The Return of the Martial Ancestor of Martial Arts

Let me talk about my feelings after reading this book. This book is a martial arts fan novel. There are basically no good books about martial arts, but this one can be said to be my personal favorite. The main plot is close to the original work, but the content has been changed. The writing style is guaranteed by Ben Dou Po fans. It is relatively humorous and makes up for some regrets when reading the original work. At the same time, there are also some shortcomings, that is, there is no big innovation. I think the author should expand some things while keeping in line with the main line. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

No matter what fanfic you write, you always have to have your own personality, so originality is still essential.

No, no, no, actually I think the plot doesn't matter, the main thing is that the character settings have been changed. I liked the introduction and background setting of this fan before, but it turns out that the main character is not at the time when the plot happens. MMP forcefully joins the "plot". Oh, the protagonist in the original work-study student dormitory has a plot of being the boss, no, no, no, no, no, even though I am the protagonist's father, I still have to be the boss; oh, the protagonist got the first soul ring and came back to show off, but if it doesn't work, I will do the same, it will poison me to death. . . Well, I feel that although this book follows the plot of the original work, the setting is not copied? ! Emmm, maybe, anyway, I gave up on the plot for a while because of the plot that Ling Zhuqing did something to her even though he knew clearly. After all, nothing has changed. Although the cultivation level has changed, I also feel that this plot is much faster than the original plot. . . Well, I feel like if you can write your own thoughts based on the original work and it's not copy and paste, it shouldn't be considered plagiarism, right? ! Besides, it seems that the emperor is not worried about plagiarism and the eunuchs are not. After all, I, the potato boss, didn't say anything. Maybe I am looking for a sense of presence? ? ? Achieve fame by creating buzz by criticizing people? ? ? (I've seen too much of the city, don't mind, don't mind, the above is pure nonsense, emmm)

Although I have read the whole book and the story is very exciting, I still think Dou Po is better. The simplest reason is that the levels of cultivation are clearer. At least I can't remember the level of Wu Dong without reading the original work... On the other hand, Dou Po is more interesting. Although many people are talking about it, the funny protagonist is more approachable. Although the writing style of Wu Dong is better (forgive me for not feeling it, it was said by other readers), it is less watery, but it is less fun. The most obvious feeling is that this martial arts has the same feeling as the big master behind the previous book. It is developed for the development of the plot, giving people a feeling of excitement. Anyway, I still prefer the author's hypothesis to those messy systems. Because this is more in line with human thinking logic.

Two votes a day, don't you even have any sperm?

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I guess that after the sect war, Lin Dong will be the same as in the original work, but it shouldn't be as miserable as before. It is very likely that the author's Lin Dong had a tough fight with the leader of the Yuanmen and then took the opportunity to run to the Sea of Chaos Demons, where there were the Primordial Tower, the Thunder Ancestral Talisman, the Life and Death Ancestral Talisman and other benefits waiting for him. The benefits that Lin Dong received from becoming a disciple of Qing Pheasant in the previous article will also come into play. By using a back-up approach, at least when moving in space, you can at least not be too disturbed by the master of Yuanmen and cause random teleportation like in the original work. In the original work, Qingzhi only relied on his special sense of martial arts to realize that Lin Dong was in trouble and take action hastily. But this time, Lin Dong could even contact Qingzhi in advance and bite off a piece of meat from Yuanmen. After all, a strong man who has survived the second level of reincarnation can make three wheel-turning realms suffer some losses even if he takes action across space.

Famous book friends can support me when they have time. The author will be more motivated after seeing it (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

What do you want the author to write about the new book? Comment below to give the author a reference (it is recommended to choose a well-known one) (I want to add more details!)

Raise your hands from fans who will write about the next chapter of The Great Master

It feels pretty good. I hope the author can write more like Dou Po and write more than 1,000 chapters. Too few chapters are boring. Also, after writing Wu Dong, do you want to write about the Great Master? The great master misses too many girls, I recommend the author to write down 👍👍👍

I have been stocking up, and then I missed the first order, 😂😂

The author thinks that your writing style is very good at making up for the regrets of the original work. When reading your book, I can make up for the many regrets of reading the original work. If possible, you can consider the Immortality World fandom when you open a new book. Who in the world can live forever, no matter how magnificent you are, you will be the most beautiful person in the world, but in the end you will be a pink skeleton; if you are a generation of genius, sitting on thousands of miles of mountains and rivers, you will also turn into a handful of loess in the end. Too many regrets, too many touches, the immortal world performed countless heroic tragic songs. In Chen's writing, Xiao Chen is the most special one. He is not like Chen Nan, who carries all living beings on his back and fights bloody battles with heaven, nor is he like Emperor Ye Fan who sweeps across the restricted area with his back, nor is he like Shi Hao who has turned his back on all living beings and arbitrarily ruled for eternity. Compared with the protagonists who cheat one after another, he is more like a witness, a participant, and a follower who follows his ancestors and carries the banner of Kyushu. A song from the God of the Immortal Ancestor, a few people returned from the expedition to fight the war. Looking back on the past and yesterday's dream, how many grievances and grudges are drunk in the dream. This is the world of immortality that I see. The broken giant mountain is the backbone of heaven and earth, the dry and hard yellow mud is the blood of the earth, and the mountains of bones are the sorrow of the ancestors. Thousands of years later, the music of harps and harps, and the melodious sounds of silk and bamboo, praise the eternal prosperity of the holy road. Who else remembers that the Suiren family lit up the future of the human race? How can they forget that Shennong tasted hundreds of herbs and buried his bones in a foreign land. Does anyone know that Nuwa wept her blood to mend the sky and used her flesh and blood to allow our human race to continue to prosper? In the prosperous times, the great road is on the way, and an illusory divine song buries the ancestors' long-lasting achievements. All living beings are like ants, the road is ahead, and they sing joyful songs forever, without mentioning inflammation and yellow. Inexplicably sad. The majestic palace, the majestic giant palace, in front of the false gods, the sorrow of the ancestors. The small memorial tablets have long been forgotten, and the half-foot shrine has nowhere to put it. Do you remember that there is a person named Yanhuang? The hope of your ancestors flows in your blood. Only talking about the great road and prosperous times, the national spirit is buried. The blood of the sky, the essence of the earth, the battle between yin and yang, weeping blood and black yellow. Can the blood and tears of your ancestors move your heart of stone? Every time I see this paragraph, I feel inexplicably sad. It's a pity that no one can fill the regret of the immortal world.

Author, as long as you can update more than 1 million words, I guarantee that I will give you a reward of 200,000! So please come on!

It's June and there's no new book out yet.

The big master must be the big motherboard. Let's finish all three of Tudou's books!

I feel that the overall progress is very fast. I come back once a month when I go to school. It's very satisfying to save a bunch of chapters and read them again. I hope it won't be finished next time I come back. . . I don't know if there will be a great master after Wu Dong is finished.

Emmmm, what are the rules for adding updates?

Can you kill the War Emperor? Even a modern person can't bear such a person who offends his wife, let alone the cultivation world that pays attention to pleasure and grudges. In The Lord, it may be to increase the experience of the protagonist Muchen, but it is not necessary here. I have always felt that Muchen is just a second generation with a bit of luck, and he is truly loveless. There is no need to rush to curry favor and give away a daughter as in the original work. I really have to retain such a fighting force that can be trained into a puppet. I hope that I will not lose the decisiveness of killing in the lower world, and there is no need to imagine how great and upright the world is. There must be a lot of internal fighting like this. It doesn't make sense to allow him to rape other people's wives and daughters, kill those geniuses, and not allow him to be killed.

In the vast world, killings are constant, and a single disagreement can kill an entire family and destroy an entire family. Don't think that demons are evil. Some people are no worse than demons. The War Emperor was able to live to the end just to increase experience points for Muchen. But this is the case, and it is unrealistic to write. The writing of Wu Zu and Yan Emperor was too soft, and they no longer had the unrivaled killing power and invincible bravery. Could it be that when you have family and power, you become less courageous? Could it be that the stronger the cultivation level, the more timid one becomes. Compared with the lower plane, it is unparalleled in killing and killing; but also compared with the softness of the upper plane. The two characters written in the upper plane are actually very average, not as exciting as the lower plane.

Can any person familiar with the matter tell me whether the author will write it or not? ? ?

What about the new book? Have you finished the outline?

Is this being let go?😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

It's almost mid-June, isn't there a new book yet? Is this a pigeon release?

If you dare to write Douluo 1 or 2, if you write it well, I will definitely decide it.

The author's new book? ? ? ?

😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Has it become stricter now? I can't even see my previous comments.

It's not that you can't even copy well. The protagonist, who is a master of the Qi Creation Realm, uses the Creation Martial Arts to fight against a wave with an eighth-level martial arts of a minor Qi Creation Realm. He only suffers heavy damage but does not have an instant kill. What is going on in your brain

Why hasn't the new book been successfully reviewed yet? ? ? .