The Age of Magical Development

The protagonist is still very appealing to me. Although I don't quite understand why Luo Lin fell in love with the protagonist at first sight. Logically speaking, one of the project leaders of a large company (guess) should not pay special attention to a graduate student from a famous university. Even if he is interested, it is unlikely to be so explicit. This is just my sense. Maybe the author will have some other plots when he is older. But from the first chapter to the present, this book gives me a great sense. (Of course, I hope the heroine has not come out yet. There will be more female characters.) Don't rush to nail the heroine) Author, please give it a try

There is no brainless dialogue at the beginning, it is a hardcore masterpiece. But the lack of a battle between life and death makes it a bit boring.

It's very comfortable to watch all the way, all the IQs are online, the plot line is clear and the connection logic between the plots is also very good.

It's too poisonous. You can just read around Chapter 54. The protagonist is attacked by someone who is mistaken for Ouroboros by the cult members. Instead of asking the police station, he explains the situation clearly to a woman he has met for less than a day. How? Will the police arrest the protagonist after hearing him say "ouroboros"? Or will it be dangerous if you go out? Are the police stations full of Ouroboros people? The protagonist can't see the sun tomorrow as soon as he opens his mouth? So damn poisonous

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This is one of my favorite genres. Come on, I hope the author will work hard to write it down. Come on, I also hope more readers will like it. I wish you a book that will make you a god.

The beginning is quite deceptive. The setting of the development of magical society into the modern era is very attractive. The writing is absolutely wonderful In the end, it basically copied modern society without mentioning it. It replaced electricity with magic power and passed it by. I can't read that the description is still at the level of fantasy novels ten years ago. The real magical modern society that readers expected was not written at all Investment failure

I invested in this book, and I had a good feeling along the way. It would be better if it had more female protagonists.

The interactions between the protagonist and the supporting characters are all mysterious, which makes it awkward to watch and slows down the pace.

He should not be involved with Luo Lin anymore. He is just a scheming villain with an inexplicable sense of superiority. A top student from a prestigious school is being ignored, so it is better to ask the instructor. The plot is too far-fetched, contrary to common sense, and illogical.

There are not many starting points and only a few expressions of my feelings. Please write, please.

The author writes slowly and I feel that this book is quite good.

It's really a mistake to invest in this book. It's still readable at the beginning, but it gets more and more cliche later on. Study your magic well and don't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger all day long. It's interesting to fight between level 4 and level 3. The other books are all bad.

I don't quite understand why we didn't hand over the clues about Ouroboros to the police, but instead listened to a woman whose origins were unknown and highly suspicious.

When facing the police, he did not explain clearly, but communicated with an unknown woman. The second time, I still didn't explain clearly. The front is very interesting, but the back is about religion, girlfriend, senior sister, virtual classes, teaching students, it's all messed up and very boring. Readers relate to the protagonist's strength and different world structure, and the structure you write is similar to reality. I think the author has the ability to write, but anyone who has the ability is prone to a disease, which I call "literary youth", a kind of author's self-pleasure.

When I read Chapter 7, why does it seem like only arcanists can do research? Elemental mages should know the most about magical energy, and the energy used in magic technology, elemental engines, and magic networks should all be the research fields of elemental mages.

The article is quite good. . Is it because there are few chapters that not many people are following you?

The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carrier, and sail battleship are not suitable for aircraft carriers. Steam engines or magical arcane power need to be developed. The technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is that there should be no gods, demons, legends and extraordinary things. The combat power level system is downplayed and a real fantasy world is presented. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. There are also ferocious beasts, huge beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas as well as various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels. To construct a Chinese-style fantasy world, the world view must be deep and impactful. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races.

Stop writing about fights and it doesn't make sense.