Bleach: Traveling Through the Broken Bee, Starting from the Swastika

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I talked about recasting the swastika and turning it into the strongest thunder-type Zanpakutō. Behind it is still the B missile, which is already on the verge of being abandoned 😅

It's 2024, and I can still see novels with female protagonists in the fan section, which makes me cry.

When will the protagonist wear the original open-back death-defying costume? I want to see it 😏

Personally I think the book's system is redundant so far. All the current plots can remain almost the same after canceling the system and still maintain logical flow for another reason. The system seems to be just a gimmick and reduces the protagonist's subjective initiative. If the protagonist is not forced by the system to become captain, but instead initiates the change of captain out of his own will and ambition, the character's charm and arc will be more complete. Of course, I don't know the author's future plans, so I can write however I want, come on!

Smash Bee

The overall novel is well written, but there is one most basic issue that the author has not considered, which makes it look strange. We all know that 98 each Zanpakutō has its own cultural background setting, but he has never admitted that the Thunder God Whip refers to the Thunder God in Chinese mythology. The author of this book seemed to have never thought about this problem when he wrote it. He directly regarded the thunder god of thunder whip as the god of thunder, and then designed it as a thunder and lightning Zanpakutō. In the original work, the Thunder Whip has no characteristics of thunder at all. What does a big missile have to do with Thor? Shouldn't the feature be guns or firecrackers? In China, the fire gun is called the Big Thunder God. This is not because the fire gun can make thunder, but because the sound is very loud like thunder. Another one, an up researched and said that there was a military commander in Japan during the Warring States Period who was good at using fire blunderbuss, so he was nicknamed Raikou. He also pointed out that this general has many other elements that are very similar to the settings of Shatter. Therefore, the origin of the name of the firecracker is probably a Japanese historical figure or the firecracker itself. I feel this is obviously more convincing than Thor's statement. The author never considered this issue when he wrote? I took it for granted and just set it up like this. I never thought about why it was called Thunder Whip. It feels like I have no understanding of cultural common sense at all. I have also seen a video made by an up saying that the thunder god of thunder and thunder is the thunder god of Chinese mythology. It seems really uneducated as it should be. As a result, this book is also the same. I also saw someone pointed out this problem in the comment area of ​​the book. I think the author wrote this book based on this. This is still the most basic setting. At the very least, he must understand and explore this issue. If he really wants to write like this, he must also explain the second setting or his personal opinion. This seems too ridiculous. Every time I use the Zanpakutō, I remember it, and then I don't want to watch anymore 🙄

The description of the battle is messy, and I changed the plot and setting by myself, basically I can't control it. It is expected to collapse and then enter the palace.

The system has the reputation of lowering the writing threshold for newcomers, but this is not a reason to abuse the system. The system can only be used as a cheat. It cannot be compatible with plot promotion at the same time. It cannot threaten to restrict the host.

It would be great if the swastika of Zaiwase could integrate her mixed abilities, such as creating a domain type or a rule type. If the author has no inspiration, he can look at how hell and underworld are described in our ancient books, and come up with a cooler one. At least the white swastika can be related to the civilization of the far east. If I remember correctly, Zaibee has a system, right? White Zombie also told her to be vigilant. She hasn't appeared in the game for a long time, and she hasn't been out for a long time. She can't really pile up the numbers and follow the chopper flow like a family. It's boring to follow his path. Speaking of which, the author wants to let Zhizu go to explore a certain distant eastern civilization. It can be seen that the author is burying hidden clues. What is the truth about Soul Society and Hell? How will the Shattering Bee's battle form improve its combat effectiveness? How to become the best Zanpakutō in the lightning system? Why can she easily extract the energy from hell to open the portal? Looking forward to the next plot very much

After a trip to Hueco Mundo, the plot almost collapsed. The mystery was revealed too early, causing the protagonist's strength to not improve, but Aizen Yuha seemed to be nothing. The crown may be snatched by Youha, and how Aizen detonates it is also a problem. The monk is probably also involved in the conspiracy. The problem now is that the protagonist's growth path has problems due to some changes in Aizen. Can Aizen still be able to build a team on his own? Unless Hueco Mundo has a big problem because of the crown, and Aizen becomes the savior of another group of Hollows?

After reading around chapter 48, I am quite satisfied that there is an original plot, and it is also a good thing that other characters are also described. And everything follows the original plot, and all major places remain unchanged. What's the point? Only those who are dissatisfied will post comments, and those who think it is good will not comment specifically. Then survivor bias will appear as if that paragraph is not popular. In short, as an author, you should stick to yourself through the number of subscriptions or whatever. Don't just rely on the voices of the people who comment. I hope you write better and better~

Last night we tied the game, let me share my thoughts today. I was a little confused after it was released, and I always jumped to read it. The author originally said that he would not write about group portraits, but I saw a few chapters in the middle where I lost control and almost went off track. I hope I will pay more attention to it in the future. It is rare for Bleach fans to see finished stories. Even after the bloody battle chapter came out, there were a lot more, but many were abandoned halfway, some were hastily finished, and a small part landed safely. The author's article takes me back to my high school days. It's not that the article is too simplistic, but it reminds me of the time when my peers were blooming and my imagination was wide open. The plot of more than a hundred chapters has not yet begun, and I don't know if things like those in the original work will happen. I hope the author can work hard. As a colleague, I also know how difficult this industry is. After all, I killed pigs in my previous life, but I teach in this life. Last but not least, please write more heroines, at least don't let the big girl Yongyin go, above all! It will take some time to cultivate the article, and I wish the author a Happy New Year in advance.

To be honest, the handling was very, very poor. In the beginning, Aizen had no reason to care about the protagonist, but the protagonist deliberately avoided Aizen. Then when he met Aizen, he said that he was frightened because he was praising her. Chun Chun is trying to attract Aizen's attention. After resisting some poisonous points, I started to feel better later on. Then after the plot where Aizen was promoted to captain, the protagonist was replaced by common sense for several chapters (I haven't read the latter, I don't know how long he will have to be brainwashed). This is a super poisonous point. To put it bluntly, if this plot is placed at the front, the book will be killed immediately. It also directly reflects the author's incompetence, which shows that the development of the plot is beyond the author's control, and the author is forcibly turning back to the original plot. This is of the same nature as before when Hueco Mundo was replaced. Maybe the author wanted to write something different, but then he couldn't control it, so he turned back to the original plot. In the end, a novel with far fewer comments than chapters is not worth reading.

How should I put it? It's 500 chapters and the main character is still unsolved. It's a bit too slow.

I have been focusing on some insignificant parts, and the main character's abilities have not been developed. The swastika has not been completed yet. I just skipped a dozen pictures to see if it has no impact at all. I am starting to get confused again, right? Do you have a goal, a plan, or even an outline? What have you been writing about: Ghost Daoist, Spiritual Arts Academy, and Madara? Head, Yumichika, these minor supporting characters, and the relationship between the various factions. Is there any point in writing these? How many chapters have the protagonist not developed new abilities or improved his own abilities? These are the key points. I write scraps every day. You can just cut it. There is no desire to read more updates 😐

Personally, I felt that this Hueco Mundo plot was really uncomfortable for me to watch.

The main plot and plot advancement of this book are too confusing, slow and watery. In more than ten chapters, the actual main plot has not moved at all. A Zanpakutō swastika solution cost more than 500. I couldn't solve it and then I went to fight with the double sword. Where did I see the giant green bee, but I dug a hole and the protagonist didn't know anything. They elbowed each other. After that, I came to complain. It can be seen that the author is very busy, but the writing method is too uncomfortable now, and there is no big words to say. How many words have been dug from the hole dug at the beginning to now, and how many words have been filled in now? Too ink

The author exaggerates the sparrow part too much. After reading the first 16 chapters, I was almost placed in the same class as Kenpachi, the Yamamoto flower sister. How is this possible? Please use some logic.

By the way, the cover is probably Fubuki. Don't you consider changing to Zhan Bee? Also, I found a picture Ziao Bee is going to marry Yoruichi🤭🤭🤭

Oh my god, can we still see the Death God single Baiwen in 2024? Apart from stewed chicken, no one has written it for several years. I vaguely remember that the last time I saw Zai Bee as the protagonist was in 2013, Zai Bee x Yoruichi.

It's quite interesting, but I still can't stand it after reading 200 chapters. Are some meaningless body descriptions and interactions too much? It's not that I just write about body figures. One or two times is fine, but it's almost 40 times after 200 chapters. The one that left a deep impression on me is Yongine Niruka-san and Yoichi Shihato. Even though I'm a super chef, I can't handle it. The book is good, I I also like the slow-burning type. I can resist originality and broken characters, but the lower part always comes to poke me after a few chapters. I really like Broken Bee. Can anyone tell me if there are too many lower parts like this in the back? If there are, I will run away quickly.

The monthly pass is given to you

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I feel that the author's writing style is very good, and it is very comfortable to read. Does the author have books on other platforms? This writing style doesn't feel like it's the first time I've written a book 😁 It's been a long time since I've seen a heroine.

Fill it with camellia sauce, meow~ Fill it with camellia sauce, thank you, meow~

Is there much to say about the latest chapter of this book now? I feel like there are so few posts in book circles.

Is the author still there? Isn't it necessary to have perfect attendance?

The eunuch sucks. The 46th book of Yangshou.

Come on, author, I'll give you the monthly ticket, don't be a eunuch, there are only a few Death God fandoms, and there are even fewer female fandoms