The Heroic Story of Wild Sakura in Konoha Spring

Please update more, 10 chapters a day is not enough 😭😭😭

Because I saw some people asking, I pinned it to the top to explain ✌️

Because this is my first time writing a book, I actually have no idea how what I write will look like to others. I quite like it when I read it, but I think any author feels good about himself when he reads what he writes. So if you have any thoughts and opinions about this book, please leave me a message here. I can accept any criticism. I just hope that the things I write will get better and better. Then, thank you all for reading what I wrote. As a newcomer, if someone reads what I write, it is already a kind of affirmation for me. This makes me very happy. Thank you again. 😁

I spent a lot of time doing it, and I feel better than before 😃

The problem with the shadow clone is a major poison. It would be embarrassing to force the shadow clone to rely on Misaka's feelings. A ball of chakra demands to eat good food every day or not work, and even has a confrontation with the main body. I have no problem with letting the shadow clone play tricks in daily life. The problem is that in battle, it is too much to let the shadow clone take the opportunity to blackmail the main body, right? Originally, the Yin Seal did not reach the expected power because it was restricted from using tailed beast chakra, and it had to take drugs and kryptonium every day to speed up the filling of the Yin Seal, but the shadow clone actually rebelled again? More than a hundred benefits? Are you sick? The villains forcefully survive each time and become stronger and stronger. The protagonist has struggled so far and not a single major villain has been killed. The tailed beasts that were originally said to be captured have disappeared now. They are obviously very powerful but they are always failing. Orochimaru will not talk about it. Kabutanzo and the Lord of Snow Country are just like that. Is it impossible to kill him? The protagonist's personality is obviously one that has gone through many vicissitudes of life, is indifferent to life and death, and is decisive in killing. Although he usually plays tricks but is ruthless, how come he has not killed a future threat until now? Is it interesting to force various accidents to allow the villain to escape?

I have to say, this book is really a pity

I can accept being single, becoming a hundred, or getting married. I don't need to look at other people's opinions about who I like in terms of relationships... But I have no confidence in 99% of the male authors of Qidian. In terms of relationships, even those written by great gods are still very confusing. Can you find 100 books with good emotional dramas among Qidian's million novels? Especially the emotional scenes of love between men and women, it's simply terrible... It's miserable! !

It was okay at first, but the protagonist revealed Naruto's life experience and Naruto became an adopted son. These two points poisoned me. . . . . .

Without this 1,400 years of experience in cultivating immortals, this book would be okay. Adding this setting makes people doubt that the protagonist spent 1,400 years in his previous life cultivating paramecium? He doesn't understand the Five Elements, he's not good at martial arts, his IQ isn't high enough, and he's still a middle-class student. The opening chapter says that he integrated the spiritual power of his previous life, and as a result, his chakra content is only 3 to 5 times that of a normal jounin. It might be better to switch to a 2-good otaku.

Weird character design, average writing style

What I want to see the most is actually the one with Ino... Sakura and Ino are my favorites in Naruto, and the other CPs are completely indifferent.

Suddenly the book is displayed. . . I'm really looking forward to it, send it!

The organization of the text is very simple, so I just write whatever comes to my mind. To sum up, the writing style of primary school students The development of the plot has a sense of being taken for granted.

I want to give this author a copy of this book. Although this book is very watery, the pace is really good. He was able to write so many words before he reached the level of Jounin and his combat power did not collapse.

Advantages: The characters are highly restored, the protagonist has an interesting personality, the character should have an online IQ, the plot logic is good, and it is not limited to the original plot. Main shortcomings: 1. The protagonist's IQ and personality do not fit the background character (the thousand-year cultivation experience of the second time travel and rebirth, it is more reasonable to replace it with the experience of a mortal martial arts master), 2. The protagonist is not selfish enough, and the good things obtained through hard work are basically turned over to Konoha or cheap friends, which feels like a wedding dress.

After reading Chapter 11, I feel that the protagonist's more than 1,400 years may have been in vain. A practitioner who has practiced for more than 1,400 years must have a deep understanding of himself. Even if you change your body, you should be able to master it quickly. There is no point in controlling it or not. Five-year-old Xiao Li's physical skills are similar to those of the protagonist? Didn't those boxing techniques in the previous life pay attention to force and technique? The setting of more than 1,400 years is a bit exaggerated.

Because Lily, a straight woman, has been afraid to enter the trap. _(:3∠❀)_

Did the author change his account to open the book? If you know, could you provide me with a portal?

Three generations of immortals will give way? If he is no longer good, even if he passes it to Danzo, he will not give it to others, because it is not the same. Forcibly whitewashing is too disgusting. Please understand, the fourth generation of tool people, if the old monkey did not join Danzo in the crime, it would not be the fourth generation. What do you think of the old monkey, a member of a small family affiliated with the Senju clan who has no blood inheritance limit? How did he live until the Senju, Uchiha, Kurama and other big clans were exterminated, and how did he live until the Sarutobi clan became a big clan? A mortal with no bloodline limit, his chakra is about the same as a 55-kai (the 55-kai is because the Sharingan is disabled), at most the level of Hatake White Fang, but he has titles such as Ninja Hero and Doctor of Ninjutsu? ! Don't say that the zombies were not sealed at that time. When Uzumaki Kushina came, she came as an orphan whose clan was wiped out. Otherwise, a member of the big clan who works side by side with the Senju and Uchiha clan would be bullied? No matter how useless Obito is, it will be said that he is a loser, and he does not really dare to bully him. Will the third generation not have the sealing technique of the Uzumaki clan? ! …

Just tell me if you are still alive. Are you sick or something?

Are you a eunuch? The excitement suddenly disappeared.

The enemy keeps running away, it's uncomfortable to watch

What the hell, chakra is from outside, right? How about celestial arts? Doesn't practicing celestial arts also attract spiritual energy? If you don't dare to use cheats, then what's the use of your reincarnation? A soul that has been cultivating for 1,400 years is at least a soul. If there is no change after fusion, it only proves that you are too useless.

Why do Xiang Lin and Tayuya write about being fat? Birds are particularly annoying

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

And Su Qun, tell me if you have anything to say.

While I was reading, I suddenly discovered that the author's team battle writing was particularly exciting! ! Playing a better BGM is simply more enjoyable than watching anime! ! ! I really like the way this team battle is written! YYDS! ! I just like team battles where fists and punches and brains show off! ! Imagine this scene is really beautiful! ! Super burning! !

Can you tell me if there are any books on other platforms?

For those ordinary people's organizations, it's over with just one teleportation. Even if there are restrictions at the bottom, will there be restrictions at the top? There aren't many high-level people, so it won't take long to find them one by one. Ordinary people won't be able to detect them using illusions, and no one will know. That assassination organization is so funny.

Why is it that the new book is gone as soon as it comes out?