Harry Potter: the Ancient Kingdom of the East

Well, after reading a few pictures, I suggest the author use the third person and divide it into more paragraphs.

It made me so irritable. How many perspectives did you write?

What is this thing written about? Which person is it in?

There is a reason for the low number of votes. Isn't it nice to write about fandom honestly and sell some feelings?

The writing is too messy🤫

The person's name doesn't matter, but does a five-year-old have so much social experience and perspective? Or is it that everyone in that world is so calculating towards five-year-old children? And there are some appellations that you don't need to write.

Is this written purely from the East? I only looked at the table of contents and don't quite understand