Supernatural Dawn

If I were the protagonist, I would vomit blood. I traveled to a lower-dimensional world and struggled for millions of years. I worked hard to climb up, layer by layer, and even created a world. Finally, I found that the highest point is to go home... [Laughing and crying] What the hell is the plot.

I discovered a common problem with long-form novels copied from the public. The first part is exciting, but the second part is a running story. The last few dozen chapters are just like running water. They are insignificant. It doesn't matter whether you read it or not. It doesn't matter whether you write it or not. It can be written in one stroke, or it can be grand in writing. I'm not going to find fault here. I just feel that the author's actions are meaningless except for losing fans. Paying a few cents for a chapter is nothing. There is no point paying to watch others write diaries. Even the wonderful diaries are just diaries, trivial. Alas, it's a pity that there is no more food.

The early plot of this book is compact and the plot is really good. But the development of the plot after level 7 is really hard for me to evaluate. There are various new maps, each map has water, some maps have big water and some have small water. Some holes dug in the early stage have not been filled. The main line is unclear. Just let the gods descend and the extraordinary person dies and the whole drama ends. The world of the later dungeon is too random, with too many elements, such as cultivation, games, magic, earth, and puzzles? Isn't it so valuable to have one Xiaobai writing style in one world? I can see that the main world may be an important main line that the author wants to depict, and the branch lines are copies of each world (used for water) I originally thought that after the seventh level, it would unfold in the 5th level of the spiritual world or above, or the war of gods, but it turned out that it was still pretending to be 13 in the material world and humans. Does everything revolve around humans? Isn't it good to write about void creatures? Isn't it good to write about spiritual creatures? How about opening an advanced map where humans are not around? How about writing about a super intelligent race that is not human? The layout in the early stage was so big, I was quite looking forward to it, but now it seems that my house has 20 floors, and I just want to play on the first few floors. What, there is no more to play? Let me go play on the front floors of your house. The rhythm of the story really affects the senses. Recently, my scalp has been numb due to water, and I spent money on shit to eat. I gave up and will not come back 🙂

I have read several fantasy novels, and they all go to another world halfway through the writing, and then spend a lot of ink writing about the other world. It is disgusting to read. Is it because the author has lost inspiration and changed the map? What's the difference between reading one book and then suddenly reading another? If you want unlimited streaming, put a label on it.

Compared with the pig's trotters in previous books, this pig's trotters are like a holy mother.

The mysterious master of imitation. But to be honest, I couldn't stand The Lord of Mysteries. It was a bit of a pleasure to read this book upside down. I am interested in the profession of the protagonist. This profession is not so cliché, unlike the martial arts literature that is everywhere in Qidian. I'm looking forward to a bit more fun, but the part of gaining a lot of experience hasn't come yet. I haven't entered the dungeon yet, and the start is a bit dull. I mainly focus on the psychic profession. It feels very interesting. Come on, author.

Why do online writers get worse and worse with boring chronicle-style plots?

After traveling to the Dragon Continent and arriving in the royal capital, it was as if a different person had written it.

The latest chapter is about forcibly reducing intelligence, leaving me speechless

It becomes boring after you reach the ninth level. It's too routine.

So many people have become vegetative, but the real world doesn't respond?

How is it finished? I haven't enjoyed it yet!

The supporting building is a place where all the supporting characters you want to add will gather here. 🙂🙂🙂 Try to be as comprehensive as possible. Otherwise, when the text is copied, it may not be obvious that it is your role.

For the 70th anniversary of the National Day, it is recommended to update 10 times a day, exactly 70 updates in 7 days, to celebrate the birthday of the motherland.

I suspect that Wenzhao is trying to steal people's luck again 😰, but I have no evidence →_→

Very good book. Even in the present, you can feel not out of date.

After reading the book, I have read the copies of "Incense Becomes a God", "The Wizard of the Witch World", "The Legend of the Half-Xia of the Martial Arts", "The Rise of the Lord God", "The Road to Happy Dreams", "The Extraordinary Dawn", "The Lord of Tribulations of the Worlds" and "The Lord of Divine Show".

The first part was really exciting, but after level 7 it became a bit dull and boring.

This time, my father-in-law took away the luck of two great powers at the same time. "Lord of Mysteries" and "Return" suffered a tragic loss of luck ๛ก(ｰ̀ωｰ́ก)

The latest chapter makes me want to vomit 😰

I feel that after the protagonist becomes a god, only divinity and no humanity remain. Is it my illusion?

Has Wen Chao been bitten by luck? The battle of fate is so terrifying!

It's okay. Get away + Lord of Mysteries. Combination of styles.

I've read a few chapters and it's pretty good. (On a whim, a question came to mind: if the heroine has the attribute of Kev, can she be called Cthulhu)

Did he offend someone by copying the text... So many people are criticizing him, There are still storybooks without covers, which are not worth reading... 😒... Others say he is a scumbag and a poisonous storyteller, I really don't understand what you are criticizing, Data flow novel, Why don't you go and criticize "Super Mechanic"? It's still a beast, And it doesn't matter if you are a legitimate reader. What the hell are you talking about, a pirated reader? You steal other people's wallets and you think there is no money in the other person's wallet? As for the poison, the setting is broken... Where is the poison... It is said that high-level kills low-level without giving experience, The protagonist will also be stuck in the level to gain experience... And it is very reasonable, it is better to use the system than other novels There are various restrictions on upgrading attributes, For example, "Global High Martial Arts"... For example, "God-Level Katu"... For example, "Nine-Star Poisonous Milk"... In these books, when you upgrade your strength, you say your physique can't stand it, you still need to exercise? The power has increased, the body has naturally been transformed, otherwise how could the system put power beyond the body in your body? Why don't I see you trolling? The book reviews are all licking dogs... 😒... I, a professional troll, just think that the text is copied because the pace is too fast, it's too fast to conquer a world, So I can only write about the flow of traveling through the heavens, but from the witch world, to the half-hero, to the main god, to the dream road, In addition, I read some books on Go away... I am tired of this kind of routine... In addition, in the later period, the system basically collapsed and was unfinished, Everything else, whether it's the update speed, or the protagonist's IQ, world setting, writing style, are all amazing... Especially the style of this book... Those who have read the previous books will know... The style changes all of a sudden, Some authors have written many novels, the protagonists all have the same character, the styles are all the same, and the copy that can freely change the style, can't bring out his level? I think the biggest problem with text copying is that without a good administrator, why can't these trolls be banned forever? Looking at the pirated version, I look like I am proud to see the pirated version, and come to the book review area to talk nonsense, Should I keep it for the New Year? ————July 8, 2019 (Ps: The books mentioned above are actually quite good. Except for some flaws in the settings, they are not intended to be offensive. If there is any offense, I apologize in advance...😳)

Anyway, the finale is to upgrade to the real world and become ordinary people, but there are still data columns left blank, and the later stage is still Wenchao's macro narrative Be cautious if you don't like it, the early and middle stages are okay, I actually like some worlds, but I just skip them.

More and more novice writers have successfully embarked on the road of commercial novels. Congratulations, you are the next Tiancan Tudou, the third young master of the Tang family.

To be honest, the protagonist has little credibility in what he does. The values ​​​​are really bad. I take money and do nothing. . . After killing other people's parents, he still wants to raise their daughter, and the supporting character is so idiotic that he is willing to trust the protagonist. I was poisoned. Although He Shen was corrupt, he only took money to do things. The protagonist was someone who didn't follow the rules and was eliminated early.

I clicked on this book today and finished reading it. It was really fast. When did Wen Chao become a great person? By the way, when will Wenchao release a new book? Which great god do you plan to plunder the luck of?

It would be really nice to make this book longer.