My Mile Gravity Manipulator

It's a very good book, but why not many people read it ￣ ￣)σ

The author's original plot is okay, but I can't understand what you wrote it like this⊙∀⊙! , I don't know what the plot is at all, and I don't have the feeling to continue watching it. The plot is too dragging. Except for the first few scenes, it feels like you are constantly entering and exiting prison. There are still good holes that have not been filled. The subject matter is good but the plot is weak. . . . . ,,,, But I still support the author,,,,,

The writing is boring, the main character's thinking is a bit wrong, the ability development is not clear, the fighting is mindless, and the plot is weak. Is the main character an adult? Why is it so boring to think about things?

Why do you write so much daily life? It's so boring.

What does the author say? Your book will definitely not be very popular in the early stage, but it will definitely be ok in the later stage. As long as the characters are not too bad, the eunuch can be a little more popular.

Only the first chapter is in first person, the rest are in third person. Don't leave yet, you can skip the first chapter without affecting your reading.

Can the author write less explanations when writing? If necessary, you can add this chapter to the relevant parts later, which will be much better 😅

Is Watanabe Shen really a high school student? (By the way, does it say anywhere in the original book that she is a high school student? It's not just because she looks like a high school student, right? Her 'personality' is a transformation, is her true appearance and age really that of a high school student?!)

I haven't posted a book review for a long time, and there are still people who come here to drink some water.

Probably the most 2b time traveler

There are too many settings, the plot is too slow, and there is nothing exciting about it, leaving only the taste of firewood.

Actually, I just wanted to see the protagonist meet his sister, although I haven't seen it yet ￣ ￣)σ

Because I am also writing a fanfic of Woying, so I feel that what the author writes is quite interesting. How should I put it, emmm, first of all, it is very courageous to write in the first person at the starting point. Then, regarding the personality of the protagonist, I saw a lot of settings in the work, which really cover all aspects, and I saw a lot of shadows of anime, full-time hunters, pirates, etc. This kind of setting is actually quite interesting, but the more settings there are, the easier it is to deviate from the character's main ability range. Especially in the semi-science fantasy world of Wanying, individual assignments are often based on one or two points, rather than systematic skills set by the author. And many skills basically have nothing to do with the personality of gravity. Having said that, it turns out that the line the protagonist sees is the Higgs field! So the protagonist's personality relies on directly manipulating the Higgs field to affect the local mass of the earth and near-Earth materials, thereby affecting gravity? If it can attract light. . . Black holes are really scary things. In short, since it has been written like this, there is no way to make up for it. I suggest the author just treat this personality as a unique power system, and there is no need to pay too much attention to the limitations of gravity. Many things are okay for a while, but as the plot develops, for some readers who pursue reasonableness and authors who pursue logic, it is easy to break down. Anyway, come on.

I've read too many novels, and now I feel like I'm in an indefinite book shortage.

I feel like I can't go a day without commenting and I always want to say something after reading the book! Right, so I just commented on it

Thank you, I will try my best, you really have a good idea! However, I actually don't have much confidence in my writing skills, so I think I will try to add the heroine's plot first, but I won't write it out, but use it as a practice. If it feels good, I will add it to the main text.

I feel like the protagonist is not reborn. How good is the development?

This anime has become so cool that all the fans have stopped updating it. The author is just lucky.

Quite real, but real food, real stupidity, good people are not considered bad people, bad people are not included, luck is still so bad, it doesn't feel any better, are you here to disgust people with their feelings?

As soon as I saw the name, I no longer wanted to read it.

I haven't commented for two days. Let's go out and give some water 😒

Brother Ji, I feel like your book reviews are about to be taken over by me.

I haven't signed a contract yet, but I haven't written it for so long yet, is this using love to generate electricity?

The whole building belongs to Brother Xuqi. . . . . .

Recently I have read some novels about daily stories (but I almost feel sick after reading novels about strangers, teachers, etc. I don't know why there is nothing else besides Naruto, One Piece, strangers, teachers, etc. At the starting point? I almost feel sick after reading them). I hope the author can write more. It would be great to write a world-traveling type. It would be great to write one volume for each world. If you can't finish it, it would be better to end the volume, right? , It's daily life, it doesn't matter if it's not daily life, as long as it doesn't collapse 😒😒😒🤫🤫🤫