One Piece Invincible Card System

At the beginning, the thief was persuaded to quit. This kind of bastard and unmotivated protagonist are not likable.

Ian can become a Super Saiyan in the later stage. . Although it's Trunks' card. . But it can also happen in seconds.

The protagonist, Goldfinger, eats money. And it's a lot of money. So why does the protagonist want to become a navy? The protagonist goes to sea at the age of sixteen, is not very powerful, and only has one card. At such a young age, why don't you spend a few years as a pirate hunter to build up your capital, and it's not too late to go strong? The salary in the navy is low, and there is no head bounty to get, just a little bonus... So why? Wouldn't it slow down my own upgrade speed if I entered in such a hurry?

I don't have enough experience in writing ISBNs to post, so I can only post with this account for reading novels. By the way, will anyone read my novels? (Shivering. Jpg)

If you have any favorite characters, weapons, etc., You can tell me. I'll see if they fit and add them 😏 (manual dog head)

It felt like no one was watching at all, and I panicked a lot.

In fact, just use a set of Fairy Tail, and nothing else will appear.

Well, they all say that I have a lot of typos, and I have written a lot now. If you find any typos, just tell me where they are, and I will correct them. After all, the typos were written by me. Under the inertial thinking, it is difficult for me to find them when I check... It's up to you! Readers and fathers, come on! !

After looking at the table of contents, I found that Chapter 140 is followed by Chapter 1401 and Chapter 1402. Isn't it Chapter 141 and Chapter 142? 🤔

Didn't he say that he wanted to prevent the tragedy and prevent Kuina from dying? How could he run out to sea after gaining strength??? Also, when I saw joining the navy, I gave up immediately and withdrew first.

How to put it, although the description of Koushiro in the original One Piece text is mostly based on Zoro's memories. But it feels like it's impossible to do something like killing people after just cutting them at the beginning. Of course, it is normal for the author to make some modifications based on the original work. I just feel strangely uncomfortable with this kind of character collapse. Complain about it and feel good. The author should not take it to heart🤭

I was just talking about how this book is so familiar, even the beginning is the same, the super card system. The author is imitating this book, eh, imitating? Learn from it? The setting and opening chapters are almost the same, but the writing is so bad that I lost it because that book was so popular...

After walking for a long time with my girlfriend in my arms, my hands are already freezing (manual funny)

There are so many typos. Now that I am reading Chapter 10, I have found at least ten typos.

I think the shortcomings of this book are that IQ is too low, abilities cannot be used properly, even if the Devil Fruit is stolen, How mentally retarded do you have to be like this? I really can't accept this kind of low-IQ protagonist. The protagonist doesn't lock the door when he sleeps? Forget it, I'm not alert even when I'm sleeping. It's too exaggerated. Let's just talk about myself. I can stay half-asleep while sleeping, and someone will notice it. The protagonist cannot do this in the world of One Piece. Fortunately, he has practiced.

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Having swollen eyes is a trivial matter, but making readers happy is the most important thing in the world. You have to sacrifice your little self to fulfill your greater self. Manual dog head

Why not summon the drawn characters?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

You don't need to be domineering when facing Caribou. The obvious weakness of Swamp Fruit is ice, so Sode Shirayuki can cut him.