
Primal Darkness
原初之暗
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 603k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Mystic Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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272Chapters
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It's a treasure from the sea. I've been reading this book for a long time, but I suddenly saw this book. As a bookworm with more than 10 years of reading experience, it's not easy for me to keep reading. I'm not a noob. The IQ of the supporting character is online. I don't dare to say whether he can become a god, but he has the potential to become a god. Come on, the author. Please subscribe and support! ! !
I have witnessed one author after another get married
The author may not realize the reason for the low subscription, but I will tell you that my own reading experience is just a little less exciting, not attractive, and not very impressive. For example, in the last chapter, three ghouls were killed, first tied with chains, and then burned with fire for more than ten seconds, and then burned the contents inside. This operation may seem powerful, but it is actually very ink. You wave your hand, and the flames ignite on the monster. In an instant, the monster is reduced to ashes, and then the salted fish around it are shocked. Wouldn't this be better? This is the fundamental reason. Sometimes I am too lazy to read it. I hope to adopt it.
This is a good book, I hope there will be fate-related plots in the future. When I looked at the cover before, it felt a bit like Don't Starve style.
Come on, author, the book is beautiful.
Everything about this book is good and it suits my taste, but it's just wrong! Don't! Character! Too! Many! Got it!
It's too bland. Author, you need to write something pretentious. Nowadays, everyone is fragmented and pursuing quick feedback. You are a mature author and should learn to adapt to the times.
Let's sort out the main plot and branch plots that you understand 1: The protagonist's exploration of his own body and the demon from outside (the one who appears at the end of the first volume and wants to seize the protagonist's body) and the little follower of the Necronomicon 2: Cthulhu, begins to appear The small town now, that big eye 3: Merlin series, the police chief's dark claws 3: The church and other forces with the background of the government Branch plot: 1: The most inspired spiritual medium in the small town chapter at the beginning 2: Sleeping Valley Series 3: The immortal black wizard with the wizard hunter background introduced in the movie The Killing of a Sacred Deer 4: Jason's Power in the Lake 5: The Evil Dead mid-lane Necronomicon. 6: Silent Hill 7: Sleep Dracula who appeared at the end of the valley and Emily, one of the three elders who was fused with the blood of the gods 8: The coven of witches in the third season of American Horror Story and the children of hell who may appear in the eighth season with the apocalyptic background There are others that I can't remember.
I have seen the genuine version, and after getting the genuine version, there are very few typos. Although the use of punctuation marks is basically limited to commas and periods. But it looks better. You can collect it. This book is quite good. There are very few Madonna behaviors in the early stage (I didn't think so). I recommend everyone to buy it.
In fact, it is better to write about the power of darkness. I have seen the American dramas and movies written by the author but have almost forgotten them. Moreover, the character and pretentiousness of Pig's Foot are too embarrassing. I personally recommend adding more original content. I don't like to overthink the original plot.
Description of the book's content, issues, and recommendations for a Western fantasy
The content of the book is pretty good, nothing too deviating from Western fantasy. But there are a few points to note in the book 1. Knowledge is priceless in front of magicians, wizards, and arcane masters, and it is described in books such as magicians, wizards, and arcane masters, and even other Western fantasy and Harry Potter books. 2. What's more important is that you can say that magicians have their virginity and kindness, but they all correspond to exchanges of equal value. Even if you borrow a nail from a magician, you still have to exchange it for something of the same value. The author has no problem at all. Love for no reason~ 3. There is no clear level of extraordinaryness in the book, so it seems a bit uncomfortable for most people. 4. Another point in the book is why does the protagonist take the initiative to provoke extraordinary events? I didn't get anything after winning, so I just described the knowledge deep in my memory that I can read a little more, eh, I'm speechless 5. The training system, retreat, practice quietly, and stabilize it, it seems that magicians, wizards and the like rely on fighting to support fighting. In fact, this aspect needs to be improved, and you can fight every time Completely acquire new knowledge, use recovery or briefly describe the protagonist's new abilities in latent cultivation Overall, it is much better than most western fantasy, the content is more like the Virgin, not too dark, and will be unacceptable to a large number of people today, so the author is mentally prepared 🙂
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What I want is a real demon hunter, wearing a long trench coat and a cowboy hat, carrying a special box with various modified firearms and an exquisite rune sword, walking aloof at the junction of sunshine and darkness. Traveling around, hunting demons, so agile, powerful, and elegant. To get to the point, the first part of this book was quite in line with my expectations, until I saw the emergence of the Holy See. Hey, the Holy See, the Holy See, is really just like the domestic ones, inseparable from family, family, family, sect, sect, sect, sect. The following are random comments on current Internet articles, not for this book (current articles all have the same routines. One is that the world at the beginning is as normal as a blank slate. After the protagonist suddenly gets an adventure, all kinds of monsters and monsters come out, family, sect, state secret department, ah, I almost collapsed reading this kind of article, I really can't pass the test of my normal thinking. There is another kind, the protagonist is blown away at the beginning, how awesome, punch Nanshan Kick Beihai, and after upgrading, you can beat 100 of yourself before upgrading. How powerful are you? That's not all. After upgrading, the people you encounter are still stronger than you. If you upgrade again, the people you encounter are still better than you. Hey, you said these books were taken by the author. Name, Niubi Boss, something like the God of ××, let's finish it in 1000 chapters, oh, the total plot of your protagonist becoming a god is only 100 chapters, well, the rest are all about upgrading on the way to becoming a god. There are also those kinds of system articles. The deliberate rewards are really poisonous. I don't know if anyone understands that the rewards given by the system are just enough to solve the current dilemma and leave no surplus. Why don't you give more! ? Or give less and find other ways to make up for it! ? Got it from 3am to 5:26. Sleep, sleep
After reading Chapter 48, I couldn't stand it anymore.
To offend others for no apparent reason? What did you say earlier that the matter has nothing to do with your high-minded style? In this case, why didn't the protagonist try his best to rescue the small town with thousands of people, but instead ran away with oil on his feet? ? Inexplicably angry, inexplicably unaware of the enemy's strength, so you want the enemy to kneel down and apologize to the dead? ? ? Is this drama for plot's sake? In the former, he has a kind/dark neutral character and rubs the soles of his feet when in danger, but in the latter, the dark and chaotic character kills people directly if he doesn't like it, and then he directly transforms into a paladin to hunt down the witch who accidentally created cannibals? Tell me, is the protagonist schizophrenic?
The pig's foot time traveler has a questionable IQ, so why should he help people solve cases for free, with no reputation or status? Why go to the detention center if you have the ability? ? ?
Changes in character settings are too abrupt
Before being attacked by the government, the protagonist's personality was not life-threatening. He was not blindly kind. However, once his own life was endangered, he would decisively hide the so-called kindness. He made decisive choices in life-and-death matters and was not blindly kind. This is why I can continue to watch it. However, when he was attacked by the government, he started to worry about the lives of innocent people. I really can't understand why he is so decisive if he cares about life. I have to give up the lives of people in the small town. The change is so sudden that I can't adapt. It doesn't matter if you care from the beginning. But the plot twist is very blunt and you care for the sake of caring. I couldn't read the part where the protagonist was attacked by the government. I just thought about this problem and felt a little disconnected. I couldn't stand the next few chapters. I gave up the book. I complained so much before abandoning the book. I hope the author can handle the character of the protagonist. This is very important and important.
The best way not to betray is not to give your subordinates a chance to betray, or to tell her how much the price of betrayal is. To save a vampire who is about to die, without signing some contract or something as a guarantee, you have to pay a drop of divine blood, just for the verbal agreement of surrender The protagonist is really a prodigal The protagonist was betrayed at the beginning. Although he felt a little uncomfortable, he still persevered. Now, he really can't stand it Protagonist, philanthropist?
My thoughts on the latest chapter
Personally, I feel that if the next chapter is not handled well, it will be a poisonous point. People with power have to worry about the lives of others when their own lives are threatened. And these lives are just small chips in the eyes of the higher-ups. Things that the higher-ups don't care about. How can we ensure that after the protagonist surrenders and is caught, these children will not be in danger? Know that they saw something they shouldn't have seen. This incident has been witnessed by so many people. No matter what excuse the official finds, people will definitely have different ideas. Even if the pacification work is good, people are far away from each other. If it is used as a topic for after-dinner talk, it will spread more and more widely. In terms of the temper of the senior management behind the scenes, this is not allowed, so it is deduced from this. , These children and all the witnesses must die, the scene may be made into a big explosion or a XX attack scene, one or two middle-level officials may resign, and subordinates may also be fired, but these are innocuous, because with the knowledge of the magician, these children will be gone if they are gone, and they will not care about it. It is better for the protagonist to unlock some other aspects of knowledge, such as the holy protection of the holy light, so as to repel these enemies, and use the memory clearing spell afterwards to perfectly solve this problem. The best way to calm down is always to use Wushuang, isn't it?
The protagonist is a virgin who specializes in saving the American people. Unfortunately, in the eyes of Americans, she is just a yellow-skinned monkey.
I hope the author will read it
People are desperate in the face of death, just for themselves. The previous books were too holy and too fake. It is okay to write fake stories, but they must also follow certain rules.
I'm a eunuch, right? I just stopped the update so calmly without any explanation. It's very willful.
The newly launched Madison is a character in the American horror coven. Is the protagonist going to participate in the confrontation between the witches and the children of the devil?
Five recommendation votes are given to you, come on_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_
I saw some thoughts on a single chapter after Chapter 47. Since the word count is exceeded, I will post a book review.
Fighting for life and death for a group of strange dead people, this is not the Virgin, so what is the Virgin? In fact, I don't hate the protagonists of Madonna, Zheng Zha and Wu Xiedou Madonna. I also like to watch it, as long as the plot is good and the characters are reasonable. But it is obvious that the character design of the protagonist of this book is unreasonable. A person who is not a virgin suddenly becomes a virgin, which obviously ruins the perception in order to promote the plot. It's better to set up a Virgin protagonist from the beginning. As a result, a single chapter was dedicated to explain that the protagonist is not the Virgin, but it does not explain the reason why the Virgin suddenly appeared in Chapter 47. What is the meaning of it.
Among these six books, I still feel that Primal Darkness is the best, and I can't stand the others.
There is no Eastern thing, is it all Western? Don't you have everything in your mind? Isn't the power system in the East better than that in the West? Not written at all
In order to make up the word count, it was too procrastinating.
Does the author not know how to use periods and commas?
I like your works and have already collected them. I also hope you will pay attention to and collect my work "Spiritual Master Volume".
Who can explain whether he is a eunuch? If so, then don't waste your money 😅😅