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This book is extremely poisonous😰

To be honest, after reading this, I feel like I am watching a one-man show. The protagonist is the one who holds the whole world together. The supporting characters barely show their faces, and the villains are only one chapter per chapter. If the author is not a Long Aotian-type novel, he can add a longer-term rival, act out a rivalry scene, and add some fighting scenes to make it more exciting. Now the first part is like a quick tour, wherever you go you see something, you don't feel any foreshadowing, and there is no space for people to spread their thoughts. In general, it is 1. Add some supporting roles (as a girl controller, you don't even have screen time for your sister, so you are not a qualified girl controller) 2. Make some big villains (don't be the kind of villain who is gg as soon as he appears, at least one who survives one volume, if there is one) I thank you on behalf of the villain) 3. Leave some foreshadowing (don't tell me that the seal carver didn't have any clues about cause and effect) By the way, can you please take pity on the protagonist's class and give him a little appearance, so that the protagonist can eat, drink and have fun? Don't mention the number of people, he doesn't even know where they are. For the time being, this is my personal complaint! After all, I only read the part about creating the world in your last book. I thought the western ones were boring so I didn't read them. I hope this book will be a little different from the previous book. The previous book was basically a one-man show. It's really a bit heartless to write the same thing. Some authors particularly like a certain subject matter, especially ×××× The poor boy loves the princess and writes several books at a time. One book is okay, two books can last for three 🤔 There is no love at all!

According to the latest chapter, Duan Yu is probably preparing to use poison, and he only owes Dongfeng 😏

Seeing that opportunities are being found for the third sister, I feel like I have fallen into the cliché of the rebirth stream, which is to do whatever you want based on what little rebirth you know. If rebirth really wants to do this, sooner or later it will cause big trouble. All judgments about people are based on their past lives. Why do you think that you had a good relationship in your previous life and the same will be true in this life? You must know that in the previous life, either they all died, or you died in the end, and we didn't get along for long. If you change your destiny in this life, then they will face a new destiny and temptation. Why should they continue to be good to you and not betray you? Too many irrational places

Where did Chapter 82 go?

Let's talk about this new book. Why doesn't it have a new book investment group?

For a one-month ticket, I'd rather vote for this book. The quantity and quality are unmatched by other books.

The confidence that the sorcerers gave me in copywriting has been completely exhausted today. Goodbye, I am completely disappointed with the unfinished monsters.

I can't stand the first chapter. Are you choosing readers? Choose someone who matches your thinking? Why write so many exclamations?

What's going on? I was planning to raise a thousand animals to be slaughtered, but why did it suddenly end? Is it unfinished? Anyone who has read it can tell me what this book is like?

I have almost two hundred chapters, but there are many female protagonists, which is sad.

I feel that copywriting does not have to be constantly updated. You can rest for a few months after finishing a book to settle down, so that you can write better in the next book. The current Daozhang does not feel that it is the level it should be. There are a lot of problems reflected in Xiaoyao Menglu. After writing, you should take a rest and organize your thoughts. Forcibly starting a new book has led to the dismal results of Daozhang.

I just saw the release of a new book, so I would like to support the copywriting. Congratulations on the great sales of the new book!

I was given a ten-month ban package by Qidian. I don't know why the ban was lifted early today? It's not because the new book was published, it's because I paid for it, right?

The last book ended too quickly, and the new book is released so quickly, so there should be a lot of manuscripts saved. Recommended vote +1 to support it. 😄😄😄

I've been keeping it for a while and just finished reading it. Support. I just enjoyed the plot after watching it. Please update

A new picture has been opened, let me join the alliance~ After seeing Traveling Through the Heavens, I still miss the Legend of Half Hero ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

10,000 Reward, by the way, send it a month ago, please update. Reply with support

Wizards and demi-humans are the pinnacle. The main god is still readable but it has declined. I discarded Menglu when I saw the change of maps. This one is even worse. I lost interest in reading it not long after it was released. My feeling is that the flow of luck is actually a low-level martial arts story that weakens the extraordinary power, and the content looks very similar to the rhythm of history. The leader has written a lot of historical books, so he has rich experience. The flow of luck was created by him, and everyone is willing to take a look. The manuscript has never been written about history, and it feels like the control is not perfect. The flow of luck is a bit outdated, not historical, not extraordinary enough, and overall too boring.

I am the first book reviewer! Give me more cum~~

I voted for February at the end of the month. Why can't I vote for 5 votes? Please improve.

Qin Feiyu, Ye Zhiyu. These two were originally brother and sister to the protagonist. But later it slowly turned into a subordinate. Wives and concubines. It feels very strange.

Wen Chao has a good rest, but now that the flow of luck is a bit outdated, it's best to change his mind for the next book. Your book "The Biography of Banxia" is really good. It was affected by the Jiangnan Jin Yong case and had to be discontinued. How about... Reopen that book?

The author's recent performance is not very satisfactory. To be honest, the setting of this chapter is not a likable one. I was not interested in reading the content once I saw the introduction. Personally, I still like the Warlock written by you the most. Why? It's because of the protagonist's character, calmness, rationality, decisiveness in killing, and clear goals. This is the protagonist. This kind of person generally has the highest probability of success no matter what the environment. He is my favorite character type. There is also the Happy Dream Road, which actually has a good setting and good writing at the beginning, but I feel like it fell apart at the end. Finally, I wish the author to reach new heights and produce good works.

Damn it, this book is killing me

Why don't you finish writing Ban Xia? Anyway, you can write it.

In fact, when I read this paragraph in the first chapter of this book, "I want to redeem the regrets of the past one by one! I want to reveal the secrets that I have no time to explore in the future! Those enemies of life and death, I want them to pay with blood! In this life, I must stand on the top of the world!" I actually refused in my heart, but thinking that the author was a copywriter, I endured it, and then, the facts proved that I was wrong again, I have read Chapter 61 so far, and I haven't seen anything worth mentioning. I only saw a white protagonist, a dull drama, a worldview that has no sense of existence, characters that make people feel familiar, and disgusting pretentious slaps. To be honest, this book is worse than the previous one. The last one at least did not let me give up in this hundred chapters, and this one did it. I can only say, congratulations.

This woman doesn't study, she is so ignorant. When I was studying in the past, I saw Yu Ji committing suicide in Farewell My Concubine. In addition to feeling regretful, I feel more like sighing! Yu Ji thought that by committing suicide, the Overlord would be able to break through the encirclement. Don't you know that it is precisely because of this that the Overlord finally lost his belief in fighting to the end! This is a typical example of "I am doing it for the other person's good" but it turns out to be a big mistake.

I heard that a new book will be released after the Chinese New Year, so I had to take a look at this one 🤭

It was amazing at the beginning, but then it stopped. There was no Western fantasy to write, so I just finished it, which made people annoyed.