Douluo Dalu: The Death Scythe

I finished reading it in one go, and I feel pretty good about the setting. There are just a few points I have questions about, so I would like to comment on them here and hope they can be answered: Although the original book did not fully propose the next four sects, they should be the Elephant Armor Sect, White Tiger Sect, Fire Leopard Sect, and Wind Sword Sect. The Holy Dragon Sect is a branch cultivated by Wuhun Palace to replace the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect, and the Black Tiger Sect is used to replace the White Tiger Sect. It's not that ancient clans can't be written about. Dou Er also popped up a hidden sect in Xingluo, Xingguan Sect, and won the throne of emperor. But the Shadow Clan inexplicably became the lower four sects, so here's the problem. The new seven sects are all made up of animals. This doesn't conform to the original setting. There is also a problem with Zhu Zhuqing's level 20 at eight years old. The average is level 6 in one year? Zhu Zhuqing first appeared in the game at the age of twelve and twenty-seven. According to the author's logic, he was promoted to six levels in the next four years? Also, the original work of Yuexuan is set in the Tiandou Empire, not Xingluo. Although I can't figure out why Haotian Sect is set in Xingluo and Yuexuan is set in Tiandou, but this is the setting of the original work after all. Also, the first soul skill of the Scythe Spirit is entanglement, which feels a bit strange. When choosing the bloodthirsty vine as the first soul ring, I thought the soul skill was an amplifying skill such as bloodthirsty. Not mentioning this, I was even more confused when choosing the scale beast for the second martial soul. Your martial soul has shadow attributes, darkness or death attributes. Don't you choose the one with matching attributes? For example, death spiders, ghost leopards, etc., Choose a scale beast and add toughness to the scythe? The choice of the soul ring will change the martial soul. For example, after Tang San absorbed the soul ring, he gained the paralyzing poison attribute of the Mandala Snake. Ah, in the original work, the martial souls of general clans are carefully selected. For example, Dai Mubai's is usually a tiger, and the blue electric tyrannosaur is usually a sub-dragon species. This is more or less logical. Uncle Fu said so fiercely, the Soul Saint has killed Soul Douluo, but the soul ring ratio is not the best. This is a bit unreasonable. The fifth ring of ten thousand years is crucial, okay, the ancient clan can't deal with the ten thousand year soul beast? These are the main ones, and I feel pretty good about the others.

I came here from the comment sections of other books. Some people worked tirelessly to advertise this book in the comment sections of various books. I came with full expectations, and what I saw was the most popular waste stream ten years ago, a second creation that thought it was smart and ignored the original work, completely ignored the jokes and stitching of the scenes, and the shadow entanglement that was basically a tribute. This kind of book is also worth recommending? It's okay to hire a spammer, but hiring a spammer for a book whose writing is terrible will only make people more disgusting.

，？ If possible, wouldn't Tang San die twice? Can he put it in when he dies? Hey hey hey😎                                                                                                                     did not come up with another idea, Dugu Bo seems to have a storage soul guide, can it hold living things? Do you think you can put Tang San in it? It would be great if you could 😍

Don't just make up all kinds of secondary characters when you meet the characters in the plot. You still don't understand the original work. It's really boring and disgusting to watch. In addition, I think the poisonous point is the attack type martial arts. Which control type should you choose? The first soul skill is dark entanglement. The second soul skill is a defensive one. You chose the most controversial one. You don't know how to write it.

I finally wrote a new book. Except for the author's book about 5 years old, 16 years old, 16 years old, and 7 years old, which made me instantly startled and stopped following it, I have read several other books several times.

If you want to write a fanfic, you should at least understand the original work, right? 19's Soul King Xue Qinghe? Tang Hao with 30+ titles? ? Give away the grass jelly to outsiders? I can only say that Zhu Zhuqing likes the protagonist and can use martial soul fusion skills with Dai Mubai. I can only say that it is awesome. There are many poisonous points and many jokes in it. It seems nondescript. It is understandable that the writing is fan fiction and it is not original and does not follow the original plot. The data written by these various second creations is not rigorous and there are so many braggings. Is this a saboteur who bought it or someone who read the book without any brains at all?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 90. There are a lot of bugs in the plot. Xue Qinghe has 19 soul kings, Tang Hao has 30+ titles, why don't I give the immortal grass to my own person, whose surname is Ma Hongjun, and a bunch of data bugs. Have you never read the original work of Douluo?

Hey, Lao Li's book, I read the Great Master and the Martial Ancestor a long time ago, and today I was flipping through it and met them again. It's fate.

It can only be said that it is not suitable. Douluo cannot be written in the style of Tudou Chendong. His style is more like an online game. The combat is more like an MMORPG with some buffs. Moreover, the plot advances too fast. The protagonist is already a soul saint in less than 400,000 words. It feels like it will be gone in about 700,000 words.

What a scythe. If you don't add armor breaking, blood-sucking, easy damage, slow damage, or serious damage, why don't you create a biological mother's entanglement? And then you build a defense? A good strong attack was ruined by you on the spot.