Witch of the North

I have deleted all external comments. There are many shortcomings in this book. The new author is very busy at work every day and has very little time to write the book. I hope everyone can be tolerant and I will listen to your opinions.

It's been seven months since I started Black Wizard. The first three golden chapters of Shangxiang are completely limited to the wizard-style routines. Programmer, soul travel, the same name, and smart chip in the previous life. If it is changed to other professions, the name will be completely different. The soul travel fails and is absorbed by the indigenous people. It gives Goldfinger a more reasonable way to appear. Can this anti-routine style be more attractive?

The protagonist really comes from modern society. He trusts people so easily. The protagonist's IQ is not enough. Otherwise, if he has the aura of the protagonist, he may die many times.

The author's writing is exciting, but the reader's reading is mediocre. Although the protagonist seems to work very hard, he does the work assigned by others, has no ideas of his own, and is just a minor player. How can he be the protagonist without causing trouble?

It seems quite reasonable that I can't deduce the meditation method. After all, I don't have any basic knowledge. The novels about other chips I have seen before have no basis. I just get the book and directly deduce it without doing any verification experiments. I just go straight to stronger exercises and the like. It feels completely unreasonable.

Hello, strong recommendation boss! ! ! !

Some routines have been used until you can see that the writing style and ideas are okay, and I am trying to find my own path. Generally speaking, it is a relatively reasonable book for wizards. It is worth reading. I recommend it to you. Come on 🙂

Well, the author, could you use less cold words? It appeared many times in one chapter, and everyone said it coldly.

If it's too routine, it's hard for today's novels to become popular without some creativity.

I thought it was artificial intelligence that traveled through time. Is there anything new in this way of writing compared to other wizarding novels? I didn't see it.

Forget about chip flow, you put the Foundation, Cthulhu, and Steampunk together in order to make up the plot. Are you sure you can write it without any sense of contradiction? Personally, I feel that Mr. Ke is the strongest one when he appears in this time and space.

Decisively kill people, and then Princess Tina probably comes to question her, start a fight, and break up completely?

The main reason for this book is that the plot of the knight in the front is a bit long and messy. It may have dug a lot of holes, but it didn't leave much of a deep impression on me. After becoming a wizard, it was good. I just need to write exciting things next. The author can also revise the front part after a while.

It's a bit of a cliched wizarding novel... It lacks new ideas. In terms of borrowing from wizard literature, Squid only borrowed from the potion promotion system and combined it with Cthulhu mythology and steam magic to create a new genre. This kind of thinking of an old author is actually very rare. And the author's name is too silly!

Personally, I feel that in most wizarding novels, the protagonist will become a knight or a refiner in the early stage. And wizards rely on wisdom to make a living, so if you want to be a powerful wizard, you must... Have both style and style!

Dad, you must persist and never give up! Very well written! ! !

After all, Chip Flow is not original. It takes effort to get readers to agree with it. Personally, I quite like it. I hope the author can write it with a different feeling.

It's quite pleasing to the eye. The author is very quick.

Just when I thought I found a good book, you turned out to be a eunuch 😡😡😡

Was the protagonist's IQ eaten by a dog? ? How long did it take to travel back in time before you offended a noble? ? They didn't offend him! ... He was the one who took the initiative to offend!