the original characters. I feel that there is no need to use too much pen and ink to introduce the characters straightforwardly. As a reader, I don't like reading this at all, maybe others like it. If you meet the protagonist Naruto or Sakura Sasuke at the beginning, and directly introduce the three generations of their ancestors through narration... I feel like I can write a side story. I focused on reading the comment section and found that readers mentioned that there seemed to be no battle of wits in the book. As far as Naruto is concerned, what I like most is the battle of wits in it. The chunin exam is the climax. In Konoha, I don't like Naruto at all. Instead, I prefer Sasuke and Shikamaru because one is handsome and the other is cerebral. As for Naruto... If he hadn't been the protagonist, he would have died hundreds of times. The most outstanding element of Naruto is the battle of wits. Whether it is the competition between forces or the confrontation of individual strength, it is very interesting. I feel that the protagonist's brains will be more popular. I thought it was very good after reading the first chapter of Naruto: The Savior of the World, and it felt like it was going to be popular. Why? Because there is a lot of wit and wisdom involved, the protagonist is completely cerebral. Later, I added a book to the list. At that time, the book was not popular yet. I was the second or third largest book list owner. I forgot the details. Of course, now that it is popular, there are even bigger books to add to the list. I say this because I want to say that although I cannot write as well as the author, I still have a good eye for reading Naruto stories. Some opinions may be biased, but they should have certain reference value. The above are all personal thoughts and cannot be counted. The author can just take a look at it. In fact, if it is close to 100,000 yuan and it has not been signed, you can consider restarting it. The chance of finishing it is not high, and it is not friendly to readers and yourself.

The writing is quite good, but Kuro Akatsuki is very powerful. Akatsuki didn't cheat Hanzo at the beginning. He was completely doing things to benefit society, but the slogan is relatively loud. Yahiko is a very mature person, regardless of his thoughts or will. The main tragedy of Akatsuki is that Danzo killed Hanzo's men and framed Akatsuki. Hanzo was originally worried about the growing Akatsuki, but now he felt that Akatsuki was lawless and made up his mind to destroy Akatsuki. The people in Akatsuki you write here are all simple and mindless Chuunibyou, which is a bit false.

First of all, the author keeps emphasizing that the protagonist has neither cheating nor talent. Thinking about creating an image of someone who reaches the top through hard work is nonsense. No matter which industry you want to reach the top, talent is the foundation. Hard work can only determine a person's lower limit, while talent can determine a person's upper limit.

I saw the protagonist meeting the Three-Tails in Yu no Kuni. The overall quality is pretty good among Naruto fanfics, but in my opinion there are a few big shortcomings. 1. The character of the protagonist. The protagonist can have mediocre talent and average intelligence, but his character cannot be mediocre! I feel that the protagonist in the book lacks some ambition and wildness, as well as the vision and thinking of a traveler who transcends the limitations of the natives. The protagonist is a time traveler, not a brainwashed native. 2. There is a lack of excitement for the reasons mentioned above. There is no eye-catching golden finger, and the protagonist's mental behavior is not to my liking. Naturally, there is nothing exciting about it for me. 3. Economic loopholes. The first time I read this book, I was dissuaded from reading it because of the economic loopholes set by the author in the first chapter! Now the author has changed the first chapter, but this problem still appears from time to time later! The author must understand that the world of Naruto is not the real earth. Housing prices in reality are not equal to housing prices in Naruto. Naruto is a vast land with few people and no real estate economy. The construction speed and efficiency of ninjas cannot be compared with that of the earth! And ninjas are high-income people! They are the ruling group of people who possess extraordinary power! The money earned over more than ten years of life and death is not enough to compensate for the destruction of the two wooden buildings? The money earned after more than ten years of life and death is only enough to build a sword? …………-

This... Is a way to die 😰

All ordered, come on, author! I put the book on the bookshelf very early. At that time, I still didn't know where I found the author pushing the book miserably. Everything would be fine.

It is said that this novel is good, but when I clicked it and read it, I found that it has not been updated for three months. I say goodbye.

It's a bit inconsistent, and there is no sense of empathy. In reality, I prefer to think from others' perspective. I haven't read much, so here's a little suggestion. If you agree, just read it. If you don't agree, just ignore it. First, the protagonist's actions earlier were quite reckless. . . The feeling is that if you are offline for ten minutes, come up and see the other side and touch it first. . . As an ordinary ninja, he is doing the protagonist's things, which is quite strange. It feels like IQ is off the line, such as teasing tailed beasts or teasing at home. . . Second, a person's character and beliefs must be complete with matching behaviors. In the early stage, the image of an old ANBU is directly given, and readers will imagine based on their own understanding that ordinary people, ANBU, and outstanding records in World War II, ok, the image is established, let's break it up first, I am confused, I have no feelings for my teammates, okay, let's break it off first. Well, what the hell, my record is so bad, I was beaten by someone, okay~_~ I am a rookie, I managed to survive, my teammates died, and then I felt so hateful, I was blinded, what the hell unfolded, I brought in failure, brought in the image of the protagonist, and strange things appeared again, I didn't know what the protagonist and teammates had gone through, the emotional World War II protagonist didn't even have his teammates die? Can you still be held down and beaten before? Are they ordinary people? The image is overthrown and deceived. It's really hard for people to accept the change in their hearts without any preparation. Third, regarding memory issues, reading fan fiction has the problem of strengthening memory. No one can tell what the situation of the protagonist is, but the vague performance is very strange. Maybe one day I will pay for it and forget about Nagato. At that time, I will never be able to remember the more inconspicuous plot of who his master is. However, the text is very contradictory. If I think of the Samsara Eye, then I will most likely think of the Earth Blast Star or Shinra Tensei, and then the protagonist will act recklessly. . Reckless. . . . Go up. . . Finally, I wish you better and better grades, and hope to see a better next book.

After searching for a long time, I finally found an excellent male video article! (Although I originally watched it on a pirated website) But because it is really good-looking, unlike the original Naruto fandom that was all about collecting a harem, the male protagonist in this is so widowed that even a girl like me is a little funny. It's not like the legend of the eyes like the current Naruto story. Although he finally embarked on the road of becoming a semi-Jinchuuriki, the reason behind it is also the result of the intellectual battle between Shimizu and Obishimaru. It won't make people feel that it is incredibly smooth. "After all, life always revolves around success and failure." And the emotional handling of the characters in this fanfic really makes me wonder if the author is a woman... I always feel that such delicate emotional handling is not something that someone who writes a male fandom would control (Naruto Fuxiang did a good job in this fanfic, and generally speaking, it is not as serious as the OOC in male videos. No offense to the author😁) Whether it is the friendship with Zuo Wei, or with Maru The master-disciple friendship between Hoshikosuke, or the relationship with Shisui and Megumi are all handled very well, especially the different treatment of Shisui and Megumi by Shimizu, which makes me feel that I understand Shimizu better (?) Megumi is his daughter, and Shisui is his son-in-law (haha), but because the author has indeed stopped writing for a long time, it is reasonable for the character's personality to change. And the description of the battle is really touching! Although when I first watched it, I always felt it was like a Pokémon battle. After all, the scene where you shout out the name of the move and then explain the attack effect is really inexplicably consistent. When I saw the battle, I kept thinking of Ash's voice reading the text (www). Very cute. In short, this article was the reason why I downloaded it. I bought the full text and read it again. I was really moved by Qingshui's efforts! I am also preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination. Every time I want to relax, I will think of the efforts the male protagonist has put in to fight against fate. Hard work is also a kind of talent! ! Sometimes I think of a conversation between Qing Shui and Shisui: "Teacher, why do you draw your sword so fast?" "Practice." "But I have also practiced for many years?" "How old are you this year." Many times, there is no harvest because the time has not yet come. Even if geniuses really exist, it is unlikely to be you or me. Qingshui's efforts and struggles are a reflection of each of us ordinary people, but Qingshui's ability to persevere and succeed is the most inspiring point. Hard work will definitely pay off, but if you don't try, nothing will happen. Qingshui's life will probably develop to an extent that I can't imagine, but the ending depends entirely on your choice, the author. It's great to see author updates in 2020! I had been worried about whether the author would be affected by the epidemic, but it was really great that nothing happened! Everything will be fine. Don't give up hope. I really hope to see the end of this book and will continue to support it. Of course, I won't be sad if the author gives up. I will be a little disappointed at most. After all, it is the author's first long article. Qingshui is what the author wants it to be... (There is no intention to force the author to update involuntarily, everything is based on the author's will!) I heard that every author likes to see long comments. If the author is currently encountering difficulties that I don't know about, it would be great if this paragraph could encourage you a little. Hope you can see my message.