Living in a Collapsed World

When I read the first chapter, I felt it was a bit poisonous, so I revised it. Now I am rewriting it with all my heart, and suddenly I find that the writing style at the end has improved a lot compared to the immature writing style at the beginning. Haha.

When I wrote about Kiana before, some book friends said that scolding Kiana was too much. In fact, Liuyun didn't scold Kiana at all, he just responded to Kiana's words. Also, Liu Yun said that he has a normal outlook on life and does not have a hobby of abusing girls. However, isn't it a way to make the character come alive? As for Kiana's friends, the five equal parts of Honkai Impact? (Laughing)

Collapse of the World 3. Chapter 86: Familiar feeling. What does the part where the protagonist is dreaming mean? Do you want a sad ending? Or a mess? Can the author give me an accurate letter?

Wow, I haven't searched for Honkai Impact articles on Qidian before. I didn't expect there to be such articles. However, I prefer Honkai Impact 2 to Honkai Impact 3. It's a pity that no one has written about it. It's not very easy to write and it's too exciting. Anyway, the Water Chaser Moth blew up 😁

Hmm, hmm, to be honest, the author, I actually commented before I had even read many chapters. To be honest, I really hope that your novel will get better and better, and I want to continue reading. However, when you wrote about how many rewards, how much internal strength, and some panacea at the beginning, it made me feel the desire to continue reading. In fact, the author, you can obviously give the male protagonist some physical strength enhancers. I feel that it is very consistent with the extremely advanced technological era of Honkai. Think about it, when you are imagining the male protagonist fighting in an environment with a strong sense of technology, he suddenly takes out a The strange feeling of being resurrected with full health after eating a pill. I don't know if it's because I've seen this routine too many times, so I feel uninterested. So I just suggest that the author can reduce the frequency of this reward internal power and the appearance of some panacea. The road is step by step. You have to eat the walking meal one bite at a time, even if you give the male protagonist a cultivation secret book or something, it is better than this,,,,,, and friends, if you see any comments that make you feel uncomfortable, you can click out, but promise me not to be a troll or a troll. Long live my understanding.

Will there be any plot about the wrong place in the future?

Brother, who is Theresa from Kaslana?

I saw that the protagonist was thought to be Kallen (or reincarnated) because of the aura of Kallen's stigmata. Suddenly, Otto saw the protagonist (fuck this is Kallen, f*ck I'm a man, f*ck clone a girl's body and marry the protagonist). The above is Otto's idea.

Let me show you how to make stamina potion, hehe😏😏

Haha Mihayou turned Fu Hua into the Herrscher and is trying to conquer the strongest combat power of the three major organizations. How do you guys write Honkai fan fiction? 😂😂

Please understand one thing when reading this book. This is Liu Yun's first time writing a book. Don't think of me as a genius who can do everything and write well in everything. The dungeon volume at the beginning was completely out of my control. I originally wanted to write about fifty chapters, but as a result, I stopped reading it when I got to the new world, and then I shouted to return to Honkai Impact as soon as possible. What can I do as a new author? The frame cannot be deleted, so the only option is to delete the plot, which can only be compressed continuously. After the compression, plus a few banned chapters, there will only be a dozen chapters left. How can I, a novice, write about Loki's wisdom in more than ten chapters? What do you use to write about feelings? The answer is that there is simply no room to play. So for the rest of God Eater, I didn't care about the people who were yelling about what to write and how to write. And every author has a different style. Some people like to write about battles, and some people like to write about daily life. As for me, I haven't found my style yet, but I'm slowly finding it. Ye Ya is now preparing for the exam, so I need two accounts, and I have to update it twice for activities. I have less time to code, so the updates can only be kept like that. As for the dungeon volume, there is not much plot written, so I can make up for it. This time I will write it normally. As for relationships, every Valkyrie has gone from one to four hearts, and every Valkyrie has spent a lot of effort upgrading and graduating. If it's a more sophisticated question, I won't reply. I'll go to Baidu myself. Since I wrote it in the book, I naturally checked the information on Baidu and the Valkyrie Dormitory. It is not easy to write a book, but it is only a matter of one sentence to write a book. Just spray a few more sentences and accuse the author of being autistic. It is you who decide how long this book will take to be written, not me. Or how long do you think it can last simply using love to generate electricity? I may not have time to read the comments one by one in the future, so I can only look for opportunities to read them occasionally. If there is really any problem, then ****** notify me.

Let's talk about it here. If you have any questions, please ask them here.

Before I knew it, I had reached chapter 430. While I was feeling emotional, I also wanted to thank you all for your continued companionship and support. People ask me how long it will take me to write, and how long it will be, but I can't say. It can be said that this has completely grown with me. When I signed the contract for 250,000 words, I got through it purely with love. Now that I have signed the contract, I am busy with family matters and taking the assistant physician exam, and I am also very busy with updates. Even so, the book friends who endured the temptation to read it still gave me a lot of encouragement. Some people's style is middle-class, some people's style is exaggerated, and my sense of style is constantly changing. I don't know if this is a good thing or a bad thing. Perhaps, I have to wait until Liuyun Zhisheng takes his heart back and calms down before he can get the answer. Honkai Impact is actually a niche subject. Writing about battles takes a long time in your mind, but writing about daily life is much easier, because daily life is our life. For example, before the official answer is given, we have no idea where Kiana is in the post-Honkai saga. But daily life is different. I know very clearly what cakes are delicious and what side dishes are delicious in what hot pot. If it is written according to the Honkai main line, some people will say why it is still the same old way. If it is not written according to the Honkai main line, some people will say why it is different from the plot I know? If it were before, I might just go back, you can do it. But now, after seeing so many words like this, I have become accustomed to it. Now, I am learning to create on my own, sharing stories with you, and trying to feel more about the soul of the characters when writing, that's all. I'm not a speaker, I don't have that kind of confidence, and I don't have that kind of eloquence. We are just human beings. Finally, I would like to thank my friends who have seen this, and at the same time, I would like to make up for the late Happy New Year at the beginning of last month to all of you who are ordinary and unwilling to be ordinary like me. Also, until the epidemic is over, you must pay attention to protection. ——The voice of flowing clouds

Best wishes to all captains 😏

Tell me what your Honkai nickname is, let me start with: Qiyana

Cute*).. .:*♡

The second one is also from the same fan. For the sake of the majority of book friends who believe in Buddhism, I sacrificed my personal happiness and spent my cautious ten bits and ordered one before finally sending out these three.

Was this book abandoned, and were all the captains killed? I know that the disgusting operation planned by the chicken farm should not be mentioned in this book, but I really can't help it. Why is it unfinished or finished? Someone's combat power suddenly increased. Things are quite big now. I have abandoned so many Honkai novels. I laugh to death. I can't help it. It's so miserable for the author.

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What the hell? Survived? !

Can you write more in one go this time?

I saw this when I was in college. I have been working for two years now and it has actually come back to life.

If I hadn't gone back to the starting point to read it on a whim today, I wouldn't have known that this book was resurrected. There are so few reviews on this book, which makes me feel that the content of one chapter is missing. After all, the reviews are also part of the book.