Virtual Wars Online

Chapter seventy-nine has been revised. Now you won't think there is a problem, right?

A group has been created. Friends who want to join can come in to discuss the plot, chat and spank, 738860969

After reading a few chapters, I felt that there was a reason for the poor performance of this book. The interaction between the protagonist and his parents was so embarrassing that I couldn't stand it anymore after the second chapter. I suggested that the author make a slight modification and just write the protagonist as an orphan. It can be seen that the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas. It is recommended not to write emotional dramas. The creativity of this book is quite good, but there are many places that can make people watch to death. If these shortcomings are corrected, the performance of this book will be much better. It is estimated that many people are like me. They can't stand it when they see something uncomfortable, and then abandon the book. I hope the author can listen to his opinions! I hope the more you write, the better.

Compared with the background world view of the novel, it has a strong sense of playing house.

I see other authors have one, so I'll make one too, and I'll post anything here!

Creator Collection Post You can write down the items or creatures you want the protagonist to create, and I will arrange them according to the needs of the plot. Everyone is welcome to participate!

I still like the kind of family worshiping God, with only one protagonist. . .

Let's look at it after it's fattened up... The farming flow is still pretty good.

Author, don't you know that Qidian Orphanage doesn't deserve parents? (Laugh)

It's so awkward to watch the protagonist's interaction with his parents. Can there be less parents... It feels so poisonous and awkward.