Monster King

This, I can only say that the author is really using love to generate electricity. The reason for such poor results may really be the reason why the writing is not good. Cut it out. I suggest you open a new book 😥😥😥

I was so suffocated in the first few chapters of this novel that I had no motivation to continue reading. Can the author fix the beginning? It really feels toxic.

When I read Chapter 17, I didn't understand anything. My level is too low! The writing is too messy, and the protagonist's martial arts are too outrageous, right? Martial arts from a demon-free world to this world directly pull things down from the sky to attack?

~(￣▽￣~)~|･ω･｀)

I was poisoned after reading Chapter 2 🥵

1.07 Million, 82 recommendation votes... I couldn't help but read four chapters... These 82 votes should be sympathy votes... To express respect for the author's writing spirit of generating love... I will not read the book, I really can't stand it...

The topic I chose is good, but the content is very lackluster and flowing, a bit like a composition (I'm just trying to make up the word count). If self-pleasure is just about satisfying your own fantasies, then you can just keep doing this and ignore others and enjoy yourself. If not, I think you should start from scratch (after finishing a chapter, read it from the perspective of a reader, the feeling will be very different)

The subject matter is very good, it's really good, but you probably didn't write an outline or anything like that. It's too messy and I can't express it clearly. You said there are Yu-Gi-Oh monsters and you use cards... And you also have the Zerg monsters? I think it's completely messy. I suggest you rewrite it and write down the basic historical basis of the minimum rank and level clearly. It's too messy.

This. . . Your subject matter appeals to me, though. . . Your article persuaded me. It's not easy to write so many chapters. Come on.

If there are plug-ins, don't use them. If you have to go to the wild to catch babies with zero combat power, your brain is really screwed up.

The more I look at it, the more confusing it becomes. I won't mention the typos.

It feels a bit confusing and a bit tiring to watch. I still haven't figured out the main character's name, Bai Hao or something else. 😥😥😥

Only two people wrote so many words...

1.06 Million words doesn't even have 100 recommendation votes. The author is really motivated by love. I suggest you cut it and reopen it, and practice your writing.

There are a lot of typos and it's very tiring to read.

Come on 😡😡😡