Earth Star Group

There are three points for persuading people to quit drug addiction The first one is to write songs for the sister-in-law with whom they are not very close The second one is to inexplicably give a company ten classic songs every year The third one is to whitewash drug-addicted celebrities

I have to say,,, the persuasion is terrible, the logic is flawed, the description is flawed, and the character is flawed. . . My ex-wife and her family started to be snobbish, and then my sister-in-law started looking for songwriting or something. . You weren't sure how many songs you could get from the group, but you promised the Rolling Stones a guaranteed ten songs a year? ? Hey, the author's strength persuades him to quit

After reading the last few chapters, I don't know what to say. Has the author ever thought about giving away a song like "Fireworks Easily Cold"? It's okay for you to sign that person to your company. He is not your friend or relative, but just giving away a classic song is almost like giving away tens or even hundreds of millions of money to an unknown person. If you continue to write like this, author, how many subscriptions do you think you can get if you put it on the shelves? Moreover, readers' book reviews are never replied to in the book review section. Does the author think he is a great person? Please read everyone's suggestions carefully.

You can talk now, but it's hard to get 500 experience points. Don't be a eunuch.

🤓🤓🤓 Well written 😊 Come on, the author is great

😁 You can really see it, but some things happen too deliberately and a bit weird.

I looked at the table of contents and saw a chapter called "Encountering the Goddess by Chance". I had no desire to read it directly.

After reading Chapter 108, I was suddenly speechless. It was hard to find a song to compliment the previous songs, and suddenly I fell down on my knees and licked ten songs a year. What was the author thinking? Now it is others who beg you, not you who beg others. If you don't change it, you will probably scare away a large number of book friends.

I haven't updated it for several days. Is it cold?

I saw the first chapter. I don't know where the poison was when I joined the group. Maybe it was poisoned earlier (it started from touching the legs?)

I suggest you change the plot about giving away ten songs for free. I really can't stand it.

Come on, author💪, this book is very interesting. Don't think with your own thoughts when reading now. It can bring you a little happiness when you are bored. Why not?

It feels good. I can write at a slower pace.

I would like to make a suggestion, Pig's Feet can share the music of his world to the group and give it to the stars of the earth. It will be beneficial whether it is to gain their favor or to get more earth music.

I started to blackmail my wife and daughter, and then began to show the prelude to whitewashing. The current author is really desperate. You think you have a golden finger when you write like this, and you are sensationalizing.

So far, I can read and write well. I will keep it this way in the future. It will be better if there is improvement 🙂

I have been following this book, but I am really disappointed when I read this. Drug abuse will lead to a life of darkness, especially the author mentioned that drug abuse does not harm others. I really cannot agree with the view of the prodigal son turning back. Without further ado, all the votes I cast in the past are just like feeding the dogs. Here is the last report vote.

"In addition, drug abuse does not harm other people, it just sets a bad example. Compared with those who kill people and set fire, it is easier for people to re-recognize and accept it." From Chapter 178, I can't find it now. Songs are acceptable. After all, with the resources of the entire earth, one gift is a gift, and ten songs are a gift. It's not bad for such a good song, but to whitewash drug addicts, what's the difference between you and a hot chicken?

I hope that the plot in Chapter 109 about writing ten songs for the Rolling Stones can be revised. It's too vicious. Since you write entertainment articles, you should understand the concept of ten classic songs every year, and it's impossible to write pig's feet just for the Rolling Stones and not for other friends. That means at least one classic song every month. This is stupid. When you write like this, I thought you were trying to persuade you to quit after the book is almost finished. . . Although what you are writing is a novice novel with a bit of flair, it is still an urban novel after all. You must abide by some realistic basic rules for so long. You are so awesome, but the effect is the opposite, and the persuasion function is leveraged. Like Lin Xi, Xiao Chong, Fang Wenshan and other lyricists from Hong Kong, do you think they are releasing classics every month? That would drive people to death, so this should at least respect reality and not highlight the frivolity. After all, it is an urban genre, not fantasy, let alone a fairy tale. I hope the author can change it.

Haha, ten high-quality songs are guaranteed for one year. Haha, your best friend won't sing anymore. How many years can you give it to me? I really can't stand it after reading this chapter. Goodbye.

What do you think of this book? It's very childish and the type that readers like to read, but the author obviously made the protagonist a bit mean. A wife who abandoned him when he was down and out is slowly coming clean. A snobbish sister-in-law was disgusting to see. The protagonist was the same when she was popular, but ignored her when she was hidden in the snow. Suddenly she became popular again and came to ask for this and that from the protagonist, and the protagonist tried his best to help her. I have tolerated all this, but in Chapter 108, signing with Rolling Stone is too toxic. Should the author make the protagonist so mean and humble? Even if there is a golden finger, there is no need to be so passive. It doesn't matter whether the protagonist's gold finger is good enough for the company or not. The contacts accumulated from writing songs for those celebrities are enough. He gives the Rolling Stones ten hits every year and is asked for this and that by other companies. I want to say, what do you want from him? Forget it, let's not talk about it. How can I put it? It's a pity that a good book has been poisoned to death even if I don't have IQ.

Um, I can't wait until it's released, 10 songs in one year? Delete it immediately after commenting, this is more disgusting than the harem

Comrade author, I'll give you one day to revise the plot of drug abuse. If you still haven't done it tomorrow, please call and report it.

You give people ten songs a year, and if you look at your style of singing new songs every time something happens, you will have to sing at least five songs a year. You also need to sing several songs a year to a big guy who you have just met and become a friend with. Not counting other needs, you need to write (nominally) at least twenty songs a year, which is an average of two songs a month, and with your style, they are all hits and high production.                                                                                                                                                                               itu

To be honest, insisting on 30 chapters is really not working. The novelty seems to be there, but in fact, the soup does not change the medicine. The author's writing is not strong enough. The novelty is not enough and the writing is not good. The protagonist is shameless. The song said that he wrote it well. Xiaodu said that the MJ moonwalk protagonist was created by himself. I couldn't bear it anymore and withdrew it.

I don't know if it's because I'm tired of watching it or something else, but I can't stand any entertainment with a daughter. Thank you very much and I'm leaving.

The author should revise the Rolling Stones section! Ten songs a year is not considered bad, but the crux of the matter is that all of them should be classics! How many classics can a singer have in his lifetime? Some even have one classic song in their lifetime! How come I have become a cabbage here?

Chapter 108, died of poison, see you again!

Change it and say it, don't change the report. Drug abuse is impossible to forgive

Have you seen the part about 10 songs a year that was abandoned?