Building Goodwill in Marvel

How about giving the protagonist another cheat ability, like adding the equipment of protagonists from all spy movies? That would make the early stages more interesting. Or, give the protagonist a squad of members who are all 007s, Kingsman, Mission: Impossible, or Bourne Identity, which would make the early gaps in the plot easier to bridge. 😁 Just a little idea.

Hill is level 9? I think I'm watching a romance novel.

Well written! Looking forward to the next installment. Sending you my votes! Keep it up, author! 💪!!!

Build a white-collar building; 10 points on the first floor; 100 floors to complete the project; 🤫

The first 40 chapters were alright! But starting from chapter 40, it was like a completely different person; the flavor suddenly changed... A strong, cheesy, and stale feeling hit me... He gets so easily surprised! He's nothing like a secret agent! He even went to Hollywood specifically for romantic encounters and trysts. All sorts of... The really awful kind, even I, a complete loser, couldn't stand it.

The way the agents are portrayed in the book is... Well, it's a bit strange. Logically, an agent should first be self-disciplined, then suspicious and wary. Even a good-natured person like Coulson wouldn't let his guard down, trust others easily, or have doubts or feel something is wrong, even if it's just a misperception. Instead, he would become even more vigilant.

Does "building a good impression" mean being a simp?

What are your thoughts on Scarlett Johansson's portrayal of Black Widow, given her freckled face, short stature, tight leather outfit, and deep voice? Everyone says she's incredibly sexy, but I actually think all the Marvel movies feature Scarlett Johansson at her least attractive. Her hair was awful; it only looked decent during the first interrogation scene. The rest of the movie was ruined by her clothes.

I couldn't continue reading after chapter 248! The protagonist gets sillier and sillier. He doesn't even use the upgraded adamantite knife? He claims Uru alloy is magically powerful, strong, and sharp? He can't even cut through a magic shield? And even if it can't cut through a magic shield, it can't even cut through a minor cut?

Reaching the part with Black Widow was truly a case of "tasteless yet a pity to abandon." I've clicked into this book multiple times, but each time I haven't made it past chapter 40. It gave me goosebumps all over. The female character development is poor. At first glance, the reader doesn't see her as a secret agent, but rather as a teenage college student.