Harry Potter: Death's Power

I hope I won't send a girl as a gift

Why do I feel like I'm just following the plot? Their lives must be more than what is shown in the original work. They can write more about their daily lives. There will always be classmates who they can talk to. No matter how lonely they are, there are still one or two familiar people. There is an author who writes ten pictures a day, with the main plot plus random events similar to dungeons. There are more than 1,000 chapters and at least 800 chapters are in the water every day. Although it is watery, it is really good-looking, and every supporting character is very plump.

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A sister and a wife don't equal two parts of happiness, they're just double sorrows, and isn't the protagonist a time traveler? Why don't you know Amy's identity?

Fantastic Beasts 2 is really beautiful. Voldemort is not as good as Grindelwald. The first Dark Lord had a complete world view, a lofty ideal and Dumbledore's love, and magic was cooler than Voldemort. The second generation Dark Lord is not only shameless, but also not as handsome as Uncle Pu. There is no comparison.

This must be the author's first time writing a book. The dialogue between the lines is not particularly natural. Would you mind reading more famous dialogues to improve the works?

Not great. I feel like I can't stand it

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The Death Space is called the underworld in mythology, not hell. Hell is the domain of demons and demons. It can be said that the God of Death is a powerful god, and the underworld is the territory of gods, not demons. As the territory of gods, the underworld is quiet, peaceful, and peaceful.

The previous part is too discouraging. Have you ever seen a friend share what he wrote later? After reading this point, I feel that the author is determined not to read the original work.

Regarding the issues that some book friends have posted about explanations in this chapter, if I see them, I will go back and revise them again, and then delete the comments in this chapter! (This is dark history after all!) I hope everyone will understand!

Why do I feel like I'm reading Invincible 😅

…The layout is very confusing, with bits of everything added in, like a hodgepodge

So what else is there for this editor to recommend?

In fact, if you travel to the world of Harry Potter, if the protagonist has a golden finger. You can learn normal things while learning magic. Then after graduating and going to college, there is no need to hang out with that rabble. The wizarding world is useless, and the government can't even fight a terrorist.

The writing is a bit bad, the language is childish, and it is coquettish and coquettish. It feels like it was written by a middle school boy. I guess the author is a middle school student!

The protagonist shouldn't need a magic weapon to cast spells, right?

I like Elimia (silver-haired half-elf), but I don't like Ellie (classmate)

The author of Qidian competes with others

Author, when will the new book be released?

Well, shouldn't Alymia be the heroine? Or multiple heroines

Will the author continue to write books in the future? Please answer😥

Is Lisa and the protagonist together later?