Reborn, I Still Want to Fall in Love

Finally, it's not the same old licking dog reborn. It makes me vomit. It's too fake that the licking dog is reborn and becomes a boss.

Brothers, don't hesitate, just rush and it's over! 🙂

When I first started reading the first two or three chapters, I felt that the plot was denser and more funny, and I had the desire to read on. But by the 20th or 30th chapter, it was still the same, with the same informal writing style. I felt a little tired of trying to escape from the funny. It made people feel that the protagonist and some characters in the book were not normal people. They were all funny. There are no normal people. Normal people can't stand the way the protagonist talks and acts. It feels like it's just a collection of jokes even if the memes are too dense. Occasionally, it's good to have one that makes people smile, as a break. But now it feels like it's too dense, just a collection of jokes, and it's tiring to watch. Also, the protagonist is forced to add charm points. I feel like all the pretty girls in the book want to open their legs when they see the male protagonist, which is a bit embarrassing. Also, the aura of mental retardation given to the supporting male characters is too serious, and no one is a rival. Everyone is stupid.                                                                                                                                   but the career line is too sloppily written, please be more serious. Two freshmen who have just entered college, plus a wretched man, have conquered the world. It has been useless for a semester, and without spending much energy, it has been valued at hundreds of millions in one or two months, and has opened three projects. This is too childish, and it is worse than your last book. The other thing is that you have too many female protagonists, and there is no priority. They appear densely in these 100 or so pictures, so harem stories should also be divided into priorities. Just like the emperor's harem, there are queens and concubines. Just write two or three main ones, and embellish the others. You have no priorities and feel that everyone is the heroine. I feel like you didn't even write down what is in the outline, and the New Year's Eve party was written down but not included. Generally speaking, this book can still be read, but there are still many areas that can be improved.

The humor is too much, and all the characters feel like they are missing out 😁

Don't study those books with ranking lists. I am the most beautiful girl in the world, I am a top student, and I come from a wealthy family. Anyone can borrow money from me, starting from 6 million.

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This book is so awesome that you'll be laughing and laughing after reading it, but you don't know what you read.

No wonder Chapter 21 seems incoherent, it was changed. . What song was used? Buying a large flat floor? You earn so much money and still have foreign debts. . This book seems to be a bit more responsive and less urgent.

It's a sniper match at the middle gate, why don't you two fight

I've been following this since I was reborn and didn't want to fall in love. Why does such a good book about a scumbag have so few votes? It shouldn't be. It's not worse than a book written by the best in kindergarten.