Mysterious Holy See

The Black Mamba is extremely mishandled by the protagonist and the Church. The mysterious creature in this book is obviously the beginning of the sequence and the source of everything. The subsequent sequence is just directed cultivation and evolution. So it goes without saying how important this Black Mamba is to the Evil God Church, right? These are not best friends. The materials are common to many sequences. Black Mamba is only needed by the Church of Ten Thousand Snakes and only they can be promoted to high sequences. So the question is, who will buy the Black Mamba if it is traded privately? Who would spend 1,500 gold to buy it that the protagonist thinks is more than the normal price? People from the Church of Evil God. From the protagonist's point of view, selling the Black Mamba will inevitably be targeted by people from the Evil God Church. They are the Evil God Church. Will there be any follow-up actions? From the perspective of the people from the Church of the Mother Earth, since they guessed that the Black Mamba is in the hands of the protagonist, will they let it flow into the black market and be bought by people from the Church of the Evil God? Even if the protagonist's right to income is respected, a more reasonable arrangement is to send someone to explain the consequences to the protagonist, and then take away the Black Mamba at a price that is somewhere between an ordinary mystery and a divine mystery.

Maybe it's my personal opinion. I feel that as an online novel, there are too many narrations, resulting in insufficient interaction between characters, which affects the sense of immersion and the rhythm of the plot.

I've seen a dozen of them and they're not that exciting.

"Mysterious" It feels a bit like the steam age Otherwise, this sect is called "Victoria's Secret" 😄 Referred to as Victoria's Secret, which is widely rumored to maintain a mysterious living environment The core members call Victoria's Secret Angels😄😄😄😄

First, let me talk about why this book started: I have been reading novels for a long time, from junior high school to high school, to university, and now at work, but to be honest, the novels I like have started to decrease recently. I remember that the novel I liked the most was "The 108 Star Girls of Mother Mountain", not because it has a harem, but because its setting makes people shine. And half a year ago, I found another book whose setting made my eyes shine. It was the world created by Squid Girl. To be honest, I didn't expect that I would like steampunk before reading that novel. Two months ago, I was anxiously waiting for updates, and for some reason I came up with the idea of ​​writing a steampunk novel myself, so I started. First, about settings. I have never denied that my original intention was to start with Ke Zong, because I particularly like that setting. I even thought about many different starting points, but in the end I still chose this version because I like it. But did I really learn from that setting? I thought about whether I was unconsciously affected by that setting, and in the end I said no. Except for the name, I will never ignore the most exciting setting. If I really look back, except for the beginning, the two books will not have any intersection, and the plots are completely unrelated. Even when I was arranging the system, I had in my mind the system I have always longed for most - Pokemon. There is a lot of discussion about this in the book reviews of the first two chapters, but none in the later chapters. Secondly, about Goldfinger. Maybe it's because I'm a science student and I like to be logically rigorous by nature, but maybe it's my first time writing a book and I don't always care about the details. I often read this chapter and say, if there are mistakes, correct them, if the logic doesn't make sense, correct them! I am very grateful to these book friends for patching up my carelessness. Some time ago, a book friend asked what the Baztan beast looked like when it was two meters tall and two meters tall. A book friend below commented that it was boxy, which made me laugh myself half to death, so I quickly revised it. It can be revealed that Golden Finger is not a system, but the main plot of this volume. To be honest, I have arranged foreshadowing in many chapters, and I read book reviews every day and wait for people to find it. After finishing my last schedule tomorrow, I will try my best to code it. I don't know if it will be available on the shelves by the end of this month. Newcomers and new books, please comment lightly and write down carefully as a sign of respect.

I thought it was explained clearly in the book... Selling medicine directly requires collecting materials to make it. The protagonist's own material collection is not smooth sailing. Aldrich has almost no channels in the early stage. How to complete this process? Before selling the formula for Sunderland's Morpheus cat potion, the protagonist was a person who had been dealing with copper and silver for a long time and was under great financial pressure. I wrote a chapter in the book about drinking the potion as soon as possible after making it, which means it cannot be stored for a long time. After pulling the person over, you can prepare the potion in person... I imagined it for a moment. The picture was so beautiful that I couldn't bear to look at it...

To be honest, a good novel is ruined by women It's not that the protagonist is single all the time, but that the protagonist is so weak, has no house and no capital, why does he want so much?

Give the author a suggestion Don't force yourself to use some settings and vocabulary to express the differences between you and your best friend. Although I don't know if you think so, but you show it to give people this feeling. Back to Suggestions This kind of behavior, how should I put it, is just for me. As a steampunk Cthulhu enthusiast, there were few similar books in the past. Since the popularity of my best friend, this type of books has flourished, which is obviously beneficial to me, so similar settings or terms are actually not a big problem, and I will not say that you plagiarized or anything. It's just like the golden elixir used to build the foundation in previous immortality novels. But if you leave the ready-made one alone, you insist on changing the name of "Golden Pill" to "Silver Pill" or something. This degrades my viewing experience. So when I saw it, my first thought was the second paragraph. Then I immediately quit and coded a paragraph. The most important thing is that you are doing better after all. When I see the word "rank", I can't describe this feeling. If reading a book is like drinking wine, when I read your book, I felt that it was okay. Although it is not expensive wine, drinking it still feels okay. Then when I saw this word, I felt like I was drinking fake wine

The content is a bit lacking, with no positioning of its own, forced tasks, and things that have little to do with itself. This book should focus on the protagonist improving his strength, obtaining promotion materials, and selling medicine grinding formulas. The protagonist hides his identity and puts himself behind the scenes instead of putting himself in the light and putting himself in danger. I stopped reading after reading more than a dozen chapters, and then basically read the table of contents. 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

I have saved about 30 chapters and read them a lot I don't really like the plot of brothers and sisters in the orphanage. Orthopedics is really disgusting, especially since they are not the protagonist I like to develop organizations and describe the stories of each member I am not interested in the plot of the protagonist going out to be alone. Is he going to find that female singer to lead to the Three-Eyed Tendo sect? But these messy emotional lines are so worth complaining Other novels basically don't have many emotional lines for supporting male characters And this novel... The male supporting characters' emotional experiences are more exciting than the protagonist...

I feel that this book is very weak. The main tasks are too slow. The protagonist should be hidden behind the scenes instead of doing other things all day long. The heroine is too early and not interesting. Both the writing and the plot feel very poor.

The plot is too cliche, forcibly spliced, and messy. A little scumbag at level 2 of Cricket will teach, run to an orphanage, fall in love, wander around and be cursed by the old gods. Then, at level 3, Cricket will imitate the powerful forces and do things. It is too easy to cause trouble, and it is easy to be exposed prematurely. If one mistake is made, it will attract the attention of high-level people. After playing, it will not take its own safety seriously.

The plot is boring, the protagonist has no brains, and likes to meddle in other people's business, which makes him look like a virgin.

The investment is 333, and the reward is 100. The author keeps up the good work!

The difference between this book and Best Friends is just like Tom Cruise and Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson. One climbs a skyscraper using high-tech equipment, but you don't know how powerful it is when you look at it. The other climbs a skyscraper, but uses tape to fool around. It looks like that, but I always feel that something is wrong...

Can there be another novel in which the main character is not a diaosi?

Let's talk about what to watch first, there are not many but you can watch it. In the current situation of Dian Niang, the pig's trotter's IQ in this book is still occasionally online, but the author still seems to have flaws in plot planning As for the poisonous point, I personally only think there are two aspects Firstly, whether the pig's trotter's IQ is online or not completely depends on the author. The plot arrangement of the author requires the pig to be calm, courageous, good at planning, and hiding behind the scenes when online. But when it is necessary to advance the plot, a dog-licking mode that is not even written in urban novels is added. There is a problem with the writing of the heroine, a tool person. How long have the two of them known each other? Our calm pig's feet fight for this woman with such a small team. From God's perspective, it is too fake. It is purely for the promotion of the subsequent plot. From this, we can see that the author is too rigid in promoting the plot. Secondly, there is a problem with the rhythm. The author keeps telling us readers through the pig's feet that this book will rely on the mastermind behind the scenes, establishing an organization through golden fingers, and intervening in the world through the organization. In this way, as the organization is established and expanded bit by bit, the world in the author's mind will be slowly shown to us readers. But the author seems to have unconsciously written an adventure novel without even taking a breather. One plot is connected to another plot. What kind of Holy See is there to build? Wouldn't it be better to organize a few people to become mercenaries for adventure? Finally, I would like to say that the most taboo thing about Jiansheliu novels is fast. It is best to think about the plot structure. The plot of avenging the brother of a good gay friend and fighting for the girl I just met is too poisonous from a God's perspective and has no sense of substitution at all.

In the mysterious world, he sells serial formulas in person, and his skills are instantly reduced. Blaspheming the true God under mysterious circumstances to attract young ladies to buy serial formulas Really seeking death Author, please don't use blasphemy against the true God to improve the status of pig's feet. I feel a little bit wiser

Let me tell you my opinion. Although the plot of the novel is different, no matter what, this book is suspected of borrowing from mystery in the eyes of others, so it is difficult to stand in the face of mystery. After all, not all genres are as easy to follow as Infinite Flow. Secondly, the character of the protagonist overlaps with Xiao Mo, which can easily cause a sense of déjà vu. It is better to write a lawful evil or neutral protagonist, who is more recognizable and has his own style.

The plot is too blunt and the villain likes to show off. The character's happiness and anger are all on his face, just like a child without candy. The author's intellectual level is not good enough but he still wants to show off his reasoning, which is embarrassing.

Congratulations on signing the contract, my first successful investment 😃 Also, I just read the first 15 chapters, it's a very interesting western fantasy. It will be on the shelves as soon as possible

Why give the magic potion formula? Can't you just give the potion directly? Giving magic potion can also control the leakage of formula.