My Sister Is Cruel

Alas, I can't persevere... First, let's talk about the author's writing style, which is between ancient Chinese and vernacular Chinese. It feels a bit like translating classical Chinese in high school. I can't say it's not good, but it always feels weird and I still don't have a good grasp of it. However, I feel that this can form the author's unique style Secondly, I feel that the content of the author's story is a bit unsatisfactory, giving people a feeling of being in the fog. The author wants to write the feeling of immortality and immortality, but it always makes me feel confused, unable to be immersed in the scene, and choked. The plot is a bit protracted and there is too much foreshadowing, and it feels like it is not well prepared. The title, introduction and content of the book cannot be organically combined, and there is no way to highlight what I want to express and highlight. The previous content made it impossible for me to continue reading. But there are also good points. The interaction between the author's male and female protagonists is still very good, but there is not much content. The background description is broad and deep, but it is too focused and ignores the theme. It still feels good, but not to my taste. I hope the author can persevere, 👍

Since the title and main topic is ruthless people, would you like to occasionally write a few chapters of ruthless people's first-person perspectives? For example, after your brother leaves and before he leaves, you will practice alone. Comparing the before and after, it is more comfortable to work hard to become stronger. In addition, you can write more about her growth history in the future (by the way, there are many, many words that everyone should be interested in reading. But it has to be edited well. It depends on the author, you can use your freedom. Anyway, the original work is about the description here. Not many), to be honest, I have seen a lot of similar fics like this. Most of them are from my own first point of view. On the contrary, there are very few descriptions of ruthless people. I have learned the basic Spring and Autumn writing skills of hard training, and then I became emperor inexplicably and started waiting for my brother. It was exactly the same as Qin Ding. I reached the top without feeling anything Is this the legendary saying that after my brother died, I became stronger? (Too real)

Is this just a pigeon?

Come on, author, you can listen to some of the readers' words, and you don't need to worry about some of them. Remember, it's difficult to agree with others. No matter how much you write, you can't write something that everyone in the world will like to read. There will always be people who don't like it and find faults about this and that. Since you are writing a book, if you want to write the book well, follow your own ideas. The readers' words can be properly absorbed and used as long as they don't affect you. Otherwise, you will find that the writing becomes more and more unsatisfactory in the middle and later stages. So let's go with the flow. 😄

The protagonist of this book tells us a truth: we should read the book carefully. Otherwise, I don't know how I died. (I have to say that it's quite embarrassing for the author to write like this.)

You have to start reading this book from Chapter 80 Really

It's a bit long-winded, I don't know how to put it, just about twenty chapters,

I found that many people mistakenly thought that this was a Zhetian fanfic because it was too long. It was an unlimited novel, okay?

The Holy Body of the human race is a kind of responsibility. It is not without reason that every Holy Body has the idea of ​​protecting the human race, because there is a body first and then a soul. But, laugh, the protagonist is a time traveler. We cannot impose our ideas on others. This is one of the bottom lines that a kind person must have, so let alone the Dacheng Holy Body (｡ò ∀ ó｡). How could this great man act in such a way as to impose responsibility on others? So whether we think the protagonist should have this responsibility or not, we as readers should not impose our own ideas on the author! As a reader, all you can do is point out errors and let the author correct them. Then support the author to continue writing.

Little girl: "My brother is a eunuch!"

See the comments on Chapter 81. I still think it's better to write my own novel. The ruthless man is portrayed very vividly. To be honest, Zhe Tian has not finished chasing it, but the author's ruthless character is vivid and the writing is flawless. And only if it has connotation and no shortage of writing skills, the room for appreciation will be greater. There seems to be no shortage of these structures, but I can't think of any reason for failure. In other words, few readers can become authors. Now that you have become an author, just write what you want to write. Persist in. In the real world, it is rare to achieve something exactly according to your own wishes. There's no way around it. But in this book. You are God, and this can be yours.

After seeing the introduction and then reading the text, I want to say... How to jump?

The protagonist's thoughts are really poisonous to me. Maybe I can't accept people who evade responsibility, but I also think that this is very reasonable. After all, the protagonist has always been an ordinary person before time travel. Carrying the blood of the Holy Body of the human race, he is burdened with the survival of the human race. The source of all pain is the lack of ability of the person involved. Not to mention being the strongest, how can you gain absolute strength without having the will to be invincible? How can you protect the people you care about without absolute strength? When you have the ability, how can you be afraid of protecting the human race? I don't want to change the minds of the human race and eliminate the possibility of betrayal. How can a strong person be afraid of betrayal? This is the escape of the weak~ In this case, you will definitely encounter problems that you are unable to solve because of your lack of ability! How can such a protagonist stand side by side with his sister? The official forced his colleague to death. Now in the Holy Ruins, Ye Fan is suspected to be dead. Wu Shi's body is not cold yet, and the ruthless man is nowhere to be found. . . If the protagonist always has such an idea, how can he protect his sister and be protected by his sister instead? But the protagonist lacks this courage and will never be able to become the Great Saint, let alone the Great Emperor. Therefore, he will evade responsibility and the responsibility of being the protagonist, because becoming the Holy Body of Dacheng means becoming the protagonist of the human race, and even the protagonist of heaven and earth without leaving the Great Emperor. Not everyone can stand calmly at the center of the stage, let alone this kind of stage, let alone ordinary people who are influenced by the low-key thinking of the Buddhist salty fish in society! ~ So I think the author will definitely let the protagonist grow up. After all, the protagonist has grown up step by step since he came to Zhetian, said goodbye to his sister, and returned to the restricted area. Before the time travel, the protagonist was an ordinary person after all, an ordinary person restricted by the environment. He did not have the cultivation of reading scriptures before starting the journey like Ye Fan. He was born ignorant and had the influence of his own blood. The protagonist's thoughts were already there, but he just changed his body, and this body is the Holy Body. Unlike Ye Fan, who was born extraordinary, the protagonist was born just an ordinary person even though he traveled through time, even though he was poisoned. But I think this plot is very reasonable, this plot is very reasonable, The author has a thorough understanding of Zhetian, and the character creation has not failed so far. I can see that the author is serious. As a reader, you should give the author time to think about it and practice his writing skills. The author's writing is really good. I used to watch Zhetian, and there was a protagonist who traveled through the mind of the ruthless brother. I was looking forward to someone else writing it. Now, someone has finally written it. I am very excited, and the author has written it very well. I am very happy. The relationship between brother and sister is really well written (✪▽✪). I wish the author can persist, maintain and make progress! (ง •̀_•́)ง

Set up a recommendation voting board, and all the friends who voted will come here to support the author.

Who is the peak at the end of the immortal road? When I see the beginningless path, it becomes empty. The path of immortality has neither beginning nor end, and the eternal universe rushes into confusion in the ancient sky. The ruthless man inherited the heaven and the earth for four generations, and the demon emperor Qingdi repaid the bronze student. The Xihuang Pagoda of Immortal Tears in Yaochi, the Taihuang Sword comes out of the Nine Dragons. The mirror of the void illuminates the darkness of the sky and the earth, and the Holy Body Nine goes out to fight ancient and modern times. Jiuli Tu came out to refine the heaven and earth, and the heaven collapsed and fell into the mortal world. The green copper of the desolate tower shines in the immortal world, and the copper coffin is extradited to the heaven. Why is the long road to immortality the end? The road is like smoke and empty.

After watching it for a while, the protagonist is too weak and his character is too weak. If Shi Fan is not the protagonist, he can't even be a saint. His character is just not suitable for Emperor Zheng. His cold appearance at the beginning is really good, and he only smiles in front of ruthless people. He is also very handsome when he goes hunting. But after his memory recovers, he has changed too much. The Holy Body is invincible and you make him look like a passerby. The nature is the same, learn the way of nature, so what if you can travel through the heavens, the three thousand paths lead to the same destination, you were originally a genius, but you are no longer, and your sister is a real genius, I dare say, if there is no accident, your sister will become the emperor first in the end, and you are just like a burden, you can't help her at all, you don't have the strength, you don't have the talent, what's the use of you?

After watching it, I felt suffocated. I didn't feel as moved as watching Zhetian. Moreover, pig's feet have always been a kind of Buddhist mentality, which is particularly selfish. If you look at modern history, everyone will be afraid of death and only live well for themselves. But when the country is about to be subjugated and the species is exterminated, let's take a look at what the ancestors did. Don't they know that if they lose their lives, they will lose everything? Even being transformed into a sacrifice and used as a sacrifice can't change this mentality. The conversation with the Holy Body in the restricted area is also very funny. I have to learn other people's methods and live my own way, and still look like a righteous person. As a pig's foot, I don't know how to say it, but as a real person, I have only a little style in this life. The country is a metaphor for a world where there are not so many ordinary people who have built it with blood and bones one after another. Will there be such a comfortable life as we have today? Everyone ponders the reality that the pressure is high and life is tiring. Everyone wants to be selfish, but when the real aggressor comes in, most of them will abandon everything and fight with their lives.

This is the only novel I have read among so many novels that I hope Pig's Feet will die soon. This Pig's Feet is like a life-and-death civilian in a war-torn Middle East, and you have to drag your family to prevent them from touching guns.

I came here from the group of Hidden Immortals. I just read it today after adding it to my bookshelf for a few days. It feels pretty good. I hope I can keep writing! ! Another 7 recommended tickets PY for an enhanced experience

The protagonist's character is not good, not even as good as the Holy Spirit of Fire. He is the protagonist, but I think it is impossible for him to become the emperor. All the villains are more courageous than him. Although it is not written what the protagonist is afraid of, but after reading it, you can understand that he is forward-looking and hesitant. With such a character, unless there is a super power who forces him to open a super cheat, even if he can travel through the heavens, he will not be able to achieve great achievements. In fact, I find it incredible that the protagonist can kill Tao. The Holy Body can make him physically strong, but it cannot make him a strong man. Look more at Zhetian, learn from Ye Fan's courage, and watch Ye Fan's battles to break through every realm. Look down on life and death, and do it if you don't accept it. Never look forward or backward. I feel that if the protagonist was born in Ye Fan's era and given him the Holy Body and unlimited resources, he might not even be able to reach the Four Pole, and he would be destined to live in the Taoist Palace for the rest of his life!

To be honest, I'm a little speechless. In the early stage, I kept filling in the things that were not in the original work. From the perspective of a ruthless person, it can be said to be a ruthless person's record. Then, you said that you were reborn for a long time and the memory of the previous life was blurred. However, you said that the protagonist was a nerd in the previous life (I think, I can't remember if it was written like this). You also said that you liked the book "Zhe Tian" in the previous life. However, you just focused on the content of "Zhe Tian", which is very common sense. Then, you said that you like peace and long for the ordinary, and you just want to live a peaceful life as a mortal. You have seen the extraordinary, and you know that your physique is extraordinary, and living in that kind of environment, normal people can think that being ordinary means that you may be affected by the extraordinary one day in your sleep and finish it, but you are still unwilling to practice or something. Forcibly adapt the plot to the original work. In the end, the special plot became infinite.

Don't be afraid, it's just the body twitching naturally during the cremation.

I knocked and lived a second life.

Just out of the blue, I had some health problems a few days ago and missed the hand order. Now I can only get a full order.

There is nothing to support the author. You cannot give rewards like a big boss. You can only silently subscribe to support.

A crude opinion about changing history Every individual's consciousness and choice now is the absolute best solution at that time. Or there is an endless timeline. Parallel worlds that are homologous but separate from each other. Even if you go back in time and change history. It will only lead to another changed ending. In the original world line. The ending is the same. It's like the same point leads to different directions. And going back to the past is just going back to the starting point. Just go in another direction. The original direction will not change. It's just that I'm changing. If possible, please refine it.

Were all novels like this in 2018? The protagonist was beaten with an ax by the villain, and the protagonist beat the person to the ground without even daring to break his hands and feet, and even persuaded the villain to do good. Damn you, I haven't seen such a mentally retarded plot in a long time.

The protagonist is too cowardly. It's disgusting to watch. I thought I was just watching it to relax, but I ended up watching this.

Nannan: My brother doesn't have a penis

Very beautiful, very delicately written, very touching