Building Goodwill in Marvel

It's better to add a cheat to the protagonist and add their equipment to the abilities of all the protagonists in the spy movie, so that it will be more interesting in the early stage, or arrange a team for the protagonist, and the team members are 007, Kingsman, Mission: Impossible, Disk Suit, etc. This way, the vacuum period in the early stage can be overdone 😁, a little bit of imagination

Hill is level 9? I think it's an innocent college student.

The writing is good, I look forward to the follow-up, please give me your votes, cheers for the author💪! ! !

Build a white-collar building, 10 o'clock on the first floor, 1 knot on the 100th floor 🤫

The first chapter is Chapter 40 which is pretty good! But starting from chapter 40. It's as if someone has changed, and the taste has changed all of a sudden... The strong smell of falling silk is coming to my face... I'm always surprised! What an agent! He even went to Hollywood to meet and have an affair. All kinds of... Especially the kind that make you lose your hair. Even I, a pure loser, can't stand it.

I feel like the character of the agent in the book is, how should I put it, weird? It stands to reason that an agent must first be self-disciplined, and then be suspicious and wary. Even a good old guy like Coulson will not let down his guard. If he trusts others, has doubts, or feels something is wrong, he will not let down his guard even if it is basically an illusion, but will become more vigilant. It doesn't matter that the protagonist is an agent who became a monk on the way. Other agents in the book have been described many times. It may be an illusion. Something is wrong. Also, even if you are a scientific researcher, in this kind of spy agency, at least someone you don't know comes to talk to you. You have to be a little wary. Low EQ does not mean low IQ. Especially in the secret department, there is no mission and you can casually contact scientific researchers. Could it be that you are a spy?

To get a good impression, does it mean to be a licking dog?

What do you think of the freckled-faced, short, tight-fitting leather-wearing, and gruff-voiced Scarlett as Black Widow? They all say how sexy they are, but in fact, I think all Marvel movies are the ones where Scarlett's appearance is relatively low The hair is also ugly as hell. Except for the time when she is interrogated, she looks better, and the whole movie is ruined by her clothes..

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 248! The protagonist becomes more and more stupid as he writes, and he doesn't even need the upgraded Edman knife? While saying that Uru alloy has good magic conductivity and is strong and sharp? You can't even break a magic shield with it? Take a step back and say that you can't break the magic shield, even your magic that cuts a little bit of skin can't break it? Wouldn't the knife directly cause damage and explode if you hit yourself? God is flying around like a big bird? Is there such a big space for you to fly inside the space carrier? The most bizarre thing is that Amora's magic blasted the mothership wall for a long time without breaking it? You let a magician blast the space carrier for a long time and it didn't get destroyed? Is the iron sheet of the mothership made of vibranium?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: It's really tasteless and a pity to abandon. I've read this book back and forth many times, but I never got past 40 chapters each time, and I got goosebumps all over my body. The female character creation is not good. At first glance, the reader will see that this is not an agent, but a young female college student (Hill, Carter, the psychological activities and facial expressions of the widow, and I remember the widow gave the protagonist a kiss, and then said: Don't think too much). If you can't write the role of an agent well, then don't give this character too many psychological activities and facial expressions. Otherwise, if you write too much and fail to write well, it will be superfluous. And too many people are shocked... Shocked...+Curious about the protagonist every time. For example: This man looks less than 23 years old, so awesome... This man looks so young, so curious. This kind of psychological activity of being shocked and curious about the protagonist can only be written once or twice. It will be annoying to read more.       ""，，""，"" Because these are two tones. I suggest you read it yourself after each chapter. Of course, you have finished this book. I can only give you some comments. I hope you can write better in your next book.