Chen Cang

This is a book review I wrote on the post bar Chen Cang Writing: two and a half stars Creativity: two and a half stars Plot: three and a half stars Summary: The writing is smooth but not outstanding. It can be seen that I wanted to write a supporting role with a story but failed to fully develop it. You can give it a little more pen and ink, don't be impatient. The plot is tight and cliché, but it's well-written and enjoyable. The title of the book is too simple. This is no longer the time four or five years ago. Nowadays, long names and fun are popular. No one thinks it is normal, but I support you to keep going and keep your heart. The Yingying monster is indeed a drama, but fortunately, it can actually be replaced with something else. Don't make fun of it just for the sake of making fun of it! Poison point: half star (Yingying monster comes into play) Positioning: fairy grass seedlings A few more suggestions: 1. Since the Yingying monster's stalk has been thrown out, it cannot be taken back. Instead of avoiding it, it is better to find a way to use it and develop it into a foreshadowing. 2. Many things are not explained, which is okay. This is also the case in many books by great masters, but! It is not easy to write the stories and feelings in your mind into a book well. I think the greatest charm of writing is that it not only gives people a broad space for imagination but also guides people's thinking to follow the author's path. This requires writing power, and ordinary new authors often do not have enough writing power to support their ideas. To be honest, if the writing power of this book can be improved by two levels, it will undoubtedly be a magical book. The author's ingenious design can be seen in the plot and characters. There is no suggestion in these two aspects, but the writing power needs more efforts. There are no shortcuts in this regard, either you have to gain talent or write more. 3. The title of the book should be longer. There is no need to imitate current hot works because the style is different. It only needs one or two bright spots to attract readers to click in. A good title is really important to a book. I have read many good books, but they were lost among others because their titles were too low. This is a lesson learned from the past! That's about it, I hope it can be of some help.

Those who don't have a bar come and support sitting 😁

Come on! Someone will definitely watch it!

I haven't even started yet, let's vent my anger, write well, and become a god.

I came here without a bar, come on! Stick to your heart and be happy!

Support😁😁

300 Collected, come on

Author, why does Wang Yue insist on the protagonist being his attendant? Do you think he is easy to bully?

It's not on the shelves yet, so you can't subscribe~ I've added a bookshelf for you

I've read three chapters and I unanimously support it. Come on!

I haven't watched it yet, but I'll vote for it.

It's not good to be too frivolous, it's just a matter of thousands of miles away. You will lose it

Come on ✊

My book is useless! Don't spend money! Don't subscribe, I'm mixing up the word count! Thank you!

It was quite interesting, but I didn't write much at the end. I hope the author will continue writing. The beginning was a bit of a waste material, and I almost didn't read it. The rest was pretty good.

Just give up? 😢😢Such a good book! ... Forget it, this is the author's big choice, and I have nothing to say. However, can the author not write about stallions and Mary Sues in his next book? Is it okay to only write about those who cultivate immortality? Is it okay to have a confidante but not a heroine in the end? 🥺🥺🥺

Why don't you write it? The writing is so good, but I just gave up on it. Well

No matter how you feel about your writing, that's just your feeling. What matters is how the readers feel about your writing. For example, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality wrote three to four hundred thousand words before signing the contract. Even after signing the contract, he was barely making ends meet. If he were like you, there would be Mao, the originator of Mortal Cultivation.

No eunuch, wait for me for two days!

That's enough, that's enough, this book is in the works, don't support it anymore, I'm waiting for you in the new book!

Why don't you write it? I have read novels for more than ten years. You, Chen Cang, can definitely become a god after finishing this book. Why did you give up? I can't help you decide. Alas, it's hard to find a good book. I can only fantasize about the follow-up. Haha Come on, but I am not educated enough, otherwise I would like to write it.

Beloved disciple, Xiuer🤭🤭

Happy New Year! It's the New Year. After dinner, shower, finish homework and receive red envelopes, I feel so happy (>^ω^<) Mommada╭(╯ε╰)╮ Happy New Year from the author

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง keep working hard

I would like to ask if the protagonist is the kind of person who is lonely and carefree, has no contact with anyone, and only pursues cultivation and immortality?

The author should not put the effort into writing such abusive articles. . No one likes to see it

This book is written very much like a fairy. Will there be a fourth step to reach the sky? ?

The book is a good book. The author listened to my advice and put all his thoughts on this book. After writing it, I have been a bookworm for twelve years. I can't finish the book that I can read. Now that I have finished reading it during the free period, I dare not subscribe because I am afraid that you will be a eunuch. The writing is really good. I don't mean to praise you, it is really good. You have to know how many books at the beginning became popular after they reached 500,000 words, or even 1 million words. If you keep writing, I guarantee you, you will gain something you didn't expect. If you start a new book, there is a high chance that it will be like this one. It is neither popular nor popular at the beginning, and you have to spend more energy to manage it. In the end, the only result may be to give up writing the book. .

The beginning must be attractive. I hope the author will not waste material and be innovative. I hope the next book will be good. I think this book is good.