Infinite World Overlap

Let's stop writing for 500 years. Although it's off track, it's very interesting and full of philosophical fantasy.

I originally thought the setting was quite interesting. But the author obviously doesn't have an outline. You just write whatever comes to your mind! At the beginning, the protagonist was an ordinary person, but then a superhuman sister appeared. The sister was not surprised at all that her brother suddenly had super strength, and she even had a good fight when they met? Black question mark? When Chen Tianzhu first met him, he drove a Batman car, beat a monster and was about to run away. Later, he turned into a veteran with super abilities and hidden secrets? Instead of writing super fast, spend half the time thinking through your outline. Don't think about where to write... You can feel that the author is very excited when writing, but as a reader, it is really a bit speechless...

The idea is good, and the start is good. If you keep killing monsters and exploding equipment, it will be a good novel. Unfortunately, it is a brain-burning game that kills people. Everyone is tired, and who wants to accompany you to burn your brain.

The imagination is quite big, but the author didn't sort out the outline well or something. New settings are introduced every now and then, which makes it confusing to read. There are so many bugs and there is basically no logic!

To be honest, I was attracted by the name and introduction. After reading it for a while, it became boring. The article is too boring. This is a novel, not an expository essay. I think the author may be explaining the background, but it is boring to explain everything from the beginning. You can choose to insert narrative.

The author has some imagination, but I feel that the writing is still a bit shallow. The front part often makes people want to stop, but the back part suddenly collapses, not as good as the front part! I hope the author can work hard and wish the author can become a god as soon as possible.

. Come on author! ! ! After watching pirated copies for 7 years, it was your time that made me fall back to my feet. I've watched a lot of pirated copies in the past 7 years! To be honest, it's not much better after 12 years. The big weeds are beautiful, but I am a human being who wants to eat food but not grass. Fantasy Xianxia was very popular in the past and produced many big bosses, but now fantasy is resting on its laurels. Then Urban Shuang Wen became popular (every day, pretending to be X and getting slapped in the face), which I really can't watch. Now it's light text (funny). There are several major routines for online writing: unlimited writing, novice writing, pretense writing, and flowing writing. . . . The current online literary world is in chaos. Taishan and Beidou are resting on their laurels, while Xiaobai's new works are following the same routine. Monsters, ghosts, and snakes are all here, so I'm going to pretend to be cool. The current web articles do not have much vitality. Now it's like the author's head has been eaten (writing randomly). What I'm dreaming about is that there's something missing in the main line. You don't have many routines but you still wrote it carefully. Come on boy, you are a different kind of firework in online articles.

I was planning to fatten up before watching, but suddenly I became a eunuch. After reading the author's testimonials, I ordered it all, but I was really disappointed. I hope the author will figure out how to write a book!

Today is February 7th, time stopped. What a shame the last book was. . . I accidentally glanced at the word count. . . My Mom Two Months 330,000 words, the author has something!

Come on, you have a good idea, don't make it unbearable when you write about the Gods like in the previous book, I recommend this to you, come on!

Explanation on the content of this book: 1. Some people say why not join a national organization. First, there are too many articles about joining a national organization, and I don't want to write about this kind of thing. Second, national organizations don't just join if you want. Don't those who want to be a policeman eliminate evil and promote good do not need a written test and interview? And if you don't major in your major, you won't be able to apply. 2 Regarding the coin-operated game, it was the mobile game "The Evolution of Trust". The main purpose of writing this plot was to stand up several characters. I watched "Animal World" and it was rock, paper, scissors. 3. Regarding decryption, there is almost nothing behind it. PS: Game recommendation: Mobile game "Let's Go, Adventurer!" Very good, don't go to the arena. "The Amazing Immortal Cultivation Game", enter the name of your choice and a unique character will be generated. Try "Wei Huo", the attributes are ordinary and real.

To the author, I stopped while reading it. Your imagination and creativity are really great. I also like your writing style. However, the most fundamental thing for a novel is to tell the story clearly. The plot fell apart in the second half of the novel. I hope this one can have a stable story framework. I hope the author will keep writing. I will support it with my monthly recommendation vote.

To be honest, this is the first time I saw someone writing about Eve. I'll save it for now. If I don't wait for it to be released, I wonder if the author has ever played Eve.

Interesting and novel setting, but the abilities are complex and sometimes confusing. For the sake of the plot, I suggest that the author does not need to reduce the abilities, but regularly organizes the data list, and opens a single chapter every other volume to introduce: 1. Which new supporting characters have appeared, 2. Which old characters have retired, 3. Which abilities have been added.

I have read Cheat Code and Time Stop. When I saw the author's ID, I immediately came in to support it. I came across your three books in the vast sea of ​​books. . .

As long as you are not like the last one, I will chase you all the way to the end.

The front is a bit boring, but the back is much better, but updates are too slow 🙂

Your writing is very good. I am still looking forward to the "Time Stop" extra chapter, of course, if there is one.

This book is a bit strange. . . It's not that it doesn't look good or that it's toxic or something. It just feels like what the author wrote is obviously different from what I want to read. My brain waves don't match. I feel 😥

Why did you abandon the book, emm. The void engine and yin and yang are not in line with my expectations. It feels like something so awesome has no obvious effect.

Can you write it longer? I've read 6 of your novels! They are all less than 1 million words long. If the library is full of fish, you are just a Tianshan child grandmother who cannot be raised! ! !

Looking at the front is not bad, I thought that the protagonist started to take over the power in the back, and then started to deal with various monsters and humans, but you showed up with a sister, and she was so cool! Each of the teammates is so confusing and confusing, who is the main character? If you have the power of immortality but don't practice magic, you can make it into a mecha engine?

Each world is a box, and a big box contains countless small boxes. The world where the protagonist lives is a small box in the big box. The birth of small boxes within the big box is similar to the explosion of the universe. Some things in the big box should have been a whole called "chaos" but were pushed away under the influence of the "explosion". Countless small boxes were born in the space without "chaos", and the reason for the overlap is: "reflow". Although the "explosion" pushes away the "chaos", the size of the big box remains unchanged. When the power generated by the "explosion" disappears, the "chaos" begins to "reflow", and the small boxes are squeezed together by the "chaos" and overlap...

Just looking at the spiritual eye: others are amplifiers, it is a converter. The advantage is that it is comprehensive and everything you want can come true; the disadvantage is also obvious, if there is no engine, it becomes just a decoration. Overall, the effect of the first phase is not much different from the triple power increase. I hope more functions will be released.

Common sense is important. It was mentioned earlier that there were two lung lobes, but after a few chapters it became no lungs. It should be common knowledge that humans have five lobes of lungs, right?

It's a very good beginning, but the pig's feet are heartless at heart.

To be honest, when I read Chapter 63, I felt that the author underestimated those overlapping worlds. I won't talk about anything else, but I'll just talk about the Battle Fortress that appeared in Chapter 63. I don't know which world it was in. I'll just say that Battle Fortress fought information warfare with the modern world. Can you tell me which country in the world can compare with that Battle Fortress. In other words, all devices in the world that have information connections to the outside world will be controlled by that space fortress. For example, the robots that appeared in Chapter 63 may in turn fight against the military. I don't know if the author has seen Rise of the Planet of the Apes and the kind of genetic medicine that appears in it. Orangutans infected with the virus will become smarter, while humans are likely to die from the virus. If a world with advanced genetic research emerges in the future, as long as a genetic virus is made using human genes as a version, humanity will be finished in an instant. Or if a world similar to Resident Evil appears directly, what do you think humans should do?

Great creativity, rough details. What the hell is 300,000 KW of charge?

This is my first time reading a novel written by Eve. There used to be a person in the alliance who wrote novels about Eve, but he didn't catch a cold, so I'll give it a try.

The entrance to Chen Tianzhu's secret base is in the men's room of a restaurant? If there are too many teammates, why not enter here? Regardless of whether men or women go into the men's restroom of the restaurant, they won't come out. Any normal person can feel that something is wrong! Funny bodyguard