Archlich Talandar

After reading the entire twenty-nine chapters, I don't know what story you want to write, the author. Your stream-of-consciousness way of writing is a bit too arbitrary, making me, the reader, look like the incoherent ramblings of a lunatic in a mental hospital.

This lich is really a crazy lich

Look at how compressed the content is. What you want to cover in 200 chapters can be covered in 30 chapters? I suggest you just keep it up for now and wait until the plot calms down before reading the author's slow explanation and combining it with the previous content. 😐😐😐