Primitive Era

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I saw over 90 of them. I feel that the abilities of animal spirits and spiritual planting are not equal. Planting spirits can not only provide support, but can also activate skills as assassins. Beast spirits can only produce their own kind and humans. Signing an equality contract is gone. The author is completely biased towards male protagonists. You should be the creator, and you must be fair. Whether you are the villain or the protagonist, you must have an equal mentality to measure it. This saber-toothed tiger has reached the level of a pure-blooded beast. There should be skills, as well as passive skills. Passive skills can make your tribe and teammates go crazy and get a critical hit bonus. Then, the skill can make the two front teeth of your mouth glow with a faint red light. After biting the enemy, you can directly penetrate the armor and die on the spot. What you wrote is not detailed. The enemy also needs to be described in detail, what are its abilities? Don't always write about the protagonist. The author didn't even write many things about the supporting characters very well. Wizard. Leader, there are no details about emotions or skills. Not to mention the villain,

I was dissuaded by the strength of Chapter 15. It was good at first and I was planning to book it all. However, Chapter 15 is really poisonous. I guess many readers who had read this chapter were dissuaded by this. If possible, please change it. Otherwise, really 😊, even if it is well written, we will not have the chance to read it.

99 Pictures, take a look. The gap is so far, let alone killing the protagonist instantly. The winner can be determined within a few moves. Easy. It can still grind and chirp, and the protagonist is still thinking about how to attack. The tiger's eyes and that purple bamboo. The defense is so high and it can't be broken after so many hits. It should be a normal plot. Directly destroy Zizhu, the protagonist is seriously injured and then take the origin of Zizhu with him. No matter how smart you are when you leave here, it will all be nonsense in the face of absolute strength.

Build a second-hand collection building! As long as it's a character, tribe, or spirit that matches the original background, it's fine. If I see something good, I will adopt it, and I hope to actively participate, thank you! 😁

The author turns me over 😁😁😁

To be honest, great power comes from the spirit. According to the future that the protagonist of the latest chapter envisions, worshiping a non-existent animal means nothing. Does this mean he will not survive one episode 😁! The most important thing in the wilderness era is to survive. Without strength, there is nothing. I hope the author can justify himself in the future 😁😁😁 (I am guessing that he directly proves the Tao with his strength and is worshiped as the ancestor spirit 🤭)

The book is a good book, and the direction of discovery is very attractive, but some details are not handled very well. Is it a little too early to do that kind of thing at the age of 14? Modern people know that it is not good for the body, so time travel and rebirth should be a little different. Many people don't like premature ambiguity. They all like to watch the kind of person who becomes a strong person after his career becomes stable Also, what is indispensable for writing primitive novels is to treat salt. Salt is an indispensable thing. The prey you have hunted so hard, and you know how to treat salt, are you willing to exchange it? (Don't say you don't understand ⊙∀⊙! Adults basically understand it) You, a fledgling, actually teach newcomers. This is a bit too much, it feels very arrogant and forced to highlight the protagonist. I don't know if anyone has the same feeling as me. It would be better to be carried by an old man in the beginning. After all, you are a newcomer. Not to mention that you have heard of witches and other things before, but after hearing about it, are you sure about it? There should be many similar-looking plants in nature (or let's say, Brother Yong, this is a rosemary tree? It can not only show that you know It can also feel that it is a new song) After all, if you are a new person, you should have the appearance of a new person Or if you drink the blood of evil beasts to temper your body in a cave, it will be related to spiritual learning. You can add some evil beast illustrations drawn by witches, and it is more reasonable to add that the spirit dictates what the witches drew (and The spirit written in the book is the kind of person who is taciturn and speaks the most important words. He usually doesn't talk about so much outing experience with others, and Wudu doesn't feel like a tribe.) And you became a pioneer in the first year? It's a bit unreasonable for Lieutenant to be a bloodline warrior for 8 years. In fact, readers want to see some imaginative animals and plants. For example, when fetching water, the protagonist has just traveled to the past and is not curious to take a look? I am writing about the mortality rate of ancient humans in exchange for a little bit of water... In the river, I can write more about animals such as crocodiles, piranhas, and prehistoric creatures. I am designing net fishing to be more dangerous and the mortality rate is still there. I am opening a spring on Yindu Mountain) to find problems and solve them_ For example, when encountering some strange flowers, the veteran soldiers guide the newcomers in class on how to get flowers, half-living beasts, and things to pay attention to. I want to see how Xiaobai fell into the trap, how the old hunter saved people, and then how the protagonist used modern knowledge to change the status quo In the early stage, if you can't think of any strange flowers and plants, you can write two less. When you become a veteran, it will be better to explain to newcomers, at least there is a settling period The early stage is really too fast... After you finish writing, go hunting in the prairie, paving the way for becoming a bloodline warrior. You can also add some points to hunt some hybrid ferocious beasts with the chief, the king of ferocious beasts It feels like you just wrote one or a novice and ran out to pioneer... Are you afraid that you will die? You understand everything the first time, and you can have a hybrid ferocious beast cub for the first time? Did you get a different flower the first time? Which awakening among pioneers is really simple enough... I feel like it's not so difficult if I don't stand out, it seems like anyone can do it! The gold finger is opened a bit too big! Pioneers, don't think that as soon as you emerge as a newcomer, others will assume that you will definitely become a pioneer? Just drink more diluted ferocious beast blood to awaken the pioneers and just say "ahhhhhhhhh" twice? Is it too simple? Anyone can do this! (There was a pioneer before adding points, or many years ago. After going out to lay a foreshadowing or something like that, you can also write about which tribe met him, became a prisoner, or didn't want to come back. There are legends about him and so on. Can't you write more) Add more points about the difficulty of becoming a pioneer The hybrid ferocious beast cub can be delayed to appear. Are you not planning to let the protagonist go hunting? It just came out. How long have others waited without encountering one... You can also use some small beasts that hatch from insect eggs! You can also write two hybrid ferocious beasts. It would be great if you write one more for your partner. It also shows your friendliness and does not particularly highlight the aura of the protagonist You can also write two more hunting stories. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist is a newcomer who has just awakened and becomes an old hunter in the prairie. After a fight, he went shopping and became a street wanderer! You can go to open up wasteland and you can complete everything at once. It's so awesome There is no other trading place that feels a little hasty and nothing new. Just looked at cow dung? Did you see a bronze? Did you see an old turtle? Watched a kid fishing? Can you add something novel? Add some moving piranha flowers? Add some bullfrog poison? Add some bugs? What's the magic effect of adding some insect saliva? Add some bird poop fertilizer? Add those tree fruits to attract birds? Add some exotic flowers? Add some pottery? Add some salt? Add some meat varieties that the north doesn't have in the south, and the south doesn't have the meat varieties that the north does? Would adding some pearls and gems work wonders? Can those trees be used as 502 glue? Tangerine? Coconut? Strange fruit? Spider silk? Silk? A stone that generates electricity? Flint? Warm stone? Calabash baby? White Bone Demon? Ghost? Zombies?

Come on, the author, I can't guarantee that the wage earner will give you a reward, but I can still read the original version.

All the later ones have been ordered. Congratulations on the release of this book. It's so hard to find a book that I can read.

In the future development of the author, should he continue to manage strategies and compete for hegemony among tribes, or should he introduce cities and civilization when opening new maps?

It was so well written, why did I give up? It is also a good book among the Totem Warriors I have read. I remember that it was at least much better looking than my primitive one who was so powerful.

It's beautiful, it's just the number of words in one picture…

Very beautiful, written with care, I vote for you every day, come on 🤭

There are no updates on the shelves. It seems that the first order is not 800! Why

Wouldn't you feel guilty if you adopt a cub as a battle pet? In the fantasy stream, as the protagonist continues to grow, the battle pet will become stronger and smarter. How will the protagonist face this fighting partner with innate hatred?

How can I go faster? Do you want to have your legs broken so that you can code with peace of mind?

Come on, it's not easy for niche literature to persist. I hope more people can read this book.

I was attracted by Baiyinmeng, so I took a look here first.

The author's seven monthly passes will give me a pin to add more details.

In reality, bronze wares were replaced by iron wares because they were relatively brittle. The background of the book is a world of high martial arts, and the power of people and ferocious beasts is much higher than in reality. Can relatively fragile weapons in the real world, such as bronzes and irons, withstand the power of people and ferocious beasts in a high martial arts background? Metals such as bronze and iron can be used to make daily utensils, such as kitchen knives and pans. Weapon levels should be developed towards a power system with a high martial arts background, such as magic weapons, spiritual weapons, and magic weapons with a cultivation background.

It has been kept on the bookshelf. I took a look today on a whim. This book in the blocked category has been updated recently. Congratulations to the author. After spending energy and time, it has not been completely rejected. 12 Recommendations have been submitted. Good luck to the author. I will support it all.

So far, I think this book is no worse than those books by great masters. What makes the author feel worse than the master is the interaction with the readers. For example, collecting names of people, names of spirits, etc.

I like the author's book. I read it yesterday from a pirated version. This book is worth pursuing. I hope the author can write well. I have already rewarded and subscribed. I will give you two recommendation votes every day. Come on!

Reasons why I like this book: 1. The protagonist does not rely on bug props for bonuses, but relies on his wisdom, unlike some books with various innate advantages of peerless treasures and so on. 2. Strong logic, not out of thin air, everything has a reason. 3. The language and plot are humorous. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion. I hope the author can stick to his original intention and continue writing as always. Come on!

The realm of the totem warrior is a highlight of this book, a feature! Now Lao Yu has changed the totem warriors into popular warriors...

The protagonist insists on changing the realm of the totem warrior and classifying it as a warrior. It is a failure. After all, the weapon is used as a weapon. Ge, as a bronze weapon, does not appear in the lexicon of these known tribal people. Is that a new pronunciation? I hope the author will think twice.

Will this author's book keep you full? I really like this book, but I'm afraid you might end up reading it because you don't have enough to eat, or become a eunuch! There are quite a lot of books in my bookshelf that were either eunuched or unfinished due to poor grades, I'm scared!

I have been following your book for a long time. I have been following it since you started writing it. Since your book was closed, I have not been willing to delete it. Can you add some details?

Can it be done faster, or can there be more updates if possible?