Six Paths of Payne's Self-Cultivation

My feeling about this book is that it is "tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away." If you say you want to create a second time, there is no problem at all. We can all accept it. After all, if nothing changes, it can still be called a fan, right? But you also have to pay attention to conforming to the original work! For example, the author said that "Kong Huan" is the classmate of the third generation, but the fact is that "Mirror" is the classmate of the third generation. We readers all hope that books will get better and better. But author, you should also change these poisonous plots! Otherwise, no matter how good your later writing is, I won't be able to read the previous part, and it will be meaningless. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better.

What should I say, I just finished reading the first chapter, and then... I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading dozens of chapters, it was still the same situation. Did you, the author, not add punctuation at the end of your article? And... I don't want to talk about it anymore, let's see for yourself 😅

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, the author used a lot of self-intention, and there was no basic main line. He wrote whatever he thought of.

Author, Shisui achieved the title of Shunshen Shisui in the third battle, okay? Itachi was 5 years old at that time. Does the author have a good understanding of Naruto? There are too many mistakes.

Wait, why is it suddenly different from the original work? Didn't Jiraiya only teach them for three years and never leave? Also, wasn't the reason why they moved places before and why Jiraiya taught ninjutsu that there were two dragon ninjas who wanted to kill them? It was precisely to protect his companions that Nagato fully activated the Samsara Eye, and then Jiraiya transferred them and taught ninjutsu. Author, you have completely changed the world line with these pictures (ಡωಡ) hiahiahia

It is extremely poisonous, with a lot of inner monologues from the author, a lot of settings changes, and the character dialogues are also classic Chinese dialogues. The characters have been changed so much that it is impossible to look directly at it. It is not only in the world of Naruto, it is completely infinite, and you can watch it if you can accept it.

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When reading fan fiction, the most intolerable thing is that the author doesn't even know much about the original work. He has only read a few fan articles and setting collections, and then he dares to write random things, just to gain popularity! ! Not only is the character design seriously OOC, but the plot setting conflicts with the original work, which is comparable to a car accident scene. I clicked in to watch it because of Naruto, but all you showed me was the same thing. ? ! ! !

This author has a really good attitude. A little brother posted a comment to complain about it. There are some below. The first word he started with was "Sorry!" ! ! ! What was his reply? Original sentence: If you don't like to read, just don't read. I write books for those who like to read, and I write books for myself. If you don't like to read, just leave. There is no need to show your sense of existence. That's awesome, so arrogant. The poisonous point of the first eight chapters: He actually said that with the Rinnegan, he could know all the ninjutsu, and he also had a light escape. Did Nagato in the original work directly go to heaven? Kishimoto also said that the Third Raid 1V10,000 was just nonsense. In his eyes, the Ninja World War was really just a fight between a few villages. He also said that Nagato's eyes can turn into ordinary eyes, but if he turns into ordinary eyes, he will not be able to use the ability of the reincarnation eye. He also said in the previous chapters that readers can make up for it by themselves. It is true. Even if the writing is scummy, the mouth is still dirty. The little brother who was scolded by the author saw Chapter 53, where people complained about Scorpion's killing of the Third Kazekage. He retorted: Scorpion and the Third Kazekage didn't fight, so it was impossible for a Kage-level battle to go unnoticed. Haha, where did they fight? They are in the country of wind, which is vast and sparsely populated! In a desert with no one! Is the Sand Ninja Village so powerful? They even send out people to patrol the vast desert! This is nothing. There are many bad writers who write books. Who is the author? But in the last sentence, he said: Do you have any brains? Sand Dollar Author! Go wherever you go! , Disgusting! You can be ugly, but you still show off because you are afraid that others will not know that you have a dirty mouth! Just afraid that others don't know that you can type!

The settings of the author's Hokage fandom have been changed too outrageously! 1. Pain's six pairs of samsara eyes are originally chakra signals that disperse the power of the samsara eyes to the six puppets through the black rod on the Ten-Tails body. (The author actually added that the six pairs were mass-produced after Madara opened the reincarnation eye). 2. Jiraiya, whom Nagato has been following for three years, actually knows magic! Please ask him if he knows celestial magic, he can't absorb the chakra of the celestial being to turn his hungry ghost puppet into stone. Even if Nagato wanted to learn senjutsu, Jirai wouldn't teach Nagato, and he couldn't teach Nagato if he wanted to. Think about whether to learn the sage mode, you have to go to the three holy places of sage no matter what, and people from the Great Toad Sen (including the other two holy places) should not teach Nagato the sage mode (even if Nagato can learn it). The reason: If you are a serious Naruto fan, you should all understand. 3. If you travel through Nagato! If there is no external intervention, the final outcome will basically be killed by Black Zetsu. (Black Zetsu may indeed have little fighting power, but just because its hand possesses anyone below the Six Paths who can roar, Madara and Black Zetsu will 100% keep a back-up on Nagato. Remember, this is the only reincarnation eye Black Zetsu has encountered for thousands of years, and Black Zetsu will not let it have an accident)

There is nothing to say. The author has never read Naruto at all. The Iwa Ninja was written as an Earth Ninja, and the setting was changed in various ways. I thought I was reading a novel that was written a few years ago before Naruto was finished.

This author has never watched Naruto. When did the second generation marry a wife and have children? Nagato is not named Nagato! Xingxiu Old Immortal is full of poison, Shen Nong, who is not afraid of death, can give it a try

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Konan's character design feels broken, and she doesn't feel like an elite ninja at all. It feels like a holy mother, so uncomfortable.

If you are a fan of the original anime, you don't need to read this post. You probably don't have the intelligence to understand what this post is about. First of all, the original work of Naruto is a manga, and it is just a manga. The animation has changed the manga very, very much. Some people can't see it. I am also very speechless. The biggest questions lie in several aspects The first is the problem of the collapse of combat power and the population of the ninja world. I chased Naruto more than ten years ago. I have forgotten that at that time, I was still chasing Naruto on the show "East and West Animation Club". The most popular Naruto game at that time was imitation seals. I don't know how many people have played this game? Why is Naruto famous? It all lies in that magical seal at the beginning. Then came Zabuza and the Chunin Exam. The description of Zabuza was close to the ceiling at the time, so Kakashi's strength was always the ceiling. Of course, both of these later became jokes. As for another issue, that is, the promotion of genin to chunin, I don't know what some people think of the chunin exam chapter in the original work? The three examiners of the entire Chuunin Exam emphasized many times that it was best to advance to single digits. Anko Mitarai even said that she wanted to leave the only group of people in the Forest of Death. Then combined with the beginning of Shippuden, Naruto asked Shikamaru about everyone's rank. Shikamaru said that everyone is a chuunin, only Naruto and Sasuke are not. The situation at that time was that the last Chuunin exam was canceled and one was made up later, so ten of the Twelve Xiaoqiang became Chunin, and the number of others is unknown. Therefore, the Chunin Examination is held every three years, and the number of students admitted at one time is best controlled in single digits. How can a village of more than 10,000 ninjas come from nowhere? Copy and paste? For how to define genin, chunin, and jounin, you can read the official setting book. Genin is called body nin, which is an inferior thing. Take a look at Metkai's memory of Matt Dai. What is the status and sense of existence of genin? In the final battle, take the genin and kill someone? The second problem lies in the heart curse seal Many people say that Master Madara placed a heart curse seal on Nagato and Obito. For this question, we must first understand what the curse seal is? The seal-type curse seal caster will disappear after death, unless it is passed on. Did Madara give this thing to Black Zetsu? No! In fact, Madara only used this thing on Nohara Rin, and there was no curse mark on Obito's heart! Madara in the original work is an upright person! When he is making any plans, he will not use such despicable means unless it is necessary. It is impossible for him to release the heart curse seal for Obito and Nagato. In the original work, after Obito was drilled by Kakashi, he said that my heart had died long ago! He didn't say thank you Kakashi for saving him! He doesn't need something like Kakashi to save him, Obito has nothing on him! What Obito hates is that there is no peace in the world! Every ninja village is killing ninjas wantonly for profit. This is a very high intention, but what kind of bullshit is done in the animation! Made Madara into a little man! Made Obito a fool! It's almost speechless As for why Obito died in the end? It was only a long time later that he figured out what happened back then. The young Obito was just a passionate boy. He was indeed doing things for Madara to a certain extent.

Obito and Kazuto will never sit back and watch Nagato's happiness. Madara is not here to give Nagato a gift. Black Zetsu's thousands of years of experience and conspiracy can make Nagato miserable, so he needs to be on guard at all times.

It's a completely uninteresting book.

Uh haha... Why do I feel like the reviews are all saying that this novel is good in every aspect...~ To be honest, I feel like I can't stand it after reading the first two chapters...

This is another author who has never read the original work. He started writing it after reading a few fanfics. It was completely random and not a second setting at all. Moreover, the settings of the original work have been changed beyond recognition. The whole process is poisonous. Be careful! Be careful! Be careful!

First, too many authors' inner monologues and advertisements affect reading. Second, the author did not conduct a detailed investigation and only learned about Naruto through a single animation or setting collection. Thirdly, the exploration of the characters is a bit insufficient It is very powerful to be able to write so much and rely entirely on guesswork and writing power.

Although I think it's a bit toxic and I don't like this style myself, I think the author is right. If you want to read it, read it. If you don't want to read it, go away. If you have the ability to write it yourself, and whether I ask you to read it or not, it's your freedom whether to read it or not. It's the author's discretion to write how you want. Because, people have their own considerations, and it is impossible for you to write alone, and it will not be disliked by everyone just because you don't like it. After all, anyone who stays and reads it can accept it. If you can't accept it, just don't read it. There are so many books in Qidian. You can find them and find a sense of presence here. Also, come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

If I were Nagato, I would kill Yahiko first, and then take Konan to live happily 😍

The author should read Naruto carefully before writing. Then there will be loopholes. He has not read the original work carefully at all. How can he write a good fanfic?

Hehehe

It is better to read a personal explanatory text after an author's observation of Naruto. The author uses various chestnuts to support his point of view to illustrate his interpretation of Naruto. In this way, 80% of each chapter is used to prove the author's point of view. 10% To write the content, 10% to be "funny". Finally, let's focus on Nagato's Samsara Eye. The protagonist doesn't use seals, doesn't study the process of releasing ninjutsu, and doesn't care about what ninjutsu is. The protagonist with Goldfinger is so awesome. Tired and funny.

Skipping 80 chapters does not affect reading

What are you writing, dear? I can't understand it at all…..

It's random writing, rubbish, why not write it as fantasy?

Finally, a Naruto fan has his own alternative ending, at least it's not a popular ending like fighting Madara Six Paths or Kaguya and the other Otsutsuki. . .